mujhme baki hai ....

by tushar_4u_im on August 23, 2006, 04:46:49 PM
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rahe hai sunsaan magar .....
teri aahat sunai deti hai .....
her taraf aandhera hai ...
magar tu dekhai deti hai .....
badrang ho chuki duniya magar ....
teri khushboo aabhi baki hai ....
hai tu mujhse door magar....
teri sanse mujhme baki hai....
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sweet_raabii
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2006, 07:19:51 PM »
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adding lines,

hai tu mujh se door magar
teri saanse mujh mein baki hai
tere ane ki umeed ne ab bhi
mere dil ki duniya basa rakhi hai
teri sulagti howi yaadoon ne
pyaar ki shama jala rakhi hai
judai ka mousam hai mehmaan
adhere ke baad saweira hona baki hai..... Puzzled !


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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2006, 07:27:00 PM »
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Superb Jugalbandi Tushar and Rabbi Sweet ji Usual Smile
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2006, 08:05:26 PM »
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Tushi, Raabii

Bahut khoob !

Aree wah ab to Raabii bhi regularly khumar mein likhne lagi hain :D

Keep going !

Rajbir
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2006, 03:48:47 AM »
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tere aane ki aas mai
maine saanso ki door thame rakhi hai
tu aayegi zaroor mere paas ek roz
issi aas main khuda pe yakeen baaki hai.....
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2006, 04:03:35 AM »
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rahe hai sunsaan magar .....
teri aahat sunai deti hai .....
her taraf aandhera hai ...
magar tu dekhai deti hai .....
badrang ho chuki duniya magar ....
teri khushboo aabhi baki hai ....
hai tu mujhse door magar....
teri sanse mujhme baki hai....


har aahat per bas raha teri hi dekhi hai
teri har chahat mein maine apni chahat dekhi hai
main anjaan nahi hun tere dil ke jajbaato se
maine teri har geet main apne dil ki dharkan dekhi hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2006, 03:10:16 PM »
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Quote from: "sweet_raabii"

adding lines,

hai tu mujh se door magar
teri saanse mujh mein baki hai
tere ane ki umeed ne ab bhi
mere dil ki duniya basa rakhi hai
teri sulagti howi yaadoon ne
pyaar ki shama jala rakhi hai
judai ka mousam hai mehmaan
adhere ke baad saweira hona baki hai..... Puzzled !



thx rabbi tax ranju thx uncle,thx vikas thx badnaam


me also edit this one again

sawara hau wo aaye or milker humse chal diya ....
humne kaha kuch pal to ruk deedarr aabhi baki hai .....
dil hai mera dooba dooba aankhe bhi hai nashe me khoi hui....
hosh aane de mujhe k sawera pura baki hai .....
her dharkan her sans k sans tu hi zehan me machalti hai ......
pyar hua hai aabhi suru pura hona aabhi baki hai .....
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2006, 04:54:31 PM »
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sawara hau wo aaye or milker humse chal diya ....
humne kaha kuch pal to ruk deedarr aabhi baki hai .....
dil hai mera dooba dooba aankhe bhi hai nashe me khoi hui....
hosh aane de mujhe k sawera pura baki hai .....
her dharkan her sans k sans tu hi zehan me machalti hai ......
pyar hua hai aabhi suru pura hona aabhi baki hai .....


wah wah wah bahut achaa.......Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2006, 01:55:35 PM »
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basti ki taraf dekha to waha roshni thi ....
dekha jab ghar aapne to paya chandni hai yaha....
bus sitaro ki kami kuch baki thi ....
nikla jab dosto ki galiyo me to wokami bhi hui puri meri....
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2006, 02:58:26 PM »
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rahe hai sunsaan magar .....
teri aahat sunai deti hai .....
her taraf aandhera hai ...
magar tu dekhai deti hai .....
badrang ho chuki duniya magar ....
teri khushboo aabhi baki hai ....
hai tu mujhse door magar....
teri sanse mujhme baki hai....


very nice Tushar...

yeh maana ke tum pehle jaise nahi rahe
tumhara ravaiya badal gaya hai
magar aaj bhi mere dil mei tumhare liye pyar baaki hai
yeh to kismat ki baat hai jo badal gaye hain haalat
magar abhi mere dil ka badalna baaki hai
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2006, 04:30:45 PM »
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Gud Going everyone Usual Smile
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nikki
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«Reply #11 on: September 02, 2006, 03:17:29 PM »
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thank u B_S
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Talat
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«Reply #12 on: September 02, 2006, 04:28:23 PM »
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Tushar Raabi..Ranju di...Nikki....very nice !!
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #13 on: September 03, 2006, 03:40:18 PM »
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naam le le kar tera .....
kat jati hai na jane kitni rate....
aakas sunta hu na jane kitne logo ki aawaz ....
magar yaad aati hai sirf teri hi bate.....
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