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«Reply #390 on: March 13, 2006, 11:34:13 PM » |
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meri khushi mere ghum hain bas tujhi se sanam..
tujh bin zindagi hai adhuri mujhko teri kasam..
sooni aankhon mein khwabon ka karwan saja de..
tanha dhadkano phir tu apni sargam saja de..
teri mohabbat bebas kaayal hai dil..
tu hai zindagi meri tu hi meri manzil..
apni chaahat ki galiyon mein basale mujhe
hai talab bas thode se pyaar ki apnale mujhe..
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«Reply #391 on: March 14, 2006, 08:34:38 AM » |
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Kya baat hai Mehek... Bohat acha likhne lagi hain janaab...  |
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Aryaan
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«Reply #392 on: March 14, 2006, 08:38:39 AM » |
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Poocha hai kayi baar kisi ne pata mujhse meri taQdeer ka
Meri Mohabbat ke kore kaghaz par bani huwi tasveer ka
Na bata saka hoon aur na hi khud jaan saka hoon main
Rang unn gore hathon mein mere ishQ ki lakeer ka....
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«Reply #393 on: March 14, 2006, 09:47:53 AM » |
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Bahot achhe Mehek and Aryan, Keep it up guys!
Aryan you have depth in your shayari! kahan se moti dhundh late ho sahab!
Her alfaz main tere asman ki unchai hai,
Teri shayari main tere ishq ki gaherai hai!
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«Reply #394 on: March 14, 2006, 09:56:07 AM » |
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Bahot achhe Mehek and Aryan, Keep it up guys!
Aryan you have depth in your shayari! kahan se moti dhundh late ho sahab!
Her alfaz main tere asman ki unchai hai,
Teri shayari main tere ishq ki gaherai hai! ishq hai uska sabse ucha sabse khass mehboob hai uska.... naam uska kya kahe hum khushboo hai uski uski sanso me...... |
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Aryaan
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«Reply #395 on: March 14, 2006, 07:34:56 PM » |
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Bahot achhe Mehek and Aryan, Keep it up guys!
Aryan you have depth in your shayari! kahan se moti dhundh late ho sahab!
Her alfaz main tere asman ki unchai hai,
Teri shayari main tere ishq ki gaherai hai! Bohat shukriya BeNam... shayeri ka talluq dil ke jazbaat se hai.. wohi likhne ki koshish karta hoon... Btw Nice Reply... |
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«Reply #396 on: March 14, 2006, 07:39:34 PM » |
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that was too good aryan ji
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«Reply #397 on: March 14, 2006, 07:42:30 PM » |
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Apki chahato ne hume khash banaaya hai
saanso ne apki ruh ko mahkaya hai
bada khoosurat hai MAHBOOB humara
mohabbat mein uski har mukaam paya hai
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«Reply #398 on: March 14, 2006, 07:43:10 PM » |
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DIL IS KO PHIR SE YAAD KARTA HAI KYUN
MUJHE BAAR BAAR IS KA KHAYAAL AATA HAI KYUN
KYUN DIL MAIN SADA UTHTI HAI BAAR BAAR
KHWABOO MAIN MUJHE WOH SATATA HAI KYUN...
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mehek
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«Reply #399 on: March 14, 2006, 08:07:52 PM » |
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thanx so much aryaan .. benamchitra.. tushar and kaiynath.. bohat khoob likha hai sabne.. aryaanji baat toh sach kahi hai.. hum bhi bas koshish hi karrahe hain..
lab hain kuch keh nahi paate.. aankhien laaj se jhuki hain aksar..
jazbaat-e-dil unse kaise kare hum bayan.. ek kalam hi toh sahara hai..
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chitra
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«Reply #400 on: March 14, 2006, 08:26:51 PM » |
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waakai dil ki baat ko kalam se hi bayaa kar sakte hai
lab humare unse kuchh kah nahi paate
unki nigaho ke teer sah bhi nahi paate
unki yaado ne ek tufaan uda rakha hai
na kare izhaar unse to hum rah bhi nahi paate
ajeeb haalaat ho jate hai isqh mein
Sharm ke maare unko dekh bhi nahi paate
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«Reply #401 on: March 14, 2006, 08:57:43 PM » |
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bohat ache chitra ji |
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«Reply #402 on: March 14, 2006, 09:01:01 PM » |
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Chitra!!!
Dil kahein kuch, nigah kuch kar jaati hai
Muhobaat mai, juban bhi kuch ka kuch kah jaaty hai
saanse rukati hai, deemag kahin so jaata hai
jab bhi atty hai wo samne, na jaane mujko kaya ho jata hai!!
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«Reply #403 on: March 14, 2006, 09:12:31 PM » |
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bohat khoob pooja ji
ishq ki hai daastan hum unki yaadon mein khoye rehte hain..
jaage jaage se kuch toh kuch soye soye rehte hain..
waqt ka hosh nahi bewaqt aankhien khwaab sanjhoti hai..
zuban hoti hain khaamosh par labon pe muskurahat hoti hai..
dil mein yaar ki tasveer par pal uska khayaal rehta hai..
uske siwae kahin bhi aur dil nahi lagta hai..
door hota hai woh kahin phir bhi uska ehsas hota hai..
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«Reply #404 on: March 15, 2006, 11:02:12 AM » |
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wah wah..... !!! MAHAK JI....BAHOOT KHOOB LIKHA HAI......
MOHBBAT MEIN YAHI HAAL HOTA HAI......
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