Pehli nazar mein pyar..... Soudagar

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Us chanchal shokh haseena ka jo deedar hua
pehli nazar mein hi is dil ko usse pyar huaa

usne nazar se apni aisa var kiya is dil par
chain-o-sukun lut gya jeena bhi dushwar hua

uske khilkhilakr hasne par galon par dimple pade
uske galon ke dimple dekh is dil ka bura hal hua

uski khuli zulfein lehrati dekh laga aise jaise
tapti dhoop mein kali ghata ka faila jaal hua

uske patle patle labb lage gulab ki pankhuri jaise
ban bhanwra chhoo loon inhe mann mein yeh vichar hua

har chehre mein dhundh rahi hai sirf usi ko yeh nazar
kaisa meri aakhon mein yeh ishq ka khumaar hua

socha jakar kar doon usse apna haal-e-dil bayan
keh doon nadan dil mera teri chaht mein giraftar hua

pass jate hi dil dhadka zoron se zuban ladkhda gaii
lout aaya"soudagar" na mujhse ishq ka ijhar hua
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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2012, 11:23:01 AM »
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Us chanchal shokh haseena ka jo deedar hua
pehli nazar mein hi is dil ko usse pyar huaa

usne nazar se apni aisa var kiya is dil par
chain-o-sukun lut gya jeena bhi dushwar hua

uske khilkhilakr hasne par galon par dimple pade
uske galon ke dimple dekh is dil ka bura hal hua

uski khuli zulfein lehrati dekh laga aise jaise
tapti dhoop mein kali ghata ka faila jaal hua

uske patle patle labb lage gulab ki pankhuri jaise
ban bhanwra chhoo loon inhe mann mein yeh vichar hua

har chehre mein dhundh rahi hai sirf usi ko yeh nazar
kaisa meri aakhon mein yeh ishq ka khumaar hua

socha jakar kar doon usse apna haal-e-dil bayan
keh doon nadan dil mera teri chaht mein giraftar hua

pass jate hi dil dhadka zoron se zuban ladkhda gaii
lout aaya"soudagar" na mujhse ishq ka ijhar hua
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Us chanchal shokh haseena ka jo deedar hua
pehli nazar mein hi is dil ko usse pyar huaa

usne nazar se apni aisa var kiya is dil par
chain-o-sukun lut gya jeena bhi dushwar hua

uske khilkhilakr hasne par galon par dimple pade
uske galon ke dimple dekh is dil ka bura hal hua

uski khuli zulfein lehrati dekh laga aise jaise
tapti dhoop mein kali ghata ka faila jaal hua

uske patle patle labb lage gulab ki pankhuri jaise
ban bhanwra chhoo loon inhe mann mein yeh vichar hua

har chehre mein dhundh rahi hai sirf usi ko yeh nazar
kaisa meri aakhon mein yeh ishq ka khumaar hua

socha jakar kar doon usse apna haal-e-dil bayan
keh doon nadan dil mera teri chaht mein giraftar hua

pass jate hi dil dhadka zoron se zuban ladkhda gaii
lout aaya"soudagar" na mujhse ishq ka ijhar hua
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2012, 11:24:14 AM »
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Us chanchal shokh haseena ka jo deedar hua
pehli nazar mein hi is dil ko usse pyar huaa

usne nazar se apni aisa var kiya is dil par
chain-o-sukun lut gya jeena bhi dushwar hua

uske khilkhilakr hasne par galon par dimple pade
uske galon ke dimple dekh is dil ka bura hal hua

uski khuli zulfein lehrati dekh laga aise jaise
tapti dhoop mein kali ghata ka faila jaal hua

uske patle patle labb lage gulab ki pankhuri jaise
ban bhanwra chhoo loon inhe mann mein yeh vichar hua

har chehre mein dhundh rahi hai sirf usi ko yeh nazar
kaisa meri aakhon mein yeh ishq ka khumaar hua

socha jakar kar doon usse apna haal-e-dil bayan
keh doon nadan dil mera teri chaht mein giraftar hua

pass jate hi dil dhadka zoron se zuban ladkhda gaii
lout aaya"soudagar" na mujhse ishq ka ijhar hua
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2012, 11:24:47 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2012, 11:25:36 AM »
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bahut khoob soudagar beta
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2012, 11:27:11 AM »
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Waah Waah Karan Ji Bahut Khub Maza aa Gaya


uske khilkhilakr hasne par galon par dimple pade
uske galon ke dimple dekh is dil ka bura hal hua

uski khuli zulfein lehrati dekh laga aise jaise
tapti dhoop mein kali ghata ka faila jaal hua


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«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2012, 11:47:21 AM »
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Bahut khoob Karan jee
bahut badhiya..Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2012, 07:41:38 PM »
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Saudagar Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... achche khayaalat ko kafi
achche lafz diye haiN aapne.. Usual Smile kafi achchi koshish rahi

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Aur haaN 3rd and 4th sher nikal dijiye uske kafiye match
nahi ho rahe hai... baki sabhi sher aik kafiye meiN aaye haiN..

Likhate rahiye .. aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

                   

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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2012, 07:46:38 PM »
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Us chanchal shokh haseena ka jo deedar hua
pehli nazar mein hi is dil ko usse pyar huaa

usne nazar se apni aisa var kiya is dil par
chain-o-sukun lut gya jeena bhi dushwar hua

uske khilkhilakr hasne par galon par dimple pade
uske galon ke dimple dekh is dil ka bura hal hua

uski khuli zulfein lehrati dekh laga aise jaise
tapti dhoop mein kali ghata ka faila jaal hua

uske patle patle labb lage gulab ki pankhuri jaise
ban bhanwra chhoo loon inhe mann mein yeh vichar hua

har chehre mein dhundh rahi hai sirf usi ko yeh nazar
kaisa meri aakhon mein yeh ishq ka khumaar hua

socha jakar kar doon usse apna haal-e-dil bayan
keh doon nadan dil mera teri chaht mein giraftar hua

pass jate hi dil dhadka zoron se zuban ladkhda gaii
lout aaya"soudagar" na mujhse ishq ka ijhar hua



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bahut khoob saudagar ji
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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2012, 03:06:11 PM »
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Bahoot  pyaaree  peshkash. Mubarak ho.
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shukriya saini sir
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