Muje kayed kar le apni bahon me.........!!!!MIRU

by Miru;;;; on January 14, 2013, 12:56:10 PM
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MAI TERI AANKHO KE KAZAL KA NOOR HU,
    MAI TERI SAPANO KE CHADAR KA JAGEER HU,

MUJHE KAYED KAR LE APNI BAHON ME,
    MAI TERI ZINDAGI KE RAHON KA RAHGEER HU,

KISNE KAHA KI TU DOOR HAI MUJHASE,JUDAA HAI MUJHASE,
    APNE DIL ME JHAK,MAI TERE DIL KA SAVEER HU,

AANG AANG ME BAHTI LAHU,TERI SAANSO SE NIKALATA SAANS HU,
    PAGAL KAHTI HAI AB MUJHE DUNIYA,TERE JISM KI MAI JAAN HU,

MUJHE KAYED KAR LE APNI BAHON ME,
MAI TERI ZINDAGI KE RAHON KA SARA JAHAN HU,......!!!!!!MIRU

 


 
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«Reply #1 on: January 14, 2013, 12:58:55 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #2 on: January 14, 2013, 01:22:07 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 14, 2013, 02:34:44 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2013, 04:41:52 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2013, 05:51:37 PM »
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Nice creation Miru ji. Please also read the following:
If you are sharing your own work then give atleast 24 hour gap before posting new one, this way you will give people time to respond and comment on your poetry properly,
Reference : http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/submit-your-poetry-now-show-to-world-p9.html
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«Reply #6 on: January 14, 2013, 07:36:32 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob
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