**~*Mujhe Baahon Mein Bikhar Jaane Do**~*

by *~*Pakeezah Aanchal*~* on March 23, 2007, 06:17:30 AM
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pyaar bhare jazbaaton ki syaahi ko kalam mein bhar ke laayi hoon...manchale aur kuch chulbule ehsaas ka saath hai....umeed hai meri yeh koshish aapko pasand ayegi....aap sabhi apna khyaal rakhiyega...khush rahiye,aabaad rahiye!
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Mujhe baahon mein bikhar jaane do
Apni mushkabaar saason se mehek jaane do

Dil machalta hai aur saans rukti hai,
Ab toh seene mein aaj mujhe utar aane do
Apni mushkabaar saason se mehek jaane do

Shokh nazron ko sharm aati hai,
Thartharaate hue labon ko chain paane do
Apni mushkabaar saason se mehek jaane do

Raat tanha hai aur sard mausam hai,
Shola-e-ehsaas ko ab aur bhadak jaane do
Apni mushkabaar saason se mehek jaane do

Behke hain hum fizaa jo behki hai,
Dil ko dil ruh ko ruh mein sama jaane do
Apni mushkabaar saason se mehek jaane do

Bikhre gesu hain bikhra kaajal hai,
Haule haule is shab ko tum guzar jane do
Apni mushkabaar saason se mehek jaane do

Abhi aur bhi armaan dil me baaki hai,
Yuhin baahon mein is raat ko kat jaane do
Apni mushkabaar saason se mehek jaane do

Mujhe baahon mein bikhar jaane do
Apni mushkabaar saason se mehek jaane do

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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2007, 06:24:25 AM »
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Mind Blowing...Excellent...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jaadu nahi koi yeh....
Na hee koi Nasha hai.....

Jo kar le kuch Gasht.....
Tere Ashiyaane ke.....

Wahi Shaks.....
Teri deewanagi me badla hai.....

Arzzo na likhe koi na hee koi Kismat ka likha hai.....
Bas fisal jaati hai Kalam hamari bhi Naam se aapke....

Warna Badnaam ko likhne se sirf jeene ka hausla hee mila hai....!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2007, 08:22:36 AM »
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Pakeezah Aanchal ji

Bahut khoob =D> =D> =D>

Welcome to Yoindia :D

Gaurav bro

Nice reply :wink:
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2007, 09:55:22 AM »
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waah kya jawaab hai aapka badnaam shayar sahab...
aapne meri peshkash ko tareef ke kaabil samjha yeh jaanke dil ko khushi hui..yuhin aapse raabta bana rahe yahi khwaaish hai.Allah Nigehbaan!
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2007, 09:57:01 AM »
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rajbir sahab..

aapko yahan dekhke khushi hui.yuhin hausla afzai karte rahiyega.khyaal rakhiyega!
Allah nigehbaan!
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2007, 10:06:56 AM »
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awesome  poetry  Pakeezah...........nice  reply  Gaurav..... ur  welcome to Yoindia ........
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*~*Pakeezah Aanchal*~*
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2007, 10:10:16 AM »
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thanks for ur sweet welcome and thank u once again for appreciating my feelings!hope to c u again!
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2007, 10:22:35 AM »
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Pakeezah, Welcome to Yoindia Usual Smile

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem with us..its one of my favourite poems. Keep writing Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2007, 10:36:22 AM »
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my dear talat..yes this is a old poem of mine..its alwaz a pleasure to share my work here.im sure u must have read this poem on shayri.net...nice to know that its one of ur favorites..thanks for your comment...

farhana!
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2007, 10:48:59 AM »
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Farhana ji

Kuch aur bhi to likhiye ab :D
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2007, 11:05:35 AM »
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jaise kya rajbir???

naya sunna chahte hain toh aapko lamba intezaar karna padega....kyunki purane kalaamon ka stock itna hai ke naye post karne ki baari aane me waqt lagega.... Usual Smile aur phir is site pe har kisine mere purane peshkashon ko padha nahi hai Usual Smile hai ke nahi rajbir sahab!take care
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2007, 11:21:28 AM »
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Farhana

Aap apne poorane kalaam he sunaiye ! Humare liye to woh bhi naye he honge :D
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2007, 11:28:50 AM »
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rajbir sahab...itne bhi naye nahi lagenge mere old kalaams aapko..kyunki copy pasters ki badaulat mere kalaam alag alag naamon se kayi sites pe maujood hain:(

its hard to give explanations about your own work everytime u go on to sum new websites as the people on new shayri sites dont know you alwaz sad5

having a tuf time here sadly coz of this.anywaz tk cr
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2007, 12:01:34 PM »
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You are most welcome Farhana to write your work here. Its unfortunate that people do copy paste and original writers have to suffer sad5
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«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2007, 02:33:27 PM »
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wah kay abaat hai Anchal bahoot hi acha likha hai.... Apka Yoindia mai sawagat hai?
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