Mujhse Roothkar Kaha Jaaoge "Khwaish"

by khwaish on March 02, 2011, 05:23:47 PM
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Yuh Na Mujhse Nazrein Mila!!
Meri Hi Khata Ho jaise

Zindagi Tujh Bin jeena
 Ek Saza Ho jaise

Kuch Tabiyat Hi Mili Hai Aisi Humein!!
 Log kehte Hai!!!!
"Yaar" Tum Dard Ki Koi Dawa Ho Jaise

Mera Kisi Ko Dekhkar Muskurana,
Yuh Qehar Dha Gaya!!!!
Inn Aankhon Mein Ek Gehra Nasha Ho jaise

Mujhse Yuh Nazare
Naa Ab Phero Tum!!!
Kuch Naa Tumhe Pata Ho Jaise

Meri Har Saans Mein Naam Tumhaara Hai!!!
Mere Liye Tum,
Rang Laayi Hui Koi Dua Ho Jaise

Mujhse Roothkar Kaha Jaaoge Eh Mere Humnasheen!!!
Hum Humesha Saath Rahenge,
Yehi Khuda Ki Raza Ho Jaise...

          love9 love9 love9 Khwaish love9 love9 love9
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 05:38:09 PM »
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bahot khoob khwaish ji.....

"Mujhse Yuh Nazare
Naa Ab Phero Tum!!!
Kuch Naa Tumhe Pata Ho Jaise"

is para ne to jaan hi nikal di..

......just ultimate and mindblowing......ese hi hum logo ko aachi aachi poetry padne ka moka dete rahiyega.....once again congrats and thx for sharing this poetry....
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 05:39:35 PM »
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Har ek Jumla Behad Pyaar Se likha hai aapne Khwaish Bhai.. Bahut Khubsoorati se aapne Jazzbaaton Ko Lafzon me Utaara Hai.. Mohabbat Bhare Yeh Ashaar Dil Tak Utar Gaye bhai.. Bahut Khooob.. Applause Applause

Dil Se Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2011, 05:44:28 PM »
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bahot khoob khwaish ji.....

"Mujhse Yuh Nazare
Naa Ab Phero Tum!!!
Kuch Naa Tumhe Pata Ho Jaise"

is para ne to jaan hi nikal di..

......just ultimate and mindblowing......ese hi hum logo ko aachi aachi poetry padne ka moka dete rahiyega.....once again congrats and thx for sharing this poetry....

Aapka Tehhhhhhh Dillllllll Se Shukriya Uthkarshji..Jo AAPNE iSS kadar Saraha..Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega.. icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2011, 06:50:06 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht hi mast likha hai khwaish ji aapne..excellent ji...

 angel11 angel11 angel11

Mere hokar bhi har pal mujhse dur rahe tum
Mujhe di gunahon ki tumne koi saza ho jaise

Dekhte rahe dur se hi par  kabhi paas na aaye
Chakor chaand ko chandni raaton me takta ho jaise

Meri muskurahut se hi aati hai tere hothon me hasi
Main tere liye hi ab sab dard bhulakar hasti hun jaise

Khyalon me bhi kabhi judaai ka tasavvur aata hai to
Main tadap uthti hun jal bin koi machhli ho jaise

Har bar Rub se fariyaad karte hue muskura leti hun
Meri duaon me tera naam sun jahaan muskurata ho jaise…!!!

