pyar ko dosti ka sahara mil gaya

by deepika_divya on May 11, 2007, 11:13:51 AM
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Dehkataa reha mera man tere bina
Suna pada hai anchal tuhare siwa…

Kya keh tumse wakt ka takaza na raha
Ankho ne askho se sareer par ghav hai diya

Siskatei reh gayi sanse meri
Berukhi ak naya sila de gaya

Sanam aaya tho sahi mere dar per
Par meri chaht ko usne Dosti ka nyota de diya

Kya karti ab tak tho awaj k share ji rahi thi
Ab Dosti ki raah par chalane ka man bana liya

Pyar na niba sake tho kya hua
Dost ban k hi shi khusiyan uske naam kar diya..

Kesa bhi ho rishta hamara
‘’Divya’’ ne tho apni zingagi tere naam kar diya

~*~Divya~*~
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2007, 12:24:41 PM »
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Waaah Waah!!! Bohat aachey Bohay aachey..
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Parde mein Rakh kar yoon apne aitbaar ko
Haan, tumne sabeet to kar diya sache pyar ko

Bepardah aaj kardo apne sanam ki pehchan ko
Kya pata kal Ishq ho Jaaye tumse us insaan ko

Utaar di hai Muhabaat saja kar Lafz-e-Khumar ko
Bepardah; kar do iss ishaq ko gumnaan uss yaar ko
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2007, 12:25:37 PM »
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Dehkataa reha mera man tere bina
Suna pada hai anchal tuhare siwa…

Kya keh tumse wakt ka takaza na raha
Ankho ne askho se sareer par ghav hai diya

Siskatei reh gayi sanse meri
Berukhi ak naya sila de gaya

Sanam aaya tho sahi mere dar per
Par meri chaht ko usne Dosti ka nyota de diya

Kya karti ab tak tho awaj k share ji rahi thi
Ab Dosti ki raah par chalane ka man bana liya

Pyar na niba sake tho kya hua
Dost ban k hi shi khusiyan uske naam kar diya..

Kesa bhi ho rishta hamara
‘’Divya’’ ne tho apni zingagi tere naam kar diya

~*~Divya~*~


very nice divya jee bhoot gharee bat likhi hai.

dosti ek atoot rishta n manajil hai koi iskee bhee
pyarr pooja hai par dard bhee de jata hai kabhee
dil or dimmak ka sadiyo poorana rishta hai ye
pyar koi dil chahiye tootne ke liye dosti kya tooti thee kabhi?

netra....
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2007, 12:27:03 PM »
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Dehkataa reha mera man tere bina
Suna pada hai anchal tuhare siwa…

Kya keh tumse wakt ka takaza na raha
Ankho ne askho se sareer par ghav hai diya

Siskatei reh gayi sanse meri
Berukhi ak naya sila de gaya

Sanam aaya tho sahi mere dar per
Par meri chaht ko usne Dosti ka nyota de diya

Kya karti ab tak tho awaj k share ji rahi thi
Ab Dosti ki raah par chalane ka man bana liya

Pyar na niba sake tho kya hua
Dost ban k hi shi khusiyan uske naam kar diya..

Kesa bhi ho rishta hamara
‘’Divya’’ ne tho apni zingagi tere naam kar diya

~*~Divya~*~


very nice divya jee bhoot gharee bat likhi hai.

dosti ek atoot rishta n manajil hai koi iskee bhee
pyarr pooja hai par dard bhee de jata hai kabhee
dil or dimmak ka sadiyo poorana rishta hai ye
pyar koi dil chahiye tootne ke liye dosti n tooti thee kabhi

netra....


Bohat  Umdaaa...
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2007, 12:56:47 PM »
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Waaah Waah!!! Bohat aachey Bohay aachey..
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Parde mein Rakh kar yoon apne aitbaar ko
Haan, tumne sabeet to kar diya sache pyar ko

Bepardah aaj kardo apne sanam ki pehchan ko
Kya pata kal Ishq ho Jaaye tumse us insaan ko

Utaar di hai Muhabaat saja kar Lafz-e-Khumar ko
Bepardah; kar do iss ishaq ko gumnaan uss yaar ko


nice reply......

netra.....
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2007, 03:27:48 PM »
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Waaah Waah!!! Bohat aachey Bohay aachey..
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Parde mein Rakh kar yoon apne aitbaar ko
Haan, tumne sabeet to kar diya sache pyar ko

Bepardah aaj kardo apne sanam ki pehchan ko
Kya pata kal Ishq ho Jaaye tumse us insaan ko

Utaar di hai Muhabaat saja kar Lafz-e-Khumar ko
Bepardah; kar do iss ishaq ko gumnaan uss yaar ko


nice reply......

netra.....




