Mujhko lagtaa hai, kahin chaand to nahin ho tum?

by abdbundeli on February 18, 2011, 09:44:24 PM
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Ugtey sooraj ko deykh, jab bhi deykhtaa hun tumhain:
Mujhko lagtaa hai, kahin chaand to nahin ho tum!!

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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2011, 11:21:06 AM »
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nice lines abd ji...
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2011, 11:31:30 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2011, 11:38:48 AM »
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Ugtey sooraj ko deykh, jab bhi deykhtaa hun tumhain:
Mujhko lagtaa hai, kahin chaand to nahin ho tum!!

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Nice One .... Bundeli Sahab !
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2011, 12:54:25 PM »
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bahut abdhiya abd ji...

dhers aari daad~
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2011, 02:35:13 PM »
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nice lines abd ji...

Shukriyah, 'manzil' ji!

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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2011, 02:36:17 PM »
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Shukriyah, 'manjum' ji!

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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2011, 02:37:19 PM »
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Nice One .... Bundeli Sahab !

Shukriyah, Anshumali ji!

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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2011, 02:38:23 PM »
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bahut abdhiya abd ji...
dhers aari daad~

Shukriyah, Abhi bhai!

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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2011, 11:24:22 PM »
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Sirji aapke alfaazon ke taalmel bahut bahut kamaal hote hain.
kamaal ke lines ji.
umda lines ko dil se daad  .
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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2011, 02:14:51 PM »
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Sirji aapke alfaazon ke taalmel bahut bahut kamaal hote hain.
kamaal ke lines ji.
umda lines ko dil se daad  .
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thanx
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Dhanyawaad Nirala ji! Aap ki khushee sey mujhey bhi khushee  hai! Aapkaa swaagat hai!

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«Reply #11 on: February 20, 2011, 07:32:18 PM »
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Nice Line Abd JI
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«Reply #12 on: February 20, 2011, 08:20:28 PM »
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Nice Line Abd JI
Shukriyah Rishi ji!

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