parda

by vimmi singh on August 23, 2012, 04:40:16 PM
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lab khule the
kuchh kahna tha hume
paas na hokar bhi
unse milna tha hume

kuchh baat thi shaayad
jo kah na paaye the
mil kar tumhe
sunana tha hume

khwaahishen mann hi me
rah gayi thi
koi parda hataana tha hume...
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2012, 04:46:27 PM »
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Bahut achhi koshish ....... Badhai.... Aise hi vicharon ko shabdo ka sahi roop dene ki koshish kijiye
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2012, 04:47:13 PM »
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Bahut achhi koshish ....... Badhai.... Aise hi vicharon ko shabdo ka sahi roop dene ki koshish kijiye
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2012, 05:33:43 PM »
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lab khule the
kuchh kahna tha hume
paas na hokar bhi
unse milna tha hume

kuchh baat thi shaayad
jo kah na paaye the
mil kar tumhe
sunana tha hume

khwaahishen mann hi me
rah gayi thi
koi parda hataana tha hume...

good
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2012, 05:37:45 PM »
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Achaanak itna accha likhte likhte ruk gayee last me.

bahut badhiya likha hai aapne..very impressive.
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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2012, 12:54:27 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 24, 2012, 12:59:39 AM »
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Good.
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«Reply #7 on: August 24, 2012, 01:14:51 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 24, 2012, 02:58:54 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2012, 06:09:34 PM »
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aap sabhi ka bahut bahut shukriya....... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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