Shukriya, NetraPal.
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2007, 03:56:48 PM »
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Dehkataa reha mera man tere bina
Suna pada hai anchal tuhare siwa…

Kya keh tumse wakt ka takaza na raha
Ankho ne askho se sareer par ghav hai diya

Siskatei reh gayi sanse meri
Berukhi ak naya sila de gaya

Sanam aaya tho sahi mere dar per
Par meri chaht ko usne Dosti ka nyota de diya

Kya karti ab tak tho awaj k share ji rahi thi
Ab Dosti ki raah par chalane ka man bana liya

Pyar na niba sake tho kya hua
Dost ban k hi shi khusiyan uske naam kar diya..

Kesa bhi ho rishta hamara
‘’Divya’’ ne tho apni zingagi tere naam kar diya

~*~Divya~*~


Waaah kya baat hai Divya....or Neer bhai....Kamaaal ka reply dia hai..!!

Laakh Sahi TaQleefein maine.....
Par ab yeh Ilzaam na seh paonga.......

Kudrat karti hai harr Zind Aatishbaazi Sanam.....
Par main ab aur na Jal paonga......

Miyaad baandhi hai ab toh Khuda ne bhi inn Saanson ki.....
Kehte hai sab HaKeem ki me aur na jee paonga......

Akele hee kata jaise maine apna harr Safar......
Ab Shayad marte marte bhi me akela hee reh jaonga......

Laakh sahi TaQleefein maine......
Par ab yeh Ilzaam na seh paonga......!!!
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«Reply #7 on: May 14, 2007, 04:18:37 AM »
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Waaah Waah!!! Bohat aachey Bohay aachey..
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Parde mein Rakh kar yoon apne aitbaar ko
Haan, tumne sabeet to kar diya sache pyar ko

Bepardah aaj kardo apne sanam ki pehchan ko
Kya pata kal Ishq ho Jaaye tumse us insaan ko

Utaar di hai Muhabaat saja kar Lafz-e-Khumar ko
Bepardah; kar do iss ishaq ko gumnaan uss yaar ko



Thank U so mUch 'AADI'

Bahoot hoi sweet lines likhi hai,
reply hazir hai

Jise humne chahha hai, jisse apna maana hai
ussi ki liye yea jaz baat hamesha rehte hai

rahe chahe woh hame kitni bhi dur
par Is Dil unne ki chaht ka panaha dete hai

Jo sanso mea hai meri , woh hamari ankho mea baste hai
hum kare lah koshish unne Diklane ki par yea palke kaha sunte hai

Mohaabbat hai woh meri , woh mera gurur hai
pehchaan hai woh meri, meri ruh mea woh basta  hai
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«Reply #8 on: May 14, 2007, 04:36:00 AM »
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Dehkataa reha mera man tere bina
Suna pada hai anchal tuhare siwa…

Kya keh tumse wakt ka takaza na raha
Ankho ne askho se sareer par ghav hai diya

Siskatei reh gayi sanse meri
Berukhi ak naya sila de gaya

Sanam aaya tho sahi mere dar per
Par meri chaht ko usne Dosti ka nyota de diya

Kya karti ab tak tho awaj k share ji rahi thi
Ab Dosti ki raah par chalane ka man bana liya

Pyar na niba sake tho kya hua
Dost ban k hi shi khusiyan uske naam kar diya..

Kesa bhi ho rishta hamara
‘’Divya’’ ne tho apni zingagi tere naam kar diya

~*~Divya~*~


very nice divya jee bhoot gharee bat likhi hai.

dosti ek atoot rishta n manajil hai koi iskee bhee
pyarr pooja hai par dard bhee de jata hai kabhee
dil or dimmak ka sadiyo poorana rishta hai ye
pyar koi dil chahiye tootne ke liye dosti kya tooti thee kabhi?

netra....


ji bahoot khoob netra pal Ji

ji sach Dosti ka Rista kabhi nahi toot tha.

Pyar ak anmol rista hota hai
toda hi is kabi insaan k i fitrat , tho kabi majbooriyan hai

par isse bande aur jode rakna tho hamere haath hai
pyar na mile tho kya hua, Dosti aur yaadon ka tho saath hai

Woh chote chote pal do pal ki khushi
woh rutne manane ki sogate tho saath hai

chaht kabhi mitthi nahi, duriyan bale hi lakha hai
sanso mea basi uske aalingan ka ehsaash tho paas hai
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«Reply #9 on: May 14, 2007, 06:22:03 AM »
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Waaah kya baat hai Divya....or Neer bhai....Kamaaal ka reply dia hai..!!

