pehli nazar

by shayara__udita on February 12, 2006, 07:19:28 PM
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pehli nazar me mujhse pyar huya use,
kaisa yeh pyar hai.
janta tha woh chahti hu kisi aur ko,
phir bhi bepanah mohabat karta hai,
kaisa yeh pyar hai.
mere liye sari zindagi intezar karne ko tayar hai,
kaisa yeh pyar hai.
shab ke andhero me,ujle savero me,
har waqt use mera khayal hai,
kaisa yeh pyar hai.
mere ankhon me ansu ki ek boond nahi dekh pata,
mere hoto par hamesha muskan lane ki koshish karta rehta hai,
kaisa yeh pyar hai.
kehna hai tumse aaj yahi,
badli hai tumne pyar ki paribhasa meri,
haan,yehi to sacha pyar hai.



plz post ur comments on tis.criticism wil b much appreciated.
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2006, 07:28:34 PM »
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teri pehli nazar ka jadu chaya hai mujhper iskadar...
ho gaya mai khud se  door ho gaya hu bekhabar....
na janu kya hua mujhe kya mai isse naam du......
kya yahi pyar kya iska mai aab aanjaam lu..........


welcome to yoindia....................
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2006, 07:33:08 PM »
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wow udita ji tat was too good and tushar u also
bahut aacha likha hai aap ne bhi
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2006, 07:45:29 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aapke hausla-afzai  ke liye.

sitaron ke aage jahan aur bhi hai,
zindagi me imtehan aur bhi hai
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2006, 10:03:05 PM »
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aap sab ka bahut bahut shukriya.aapke samne to hum kuch bhi nahi hai
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2006, 10:46:23 PM »
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tu dhund raha hai sitaro se aage ka jaha ,.....
hum aab tak pav k niche ki zami dhund rahe hai .....
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2006, 10:58:10 PM »
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Very Nice Udita......and welcome to Yoindia........ tongue3

Pehli Nazar dekha aur Pyar ho gaya......
Nazro k khel me yeh bechara Dil kho gaya.....
Dhoondta tha pehle apne pyar ko kahin rasto pe......
Ab manzil banke mila toh yeh mujhe kya ho gaya.....
Dinn ka chain Raat ki neend mera sab kuch kho gaya........
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2006, 11:36:41 PM »
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dil me aye khayal kuch aise,
lage jaise dil bhar aaye.
kya huya agar tum sath na ho,
tumhari yaadein to pal-pal aaye.

aapke comments ke liye shukriya,badnaam shayaar ji aur tushar ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2006, 11:52:21 PM »
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dil me aye khayal kuch aise,
lage jaise dil bhar aaye.
kya huya agar tum sath na ho,
tumhari yaadein to pal-pal aaye.

aapke comments ke liye shukriya,badnaam shayaar ji aur tushar ji


Jo aya dil me use hum Khyal nahi.....
Pyar ka naam dete hain....
Hum yaadein nahi Jindagi bhar saath dete hain....
Hum koi Pyar k badle bewafai nahi......
Apni Mahobbat k liye toh hum Jaan Nisaar kar dete hain.....
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2006, 12:26:27 AM »
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Har shaks ko diwana bna deta hai ishq,
Mile yaar se ik nazar fasana bna deta hai ishq,

Dil k mariz ho to kr lo mohabbat,
Har dil ko dhadakna sikha deta hai ishq.!
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2006, 04:33:52 PM »
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hamko deewana humko pagal ker gai teri pehli nazar....
aashiq ban gaye tere humto aaisa jadu ker gai pehli nazar....
kahi mar na jaye hum aab tere bager a humnashi.......
zindgi se bhi aab bewafai kerne ko bulati hai teri pehli nazar......
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«Reply #11 on: February 15, 2006, 04:01:01 PM »
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yeh raat jaise tham-sa gaya,
yeh hawaein jaise ruk-si gayi.
aaye jab se tum zindagi me mere,
yeh zindagi jaise mehek-si gayi.


aap sab ka bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #12 on: February 15, 2006, 04:16:26 PM »
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hey nice udita
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2006, 05:36:20 PM »
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hey nice udita
thank u
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«Reply #14 on: July 26, 2013, 05:45:08 AM »
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Dil ki majburi batana nahin aata,
Kisi ko aise tadpana nahin aata,
Dekhna chahte hain ek baar surat aapki,
Magar milne ka bahana nahi aata…
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