Nazm Pila dun...:) Watch,listen and read:)

by sunil gahlot on December 29, 2013, 10:18:12 PM
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Nazm padhni ho to aise padho...jaise sharabi sharab pee raha ho..!
Nazm padhni ho to aise padho...jaise sharabi sharab pee raha ho..Thode Thode shabdo ke paig banao....!
Thode shabdo ke paig banao..Usme apne paraye lamho ki barf mila lo...!
Zara si samajh ka soda dalo..aur sari kadwahat ko dheere dheere piyo...!!
Kuch lamho inke suroor me raho...!
Aur jab lage ...inki khumari ko jeet liya...!!
to apne dil ke saki se kaho....
saki ek paig aur bana do.....
Nazm padhni ho to aise padho..jaise sharabhi sharab pee raha ho...!!!

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«Reply #1 on: December 29, 2013, 10:19:30 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 30, 2013, 05:00:40 AM »
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Achchha Concept Hai. Pasand Aaya.
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«Reply #4 on: December 30, 2013, 06:29:13 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2013, 12:57:15 AM »
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very nice writing
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2013, 12:59:08 AM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 03, 2014, 09:54:26 AM »
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«Reply #14 on: January 07, 2014, 05:56:46 AM »
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Thanks all...guys can you please you please suggest me how can i make my poetry more reachable to listeners....please suggest some more forums or some other website as well...
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