Pal meh..

by Anushka on May 14, 2006, 09:08:59 PM
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Pal meh tapish teray ahaat ki jaalti rahi
mai dubta geya us andharay mei..
Roshni apki ankho ki jalti rahi
mai tut geya us sheeshay ki aanch ki terah
naam mit-ta jaraha  tha meray jism se..
ab laut kar ayeh ho ... is dil kay garib khanay mei
mujhay sembhalay.... mai to bin piyeh hi paimana ka nasha hogaya..
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2006, 11:37:43 PM »
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Pal meh tapish teray ahaat ki jaalti rahi
mai dubta geya us andharay mei..
Roshni apki ankho ki jalti rahi
mai tut geya us sheeshay ki aanch ki terah
naam mit-ta jaraha  tha meray jism se..
ab laut kar ayeh ho ... is dil kay garib khanay mei
mujhay sembhalay.... mai to bin piyeh hi paimana ka nasha hogaya..
kya anush... khoya sa ho... good good... keep it up. correct  some spell mistakes.. will be too good to read...
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2006, 12:47:56 AM »
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Pal meh tapish teray ahaat ki jaalti rahi
mai dubta geya us andharay mei..
Roshni apki ankho ki jalti rahi
mai tut geya us sheeshay ki aanch ki terah
naam mit-ta jaraha  tha meray jism se..
ab laut kar ayeh ho ... is dil kay garib khanay mei
mujhay sembhalay.... mai to bin piyeh hi paimana ka nasha hogaya..
kya anush... khoya sa ho... good good... keep it up. correct  some spell mistakes.. will be too good to read...


THANKU MAJUBHAI..... bas aapka arshiwad chahyeh...
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