PARVAAZ

by siddiqa on July 25, 2004, 11:39:07 AM
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Agar Aiane mein bar bar dekhu to kya ghalat hey?
Agar tere khayalon mein rehna chahun to kya ghalat hey?
Dil ki dharkanao sey khubsoorat khayalon ka ghar sath chanun to kya ghalat hey?

Aaine sey mulakat itni haseen kyon?
Apne ko bar-bar dekhne ki chahat kyon?
Ghar parh loon tere khayalon ko ek bar
khud mein kho jane ki rahat kyon?

Samajti hoon tere khayalon ki parvaaz ko
chahti hoon ho jaun humrah is parvaaz ko
ghar khule asmaan ka jahan bad gaya
aur kho gaya to kahan dhundu is parvaaz ko?[/b]
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: July 25, 2004, 01:01:49 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2008, 01:59:13 PM »
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SIDDIQA JEE AAPKA HAR PARAGRAPH PEECHLE PARAGRAPH KA SATH NAHI DE RAHA HAIN AISA LAG RAHA HAIN EK GHAZAL ME 3 INCOMPLETE GHAZAL HAIN YOU CAN DO MUCH BETTER I AM SURE.
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2008, 09:10:04 AM »
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Siddiqa ji,

Jaise Sajid ji ne kaha, theeno alag sa laga. But good lines  Thumbs UP
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