MUL YARRI DA.....???

by Naya_Daur on December 15, 2005, 12:28:37 PM
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Yaari laun wele na sochya si,yaari  laun da painda mul loko.....!
koi yaari piche jind waar deve,koi  paise te janda dul loko.....!
koi marda kise di surat te,koi khenda ishq hai bhul loko.....!
yaarian laniya nahi sokhiyan ne,banda janda kakkhaan waang rul loko.....!
yaari launi us nu pugdi,jehda kandiyan nu manda phul loko.....!
lahu laave jehda ehna butyan nu,usey bute nu lagde phul loko.....!!.
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2005, 07:54:44 AM »
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Yaari laun wele na sochya si,yaari  laun da painda mul loko.....!
koi yaari piche jind waar deve,koi  paise te janda dul loko.....!
koi marda kise di surat te,koi khenda ishq hai bhul loko.....!
yaarian laniya nahi sokhiyan ne,banda janda kakkhaan waang rul loko.....!
yaari launi us nu pugdi,jehda kandiyan nu manda phul loko.....!
lahu laave jehda ehna butyan nu,usey bute nu lagde phul loko.....!!.

very nice mr..........keep it up...
and good luck
bye
(aap itne achay shayer hain....iss ka akhir raaz kia hai.....)
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2005, 09:34:06 AM »
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ha ha ,, acchha shayar,,,!!!!
shayd tusi next two msg tu aandaaza laga loge
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2005, 09:34:35 AM »
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Rooth gaya hai mujh ko manane wala,
ab koi nahi naaz mera uthane wala,
jane kaya sochta hai yeh khula darwaza,
shayad rasta bhool gaya hai koi(aap jaisa)aane wala.
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2005, 09:37:27 AM »
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Jithe zindagi da koi matlab nahi,
         us jagah te aan khlow gaye aan..
         Asin bachde bachde kandian to
         phullan ton zakhmi ho gaye aan ...
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2005, 09:40:03 AM »
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and read my signature toooo,,,
anyways,, thanks for replying my postsssss
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«Reply #6 on: July 01, 2006, 10:30:41 PM »
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Yaari laun wele na sochya si,yaari  laun da painda mul loko.....!
koi yaari piche jind waar deve,koi  paise te janda dul loko.....!
koi marda kise di surat te,koi khenda ishq hai bhul loko.....!
yaarian laniya nahi sokhiyan ne,banda janda kakkhaan waang rul loko.....!
yaari launi us nu pugdi,jehda kandiyan nu manda phul loko.....!
lahu laave jehda ehna butyan nu,usey bute nu lagde phul loko.....!!.


wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob,,,, magar apko apni punjabi posts sari punjabi section mai move kar leni chahiye....

last teo poems bhi bahoot achi likhi hai apne
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2006, 01:17:23 AM »
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Yaari laun wele na sochya si,yaari  laun da painda mul loko.....!
koi yaari piche jind waar deve,koi  paise te janda dul loko.....!
koi marda kise di surat te,koi khenda ishq hai bhul loko.....!
yaarian laniya nahi sokhiyan ne,banda janda kakkhaan waang rul loko.....!
yaari launi us nu pugdi,jehda kandiyan nu manda phul loko.....!
lahu laave jehda ehna butyan nu,usey bute nu lagde phul loko.....!!.


wah kaya baat hai.... bahoot khoob,,,, magar apko apni punjabi posts sari punjabi section mai move kar leni chahiye....

last teo poems bhi bahoot achi likhi hai apne


App kar do move...yeh mera area nahi hai..... iss area ki lady don aap ho tongue3
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«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2006, 06:16:42 AM »
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ji waqai achcha likhaten hain aap chahe punjabi ho ya hindi  likhne ka hamesha andaz  vahi hai  .........
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2006, 03:52:29 AM »
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ji waqai achcha likhaten hain aap chahe punjabi ho ya hindi  likhne ka hamesha andaz  vahi hai  .........


Sukriya ji...  :D
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2006, 04:26:09 AM »
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Yaari laun wele na sochya si,yaari  laun da painda mul loko.....!
koi yaari piche jind waar deve,koi  paise te janda dul loko.....!
koi marda kise di surat te,koi khenda ishq hai bhul loko.....!
yaarian laniya nahi sokhiyan ne,banda janda kakkhaan waang rul loko.....!
yaari launi us nu pugdi,jehda kandiyan nu manda phul loko.....!
lahu laave jehda ehna butyan nu,usey bute nu lagde phul loko.....!!.


Jeeyo mere laaal jeeyo...kya baat kahi hai.... :wink:
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2006, 07:09:17 PM »
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Yaari laun wele na sochya si,yaari  laun da painda mul loko.....!
koi yaari piche jind waar deve,koi  paise te janda dul loko.....!
koi marda kise di surat te,koi khenda ishq hai bhul loko.....!
yaarian laniya nahi sokhiyan ne,banda janda kakkhaan waang rul loko.....!
yaari launi us nu pugdi,jehda kandiyan nu manda phul loko.....!
lahu laave jehda ehna butyan nu,usey bute nu lagde phul loko.....!!.


too good....:D:D
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«Reply #12 on: July 05, 2006, 06:46:38 PM »
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WOW...............great........... boht hi nice shayri hai..  dil karta hai bar bar parhu keep it up  :o
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