Na Naqab utha saqi

by atul chauchan on June 03, 2006, 10:16:20 AM
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Mein nazar se pii raha hoon yeh sama badal na jaye
Na jhukao tum nigaahen khin raat dhal na jaye

Mere ashk bhi hain is mein yeh sharab ubal na jaye
Mera jaam chuune wale tera haath jal na jaye

Abhi raat kuchh hai baqii na utha naqab saaqi
Tera rind girate girate khin phir sambhal na jaye

Meri zindagi ke malik mere dil pe hath rakhana
Tere aane ki Khushi mein mera dam nikal na jaye

Mujhe phunkane se phele mera dil nikaal lena
Yeh kisi ki hai amaanat khin saath jal na jaye !!!  


Dear humtum ji yeh lijiye ek saboot


http://www.muziqpakistan.com/board/lofiversion/index.php/t49234.html
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«Reply #1 on: June 03, 2006, 10:20:07 AM »
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HUMTUM ji ki yeh copy paste aap sab Dard main dekh sakta hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 03, 2006, 10:28:29 AM »
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Atul ji,


meri poem is totally diffrent from the poem you mentioned ...  written by Anwar !!

akhiri meon " ho jaye" aane ka maltab sari poem hi same ho gyii :?  

yeh dard wali poem hai .... meri ishq ki hai .......  ik bhi sher aap bta sakte hai jo same ho :?

Here is the Link of my poem.

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/-jigar-ke-paar--vt17834.html
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2006, 10:38:03 AM »
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Atul ji,


meri poem is totally diffrent from the poem you mentioned ...  written by Anwar !!

akhiri meon " ho jaye" aane ka maltab sari poem hi same ho gyii :?  

yeh dard wali poem hai .... meri ishq ki hai .......  ik bhi sher aap bta sakte hai jo same ho :?

Here is the Link of my poem.

http://www.yoindia.com/forums/-jigar-ke-paar--vt17834.html


HUMTUM ji i know ki yeh alag hai but ki toh aapne yeh bhi copy paste hai

aap iska kya jawab denge...baaki maine ka ajigar ke paas book se copy ki hai uska koi link mere paas nahi
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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2006, 10:44:53 AM »
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Yeh alag hai but copy paste ki hai :?

baat samjh nhi aayi Atul ji ....  zra gaur se samjhaiyega ...... !!!


Now listen Buddy !!!


Mein nazar se pee rha hoon kahi sma badal na jaye
Na utho naqab saaqi kahi raat dhaal na jaye

Written by Aanwar  !!


Hasta cherhra gulaab ho jaye
Tu meri hi kitab ho jaye !!

Written by Zaffar !!  

Kya yeh dono same hai :?

dono shayrooN ne copy paste ki hai ik dusre ki :?
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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2006, 10:46:43 AM »
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Thats brilliant........HUMTUM ji u r gr8 aapne Dard se woh thread hee delet kara dia

GUD JOB Rajbir ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2006, 10:50:08 AM »
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which thread ... and what are you taking about :?
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2006, 11:09:25 AM »
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Puzzled !  Puzzled !  Puzzled !  Puzzled !  Puzzled !

Atul ko aate he Yoindia ki itni khabar hai jaan kar achcha laga

Welcome to Yoindia !
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