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amazing_world
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hi to all
Main poems nahi likhti par padne ka shok zaroor rakhti hun... kuch lines aap sabke sath share karna chahati hun jo maine kahin padi thi....
palkon ki nami mein chupa kar sapno ko,
humne unhe jaane ki izazat de di,
hum tutkar bikhar gaye tukdon mein...
aur unhone muskurakar jeene ki kasam de di
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2006, 04:27:59 AM » |
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Dear
Likhna bhale hi naa aaye magar padhne wala hi wala kam nahi hota........aur jo likhte haiN unki sabse badi kami yahiN hoti haiN ki wo sirf apna hi padhvana jante kisi dusre ko padhna unhe kam hi acha lagta haiN
isliye padhne wala likhne wale se jayada mahan haiN........khuda ne lekin mujhe dono diye likhta bhi aur padhta bhi hu...
padhte-2 aap bhi zaroor likhne lag jaogi hum jante haiN
Bohat acha sher aap lekar aayi haiN.............shukriyah
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2006, 06:07:49 AM » |
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hi to all
Main poems nahi likhti par padne ka shok zaroor rakhti hun... kuch lines aap sabke sath share karna chahati hun jo maine kahin padi thi....
palkon ki nami mein chupa kar sapno ko,
humne unhe jaane ki izazat de di,
hum tutkar bikhar gaye tukdon mein...
aur unhone muskurakar jeene ki kasam de di Wah bahut khoob.....Welcome to YOINDIA.....bas aise hee Nadaan Koshishe karti rahiyega....Wonderfull] Palkon me chupe Chilman se jab tum jhaankti ho...... Kasam Waar Dil pe Nazron me nasha bhar jaati ho...... Binn bataye hume apne Khawabon ke Sheher le jaati ho...... Ab bolo Kyu iss Gareeb ka Sar-e-bazaar katle aal karti ho....!!!!!!! |
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2006, 09:22:47 AM » |
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bahut khub Gaurav...............nice sharing AW JI
aaj lafzo se aa sajana koi likhe aisa geet
jiski mehak se jhum uthe apni sapno ki preet
jisko pad ke ek nasha aankho mein chhaa jaaye
tere dil se mere dil ka preet bandhan jud jaaye
ek halchal si faile jaye in shabado ki baahar se
tere mere pyaar ka geet har dil ki dharkan ban jaaye
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2006, 09:29:12 AM » |
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welcome AMAZING WORLD ji........gaurav bhai ,ranjana nice 1 ..........
naino se woh dil pe seedhe vaar kar rahe hai
aur kehte hai ki are hum to deedar kar rahe hai
................@fahi@...................
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ranjana
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2006, 09:49:59 AM » |
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bahut khub fahi.............. hum toh aaj bas apni mohabbat ka yun izhaar kar rahen hai hamaari himaat toh dekhiye ki bhari mehfil mein nazaro se aapko pyaar kar rahe hain.........  |
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2006, 04:11:51 PM » |
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nice reply......(ise kehte hai vaar magar pyaar se)
teri har khusi ko tahe dil se salaam hai mera
teri hasta chehra ,gum ka anjaam hai mera
dekho na mujhe aise dil mai mehsoos karo
dhadkan mai basa hoon teri ki ishq naam hai mera
...................@fahi@........................
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2006, 04:16:34 PM » |
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Kya baat hai Fahi and Ranju
Raat hai Khamosh par WaQt abhi baaki hai......
Guzar jaye harr Lamha kyunki Lafz ab mera saathi hai...!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2006, 04:19:13 PM » |
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nice reply......(ise kehte hai vaar magar pyaar se)
teri har khusi ko tahe dil se salaam hai mera
teri hasta chehra ,gum ka anjaam hai mera
dekho na mujhe aise dil mai mehsoos karo
dhadkan mai basa hoon teri ki ishq naam hai mera
...................@fahi@........................ shukriya ji ...... :razz: :D laga kya? :wink: hamne teri har baat ko dil mein rakh liya apni har dharkan per naam tera likh diya gum ab kaise chhoega mujhe tere hote hue jab hamne apni har khushi aur gum per naam tera likh diya |
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2006, 04:25:25 PM » |
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sukriya gaurav bhai .............aap bhi kam kaha hai.........
raat ki khamosi mai hume aankhein chaar karne do
din to intzaar mai kaat diya are ab to pyaar karne do.
....................@fahi@.........................
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2006, 04:28:34 PM » |
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Wah kya baat hai ek baar phir se katilana Lafz
Din me Veerangi toh Raat Sannaatta kyu hai.....
Diya jalta hai tab bhi Dil mujhe inn baton se behlata kyu hai.....!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2006, 04:31:06 PM » |
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laga per laga nahi ...........nice 1 again............ hai mohabbat ki wafa ka har rang itna gehra mera tere naam ki kashish se hi khil jaata hai chehra mera ..................@fahi@...................... nice reply......(ise kehte hai vaar magar pyaar se)
teri har khusi ko tahe dil se salaam hai mera
teri hasta chehra ,gum ka anjaam hai mera
dekho na mujhe aise dil mai mehsoos karo
dhadkan mai basa hoon teri ki ishq naam hai mera
...................@fahi@........................ shukriya ji ...... :razz: :D laga kya? :wink: hamne teri har baat ko dil mein rakh liya apni har dharkan per naam tera likh diya gum ab kaise chhoega mujhe tere hote hue jab hamne apni har khushi aur gum per naam tera likh diya |
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ranjana
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2006, 04:51:23 PM » |
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bahut khoob gauarv and fahi.........fahi ji laga bhi nahi bhi good.. yeh tanahi ka alam aur baate aapki bas yeh hai aapka karm aur meherbaani aapki zindagi jab dene lagagi kuch gum naye toh hum fir se cher denge kahaani aapke naam ki |
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amazing_world
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2006, 02:04:22 AM » |
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wow u guys are amazing
mere honton ne muskrana sikha
jabse pyaar mujhe tera mila
maine har gum sehna sikha
jabse sath mujhe tera mila
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ranjana
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2006, 04:32:13 AM » |
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shukriya AWji ..........aap bhi likh leti hain......... bahut khub.. aane do muskarhato ko ki zindagi muskaraane ko hai khol do sab mann ki khirkiya ki roshni aane ko hai jo khusi le gayi thee vida kabhi hamse aaj fir se woh dil pe ban ke khumar chhaane ko hai |
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