our ye barsaa.t bhi naa hotee,........

by laaiba on December 18, 2012, 02:53:15 PM
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din se yun raa.t bhi naa hotee,
tum se gar baa.t bhi naa hotee,

dil ke rastey pe naa chalte toh,
ham ko yun maa.t bhi naa hotee,..

tum se  dil  naa la gaate  to  yun,
muzmahil zaa. t  bhi naa hotee,....

san.g  jo  aa.j  tum naa hotey,....
chanDnee raa.t bhi naa hotee,....

aa.p naa milte   dil  khilta naa,...
or ye barsaa.t  bhi  naa hotee,.....

laaiba ali
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«Reply #1 on: December 18, 2012, 05:16:13 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 18, 2012, 02:53:15 PM
din se yun raa.t bhi naa hotee,
tum se gar baa.t bhi naa hotee,

dil ke rastey pe naa chalte toh,
ham ko yun maa.t bhi naa hotee,..

tum se  dil  naa la gaate  to  yun,
muzmahil zaa. t  bhi naa hotee,....

san.g  jo  aa.j  tum naa hotey,....
chanDnee raa.t bhi naa hotee,....

aa.p naa milte   dil  khilta naa,...
or ye barsaa.t  bhi  naa hotee,.....

laaiba ali

Bahut badiya laaiba jee  Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: December 18, 2012, 06:11:04 PM »
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Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!


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Bahut badhiya laaiba jee
aati rahiye..likhti rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: December 19, 2012, 01:17:40 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Laaiba ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: December 19, 2012, 04:42:25 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Behad Pyaari Rachna laaiba ji..
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«Reply #8 on: December 19, 2012, 05:15:59 AM »
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BOHUT KHUB LAIBA JI
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Quote from: suman59 on December 18, 2012, 05:16:13 PM
Bahut badiya laaiba jee  Applause Applause
bohat shukria suman aapkaa our rau ke liye bhi shukria:)
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«Reply #10 on: December 19, 2012, 10:59:38 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 18, 2012, 06:11:04 PM
Laaibaa Jee Aadaab!


Kia baat hai jee waaH bahut khoob badi hi dilkash kalaam
kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile Sidhe se aur saaf lafzoN meiN khoob
ashaar piroye haiN... Usual Smile


Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   

aadab parwaz ji,
bohat shukria aapkaa bohat nawazish,..........
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Quote from: mkv on December 18, 2012, 06:15:28 PM
Bahut badhiya laaiba jee
aati rahiye..likhti rahiye
bohat shukria mkv ji ,.........
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 19, 2012, 01:17:40 AM
very nice
thanku ,..........
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Laaiba ji....!!!
bohat shukria hirday ji,................
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanku sir,...........
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