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Mujh per barsana hai toh amrit ki tarah barso
ki ab khaali barssat ke badal se payaas nahi bujhati
jeene ki aas mein thakane lagi hai zindagi ki raat
ab sirf tujhe dekhne se payaas nahi bujhati
pyaar ke lafaz sajane lage hain fir se dil ke kore kagaz per
ab sirf yun hi baato se dil ki baat nahi banati
nayano se chalakane lage hain pyaar ke payaale
yeh ishq ki aag ab sirf kisi jabaat se nahi bujhati
milne do ab do rooho ko kuch aaj is tarah
ki yeh ab intazaar ki ghadi kaate se nahi katati
chhoo lo apne dekhake labo se tum saaya bhi hamara
ki aaj yeh baarish ki boonde amrit mein hain dhal sakati
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2006, 10:09:44 AM » |
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Mujh per barsana hai toh amrit ki tarah barso
ki ab khaali barssat ke badal se payaas nahi bujhati
jeene ki aas mein thakane lagi hai zindagi ki raat
ab sirf tujhe dekhne se payaas nahi bujhati
pyaar ke lafaz sajane lage hain fir se dil ke kore kagaz per
ab sirf yun hi baato se dil ki baat nahi banati
nayano se chalakane lage hain pyaar ke payaale
yeh ishq ki aag ab sirf kisi jabaat se nahi bujhati
milne do ab do rooho ko kuch aaj is tarah
ki yeh ab intazaar ki ghadi kaate se nahi katati
chhoo lo apne dekhake labo se tum saaya bhi hamara
ki aaj yeh baarish ki boonde amrit mein hain dhal sakati wah ranju ji aapki shayari padhkar lagta hai bhala itna sunder koi kaise likh sakta hai .. marvellous work!!!!!! |
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2006, 10:12:42 AM » |
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woooo very nice.....
barasti hai barsat banke tamna meri
ahoo ki kasam bahut payasi ha zameen meri
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2006, 10:14:21 AM » |
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wah vikas ji aap bhi aa gaye bahut khoob......
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2006, 10:20:08 AM » |
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lol..... shukriya Gesu....... Aap bhi to hai yahan....
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2006, 10:20:50 AM » |
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Seep (shell) per barsein jab nirmal boondein,
Ban jaaye moti jinse bante gehne,
Tumhe barasna ho to barasna us oss ki boondh ki tarah,
Jiski pyaas ko har gulab ki pankhuri tarse,
Barasna ho to is tarah barso jaise jis tarah
Banjarr bhoomi barsaat ko tarse,
Bheeg jaaon mein is tarah dilbar
Ke harr rang mere ang mein indradhanush sa chamke.......
gesu's koshish!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2006, 10:21:20 AM » |
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shukriya Gesu ...Vikas bahut khoob ...
is pyaar ki sukhi jameen per jab bhi padi hai tere pyaar ki phooaare
dil mein ek duhan sa utha aur ek chingaari si badan mein bhar gayi
liya jab bhi naam hamara tumne beqarar ho ke
ek tamana si mere dil mein fir se machal gayi
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2006, 10:23:45 AM » |
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kaya batt hai bahut khoob......
na jane kyo aa jatio hai hariyali
jab bhi barasti hai boonde
registan bhi hare ho jate hai
jab barstai hai yeh aankhe....
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«Reply #8 on: August 21, 2006, 10:28:56 AM » |
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wah wah vikas ji ranju ji bahut khoob.......
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«Reply #9 on: August 21, 2006, 10:32:34 AM » |
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Gesu JI bahut acche. bahut khoob...
and thanks.......
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2006, 10:56:51 AM » |
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wah gesu ...vikas too good .......
tere pyaar ke saaye mein rehna chahte hain
aur sanam hum tujhse kya chahate hain
ghir rahe hai mere saaye tere hi vajood mein
apni har saans tujh per warana chahate hain
de de mujhe apne pyaar ki panhaa
bas tere liye ab jeena chahate hain
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«Reply #11 on: August 22, 2006, 05:21:03 AM » |
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jab nikal raha thaa chand neele aanchal mein
dil mein sajan ke aane ki umeed jag rahi thee
mehek rahi thee hawa ek madmast khusbu se
aur ek kali si lajaati apne piya ke milan ko taras rahi thee
gusu mein chamakate moti sittaaro ka gumaan de rahe rahe they
laal jode mein saji gori ke labo per milan ki hansi chamak rahi thee
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«Reply #12 on: August 22, 2006, 06:54:12 AM » |
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jab nikal raha thaa chand neele aanchal mein
dil mein sajan ke aane ki umeed jag rahi thee
mehek rahi thee hawa ek madmast khusbu se
aur ek kali si lajaati apne piya ke milan ko taras rahi thee
gusu mein chamakate moti sittaaro ka gumaan de rahe rahe they
laal jode mein saji gori ke labo per milan ki hansi chamak rahi thee wah ranju ji aapka to jawaab nahi harr shayari ek se badhkar ek........  |
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«Reply #13 on: August 22, 2006, 06:58:29 AM » |
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Ranju, Gesu, Vikas
Very nice !
Keep it up !
Rajbir
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«Reply #14 on: August 22, 2006, 11:46:03 AM » |
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shukriya bhai jaan hausla afzaayi ka shukriya.......
aap is police ki gaadhi se zara hamare mehboob ko pakadh kar to laayiye...fir umr qaid de dijiyehum dono ko......... kar sakte hain kya!!!!!!!! :lol: :lol:
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