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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2011, 07:51:47 PM »
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wwwwaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh anamika ji kya baat he........

apke jawab ne is post me char chand laga diye.........jis rythm me apka jawab he uski tarif ke liye shabd nahi mere paas.........

bahot hi khubsurat andaj me reply he........
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2011, 07:56:39 PM »
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heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
kitne waqt baad aapne meri kahi kisi baat ki aise tareef ki hai.......i m dancinggggg.....thnx rajaji......thnx alot jiiiiiiii
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«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2011, 08:01:05 PM »
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heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
kitne waqt baad aapne meri kahi kisi baat ki aise tareef ki hai.......i m dancinggggg.....thnx rajaji......thnx alot jiiiiiiii

anamika ji apne ajib baat kar di aaj......

wese me quote karta nahi per aabhi karna pada kyuki apko yaad rahe ki apne jo shikayat ki he wo sahi he ya nahi........

to madam ji ek kaam kijiyega ki apke replies jaha bhi ho waha ek baar jakar chk kijiyega.........apki shikayat aur galatfahmi dur ho jayegi........ek baat aur yakinan aajkal aap bht jayda bsy he iska muje yakin ho gaya he.............baki me baad me apse baat karta hu.........
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2011, 08:09:54 PM »
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Kuch Tabiyat Hi Mili Hai Aisi Humein!!
Log kehte Hai!!!!
"Khwaish" Tum Dard Ki Koi Dawa Ho Jaise

Mujhse Yuh Nazare
Naa Ab Phero Tum!!!
Kuch Naa Tumhe Pata Ho Jaise


Very Impressive ... Very Touching ....... Khwaish Ji !

dil se daad hazir hai ... qubuul farmaayeN ... !!  Applause Applause Applause

yunhi likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !!!

duaaoN ke saath ... !!!!

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«Reply #9 on: March 02, 2011, 08:19:04 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht hi mast likha hai khwaish ji aapne..excellent ji...

 angel11 angel11 angel11

Mere hokar bhi har pal mujhse dur rahe tum
Mujhe di gunahon ki tumne koi saza ho jaise

Dekhte rahe dur se hi par  kabhi paas na aaye
Chakor chaand ko chandni raaton me takta ho jaise

Meri muskurahut se hi aati hai tere hothon me hasi
Main tere liye hi ab sab dard bhulakar hasti hun jaise

Khyalon me bhi kabhi judaai ka tasavvur aata hai to
Main tadap uthti hun jal bin koi machhli ho jaise

Har bar Rub se fariyaad karte hue muskura leti hun
Meri duaon me tera naam sun jahaan muskurata ho jaise…!!!


Ahaaaaa!! Dil khush kar Diya Aapke Jawaab Ne..

Bahuttttttttttt bahutttttttt Khoob Anuji..

very Sweeeeet Words Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #10 on: March 02, 2011, 08:26:15 PM »
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bahot khoob khwaish ji.....

"Mujhse Yuh Nazare
Naa Ab Phero Tum!!!
Kuch Naa Tumhe Pata Ho Jaise"

is para ne to jaan hi nikal di..

......just ultimate and mindblowing......ese hi hum logo ko aachi aachi poetry padne ka moka dete rahiyega.....once again congrats and thx for sharing this poetry....


Aapka tehhhhhhhhh dillll Se Dhanyawad Uthkarshji..Mujhe ab aapke comments ki aadat ho gayi hai..humesha yuhi saathd ete rahiyega..aapka bahut abhut shukriya icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: March 02, 2011, 08:46:08 PM »
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Kya ab reply karna idhar.
saare ek se badhkar ek dhamaal ho yaar.
kya khumaar hai ishq Khwaish ji--
bada gazabb karte hai nazron se
zara raham bhi krdo ab sarkaar
hain wo behaal kab se dekhiye na
aapko kuch pta hi nhi ho jaise---!!
naadaan na baniye jaankar bhi--
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ab kamaal ye hai ki mai kuch bhi likh dalta hu bina soche samjhe--
bura sura lage to -- maafi do ya na do aapke upar hai.Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: March 02, 2011, 09:42:40 PM »
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Waah ji waah ik din wich do alag alag ehsas tuade lafza wich pahke bahut acha lageya..take care..
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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2011, 12:58:58 AM »
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Bahut Khub Khwaish JI Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: March 03, 2011, 11:22:39 AM »
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absolutely mindblowing khwaish ji....
bht bht khoob....
i lyk last one alot......
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