Mujh ko lagtaa hai, paas wasl ki gharhee aayee!!

by abdbundeli on October 24, 2008, 05:14:56 PM
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Ba'ad muddat key, unhain aaj meyree yaad aayee!
Payaam ley key, meyrey simt bahee purbaayee,
Saath mein jis key khushboo-e-badan thee pahichaanee,
Mujh ko lagtaa hai, paas wasl ki gharhee aayee!!

                                - abd bundeli

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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2008, 05:30:20 PM »
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 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Abd ji...
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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2008, 05:44:39 PM »
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Thanks alt honeyrose ji!
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2008, 11:26:27 AM »
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Ba'ad muddat key, unhain aaj meyree yaad aayee!
Payaam ley key, meyrey simt bahee purbaayee,
Saath mein jis key khushboo-e-badan thee pahichaanee,
Mujh ko lagtaa hai, paas wasl ki gharhee aayee!!

                                - abd bundeli



Bahoot Khooob ABD JI
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2008, 05:05:00 AM »
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Thanks Rajesh Harish ji!
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2008, 02:44:19 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob abd ji......... Applause Applause Applause
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2008, 03:03:24 PM »
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Tanha(Saurabh) ji!
     Thanks a lot!
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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2008, 04:32:48 PM »
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Ba'ad muddat key, unhain aaj meyree yaad aayee!
Payaam ley key, meyrey simt bahee purbaayee,
Saath mein jis key khushboo-e-badan thee pahichaanee,
Mujh ko lagtaa hai, paas wasl ki gharhee aayee!!

                                - abd bundeli


Kya baat hai Abd ji, apni baat ko baRi hunarmandi se kaha hai aap ne, bohot achhi fikr hai lekin agar aap teesre misra' ko yoN kaheN to wazn bhi baaqi rehta hai aur paRhne meN bhi aasaani hoti hai
"Saath meN jis key thee khushboo-e-badan pahichaanee".
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2008, 05:19:59 PM »
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Ghulam Haider ji,
Shukriyah! Achchhaa sujhaaw hai! Waisey mein jaisaa, likhtey waqt gungunaahat key saath nikaltaa hai, waisaa hi likh deytaa hoon! Eik baar fir sey gungunaaiyegaa (with a continued fluency)aap ko jaisaa likhaa gayaa hai, waisaa bhi ma'aqool lageygaa! ASLEE SHAAYARI KAHEEN UUPAR SEY UTARTEE HAI, aur dil-o-dimaag sey hotee huyee, galey sey baahar aatee hai, us sey ziyaadah chheyrh-chaarh naheen ki jaaye, tabhi mazah aataa hai!
               - abd bundeli
                                             
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2008, 05:10:23 AM »
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nice lines Abd ji
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2008, 09:54:28 AM »
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Thanks a lot, Pooja ji!
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