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« on: November 19, 2008, 07:09:51 PM »
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Mein yahaan hoon! Ho kahaan tum? Pukaar lo mujh ko!
Deir hai ab bhi hashra ko: dulaar lo mujh ko!
Mein hawaa hoon! Na jaaney kab kahaan chalaa jaauun?
Abhi hoon saath abra key: utaar lo mujh ko!

                           - abd bundeli
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« Reply #1 on: November 19, 2008, 08:18:30 PM »
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Hay hay jab bhi aati hain badi yaad aati hain
Tu nahi kambakht abd ko jawani yaad aati hain
Jhunjla ke likh bhait_ta hain koi zinda dil ghazal
Badi kamsin badi nadaan woh zindagai jab yaad aati hain

                                  -SG-
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« Reply #2 on: November 19, 2008, 08:50:05 PM »
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Yaad aatee hai, jawaanee bhi yaad aatee hai:
Jab kabhi baad-e-nisf shab mujhey jagaatee hai!
Khwaab mein bhi, kabhi, pahloo mein usey paataa hoon;
Woh meyree rooh hai, bas loriyaan sunaatee hai!!

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« Reply #3 on: November 19, 2008, 11:18:41 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping SmileyYeh char linay aaj se mere pass aapki amanat hain Bohat khoob Abd Bhai
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« Reply #4 on: November 20, 2008, 12:08:23 AM »
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...fantastic one Abd...good one Sajid...
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« Reply #5 on: November 20, 2008, 12:10:20 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah kaya baat hai.. bahoot khoob Abd ji and SG apne acha sath nibhaya hai Abd ji ka... good work!!
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« Reply #6 on: November 20, 2008, 10:06:15 AM »
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sajid_ghayel ji/Just_Hate_Love ji/Pooja ji!
I'm happy you liked the quartet. Let's continue to write for igniting heart-felt pleasurable emotions to create an all pervasive happiness around the world in an atmosphere of deep fraternity and goodwill!
Thanks a lot!
               -Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'
 
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« Reply #7 on: November 20, 2008, 12:14:44 PM »
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Mein yahaan hoon! Ho kahaan tum? Pukaar lo mujh ko!
Deir hai ab bhi hashra ko: dulaar lo mujh ko!
Mein hawaa hoon! Na jaaney kab kahaan chalaa jaauun?
Abhi hoon saath abra key: utaar lo mujh ko!

                           - abd bundeli

Waah.. Applause Applause
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne.. Abd Ji..

Yaad aatee hai, jawaanee bhi yaad aatee hai:
Jab kabhi baad-e-nisf shab mujhey jagaatee hai!
Khwaab mein bhi, kabhi, pahloo mein usey paataa hoon;
Woh meyree rooh hai, bas loriyaan sunaatee hai!!

                              - abd bundeli


Wow... Again Very Perfect and Very Beautiful Reply.. Abd ji.. Applause
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« Reply #8 on: November 20, 2008, 12:16:28 PM »
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Hay hay jab bhi aati hain badi yaad aati hain
Tu nahi kambakht abd ko jawani yaad aati hain
Jhunjla ke likh bhait_ta hain koi zinda dil ghazal
Badi kamsin badi nadaan woh zindagai jab yaad aati hain

                                  -SG-


ha ha ha... Bahut khoob.. Applause
Lekin 2nd line mein "Abd" ki jagah "Sajid" likhna chahiye tha naa..  icon_geek
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« Reply #9 on: November 20, 2008, 12:50:04 PM »
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ha ha ha... Bahut khoob.. Applause
Lekin 2nd line mein "Abd" ki jagah "Sajid" likhna chahiye tha naa..  icon_geek

BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead BangHead Crying Crying Crying Crying Crying
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« Reply #10 on: November 20, 2008, 12:55:14 PM »
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bahut acha likha ha
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« Reply #11 on: November 20, 2008, 03:25:47 PM »
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Waah.. Applause Applause
Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne.. Abd Ji..

Wow... Again Very Perfect and Very Beautiful Reply.. Abd ji.. Applause
Mahiya Ji!
Thanks a lot! Aap ko kotishh Dhanyawaad! Aap sirf jaandaar shaayaree hi naheen karteen hain; doosrey shaayaroun key tasawwuraat sey bhi utnee hi dilaaweyzee sey roo-b-roo hoteen hain!
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« Reply #12 on: November 20, 2008, 03:30:57 PM »
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Thanks saloni bharani ji!
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« Reply #13 on: November 20, 2008, 04:49:06 PM »
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Mein yahaan hoon! Ho kahaan tum? Pukaar lo mujh ko!
Deir hai ab bhi hashra ko: dulaar lo mujh ko!
Mein hawaa hoon! Na jaaney kab kahaan chalaa jaauun?
Abhi hoon saath abra key: utaar lo mujh ko!

                           - abd bundeli

Yaad aatee hai, jawaanee bhi yaad aatee hai:
Jab kabhi baad-e-nisf shab mujhey jagaatee hai!
Khwaab mein bhi, kabhi, pahloo mein usey paataa hoon;
Woh meyree rooh hai, bas loriyaan sunaatee hai!!

                              - abd bundeli


Aap ke kalam chaahe duets ho ya quartets ya ghazlen ya nazm....sab ek se badh ke ek hote hain......Bohot bohot shukriya Abd Ji, aap ne apne kalam yahan post kiye aur hume padhne ka aur seekhne ka mauqa diya Usual Smile
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« Reply #14 on: November 20, 2008, 05:03:23 PM »
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Aap ke kalam chaahe duets ho ya quartets ya ghazlen ya nazm....sab ek se badh ke ek hote hain......Bohot bohot shukriya Abd Ji, aap ne apne kalam yahan post kiye aur hume padhne ka aur seekhne ka mauqa diya Usual Smile

Celmira ji!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah! Your comments are not only kind and inspiring, but they also energize my poetic mind at times!
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