Laakh Sahi TaQleefein maine.....
Par ab yeh Ilzaam na seh paonga.......

Kudrat karti hai harr Zind Aatishbaazi Sanam.....
Par main ab aur na Jal paonga......

Miyaad baandhi hai ab toh Khuda ne bhi inn Saanson ki.....
Kehte hai sab HaKeem ki me aur na jee paonga......

Akele hee kata jaise maine apna harr Safar......
Ab Shayad marte marte bhi me akela hee reh jaonga......

Laakh sahi TaQleefein maine......
Par ab yeh Ilzaam na seh paonga......!!!



Wow,, beautiful written Gaurav !

Taklef hame bhi hoti hai
Ankhe hamari bhi khoon k ansoo roti thi

jabse mili sanam ki yaari
har pal katne mea muskil hoti hai

har pal chaha jise Dil ne
har baat ki suraraat ussi se hoti hai

mefile tho bahoot dekhi hai humne
par sanam k sang kuch pal bitane ki kami hoti hai

par duriyan hi jo akele pan mea tadpati hai
aur duriyan hi chaht ko aur genhra banati hai
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2007, 04:12:12 AM »
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Dehkataa reha mera man tere bina
Suna pada hai anchal tuhare siwa…

Kya keh tumse wakt ka takaza na raha
Ankho ne askho se sareer par ghav hai diya

Siskatei reh gayi sanse meri
Berukhi ak naya sila de gaya

Sanam aaya tho sahi mere dar per
Par meri chaht ko usne Dosti ka nyota de diya

Kya karti ab tak tho awaj k share ji rahi thi
Ab Dosti ki raah par chalane ka man bana liya

Pyar na niba sake tho kya hua
Dost ban k hi shi khusiyan uske naam kar diya..

Kesa bhi ho rishta hamara
‘’Divya’’ ne tho apni zingagi tere naam kar diya

~*~Divya~*~


very nice divya jee bhoot gharee bat likhi hai.

dosti ek atoot rishta n manajil hai koi iskee bhee
pyarr pooja hai par dard bhee de jata hai kabhee
dil or dimmak ka sadiyo poorana rishta hai ye
pyar koi dil chahiye tootne ke liye dosti kya tooti thee kabhi?

netra....


ji bahoot khoob netra pal Ji

ji sach Dosti ka Rista kabhi nahi toot tha.

Pyar ak anmol rista hota hai
toda hi is kabi insaan k i fitrat , tho kabi majbooriyan hai

par isse bande aur jode rakna tho hamere haath hai
pyar na mile tho kya hua, Dosti aur yaadon ka tho saath hai

Woh chote chote pal do pal ki khushi
woh rutne manane ki sogate tho saath hai

chaht kabhi mitthi nahi, duriyan bale hi lakha hai
sanso mea basi uske aalingan ka ehsaash tho paas hai


anmol hote hai bade  rishte pyar ke , nibhane kee tamanna ho del me,
aajaatee hai bahar jindgee me, rahi koi mil jaye sacha,  rah me

bharee hai duniya danvo se nahi milta hai dev, doondhne se bhee
payaar bee tulta hai dolat se, nahi milta hai dard ke siva kuch bhee

netra....
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2007, 04:06:54 AM »
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Saalo baat apni mohbbat ko Dosti k roop mea dekha tho
Dil k sabi armaan ak pal mea jaag gaye

Gurti reh gai meri ankhiyan unne
Aur woh hamse kisi ki chaht bayan kar gaye

chaha tha humne ki dekhte hi usse le lenge baho mea
par woh mile is tarah ki Dost ki tarah haath mila gaye

Payar ko mere Dosti ka sahara mil gaya
Dunti reh gai chaht uski aur woh kisi aur k ho gaye
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2007, 04:13:27 AM »
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very nice divya...

khumar-e-ishaq mai apki dard najar ayya
apne yah dard-e-shayri mai kyun nahi farmaya!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2007, 05:18:57 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #14 on: May 29, 2007, 04:29:56 AM »
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very nice divya...

khumar-e-ishaq mai apki dard najar ayya
apne yah dard-e-shayri mai kyun nahi farmaya!!


chalo aapko dard najar to ayaa uska
jo roj rote the bina ansoo ke ishak me
dard nahi dikhta hai dekhne se kiseeka
ek bar ankho me jhank kar to dekho kisike

netra.....
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