|| Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

by manzil-e-ishq on January 29, 2011, 08:18:59 AM

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Na neend rahi na khawab rahe..
Aankho me bas sawal rahe……

Paas bacha na kuch mera…..
Dil me toote armaan rahe….

rooth gaye sab mausam jaise…
Nazare bhi ab veeran rahe…

Aadat dil ki na badli….
Badle sare halat rahe…….

Bhul na pau.n main usko
baaki ab tak kuch nishan rahe……


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #1 on: January 29, 2011, 08:29:16 AM »

bahut achhi Peshkash--Priya
dili daad kabul karo
khus raho
sukriya


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #2 on: January 29, 2011, 08:41:12 AM »

wahhhhhhhhh priya bht mast likha hai bht hi pyara aur ard bhara...bht khub re


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #3 on: January 29, 2011, 08:51:14 AM »

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on January 29, 2011, 08:18:59 AM

Very Impressive ... Very Touching ... !

Good Expression ... dil se daad ... !

likhte rahen aur khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #4 on: January 29, 2011, 09:24:46 AM »

aajkala priya bai ji sa gani aachi aachi shayri karba lagi che....

kayi baat che ?

majo aayi gyo sa .....kaliya khil gi he mhare jivda ri


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #5 on: January 29, 2011, 11:44:40 AM »

Bohat Khoob Manzil e Ishq Ji


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #6 on: January 29, 2011, 03:08:19 PM »

Very nice Priya di..
Khoob..
Khush rahiye..!


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #7 on: January 29, 2011, 03:22:23 PM »

Nice priya ji...


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #8 on: January 29, 2011, 04:00:19 PM »

wah bada dukhdai aur sukhdai aur dil lubhai
kavita hai ji--
ek dum serious hokar achhe mann se daad de raha hu.
""
ab ekdum mastane andaaz me kuch likh raha hun--
bura lage to chupp se delete kar dena bina mind kiye--
""
na neend rahe na khab rahe
paagalon wale haalat rahe

paas raha na kuch mere
chura le gaya saaman mera

mausam jaise sab badle
mai ghum rahi ab chappal pahne

aadat dil ki na badli
mai rahi paggli ki paggli

bhul na paun mai usko
kaise bhulogi yar--sab to le gaya jab tak na mile mat bhulna"


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2011, 04:37:19 PM »

Bahut Khub Priya Ji Beautiful Creation


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #10 on: January 30, 2011, 08:39:33 AM »

thanx alot kb.......

thanx anu di..... par kabhi to koi poetic reply bhi diya karo na meri post pe.........

shukria anshumali ji......


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #11 on: January 30, 2011, 08:41:07 AM »

hahaha...... aapka bhi mera wala haal hai mg....
aapko bhi rajasthani nahi aati.....
anewazs thnx for liking.....

Quote from: Matrix Guy on January 29, 2011, 09:24:46 AM

aajkala priya bai ji sa gani aachi aachi shayri karba lagi che....

kayi baat che ?

majo aayi gyo sa .....kaliya khil gi he mhare jivda ri


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #12 on: January 30, 2011, 08:43:13 AM »

thanx to aal of u....
shiba ji....
geet ji...
rahim.....
nirala ji....
rishi ji....

aapka version bhi badiya hai nirala ji......


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #13 on: February 01, 2011, 11:52:17 AM »

shukria shihab ji....
isi tarah hausla badhate rahiye.....


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Re: || Na neend rahi na khawab rahe......Priya ||

«Reply #14 on: February 02, 2011, 04:33:23 PM »

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on January 30, 2011, 08:39:33 AM

thanx anu di..... par kabhi to koi poetic reply bhi diya karo na meri post pe.........

haan priya koshishkarungi likhne ki aajkal kuch zyada busy hun re,,,par wil try my best re... ..tumhari poems itni mast hoti hain k jawab sujhta hi nahin mujhe yaar...but wil try my best


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