promo....of mine

by sinritesh on July 06, 2006, 02:45:28 PM
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badal rahi hai fiza kuch aise ki log choot rahe hain
  mallom nahi hai manzil apni..ki bas kadam chal raha hain..

rishtey mein khoya..bhoola ..per woh bhi aab toot rahe hain..
  chootne ka gam kam tha shayad....ki tohfe humein ye mil rahe hain...

wadon me ulajhta hoon..baaton ki baatein chodiye..
  apni kashti shahil se ladti...majhdhar ki baatein chodiye..

so jaun kin palkon mein ye abb ehsaas nahi..
  per chaon aapka mila hota to aaj hum yun na hote
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #1 on: July 06, 2006, 04:38:27 PM »
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welcome to yo india  Usual Smile  aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne

badlti is fiza me dil bhi kuchh udaas yun hai
ki pahle ki tarah tu ab mere na saath hi hai
sare rishton se bada ek jo rishta tha kabhi
sare rishton ki kami jisame chhupi bhi thi kahin
sare rishton se mile zakhmon ka marham jisme
aaj vo rishta diye baitha hai ik ghav naya
isko sah len to zara baat phir ham karte hain
ik zara dam to ham leln phir naya gham sahte hain
baat karte bhi hain vo aisa nahi karte nahi
par khafa se hain ye bhi to pata chalta hai
par yahi ek shay dil ko sukoon deti hai
hoke ham se hi khafa baat hami se vo karen
roothe roothe bhi rahen to bhi hami se vo laden
ham jo kah den koi  gham to pareshaan hon vo
aur hans den jo kabhi to  bas ham se vo chidhen
hain adaaen bhi juda aur hai andaaz alag
aisa gham pal ke baithe hain jo pyara hai bahut
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ranjana
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2006, 04:47:39 PM »
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bahut khub Ritiesh ...yoindia mein aapka sawagat hai.........aate hi kamal ka likha aapne.......... Usual Smile

bahut khub tabussum....very nice......
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2006, 06:54:53 PM »
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thanx ranju
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sinritesh
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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2006, 08:09:39 PM »
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shabdon ke khel hain saare...isliye abb chup rehta hoon
 muddat se aankhein baithi..isliye palkein bichata hoon..

qaatil ke kya saath hai ye zaamaana..main akela pad jata hoon.
dost abb bhi koi aata nahi..main lahoo mein bah jaata hoon
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2006, 08:14:00 PM »
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Too good man :D
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2006, 08:14:13 PM »
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bahoot khoob ritesh, apka yoindia mai sawagat hai.

Her tarah ki shayri ka, ek alag section banaya hai
apne apne her tarah ke zazbaato se, inko humne sajaya hai
dard bhari shayri mere dost, likho app shayri dard mai
yah section to hum sab ne khumar-e-ishaq se sajaya hai!!!
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #7 on: July 07, 2006, 08:25:30 PM »
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Excellent Promo ritesh..A start with a bang....Good stuff mate...Way to go!!!!!!!!!!!1
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #8 on: July 07, 2006, 08:27:42 PM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
bahoot khoob ritesh, apka yoindia mai sawagat hai.

Her tarah ki shayri ka, ek alag section banaya hai
apne apne her tarah ke zazbaato se, inko humne sajaya hai
dard bhari shayri mere dost, likho app shayri dard mai
yah section to hum sab ne khumar-e-ishaq se sajaya hai!!!

bohot khub pooja ji! :D
samjha ne ka adab koi aap se sikhe
na samjh ko bhi samjh ne ka hoor ajaye
Aur jo aap ki likhii padne ki adat dal le
Usko khud ba khud likhne ka noor ajaye
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«Reply #9 on: July 07, 2006, 08:31:30 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria RWG ji!!!

kaya kahe ab hum, andaaz apka bhi nirala hai
acha laga pad kar, hume bhi koi padne wala hai
likh deti hu ji bhi dil mai aa jaata hai
kabhi dard-e-shayri, kabhi zindagi, kabhi khumar-e-ishaq saj jaata hai
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #10 on: July 07, 2006, 09:44:44 PM »
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Aap ki andaz ko dekh kar hi to ham us nakse kadam par chalte hai
Aur hambhi aap jaise dard-e-shayri, kabhi zindagi, kabhi khumar-e-ishaq ko bharte hai
:D
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