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«Reply #420 on: March 16, 2006, 03:15:03 PM » |
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hua hai mausam phir chaahat pe meherbaan.. dekh phir fizaon mein chaayi pyaar ki nami hai.. aaja ke.. beet na jaae yeh waqt bahaar ka.. tak rahein hai raahein kabse bas teri hi kami hai..
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«Reply #421 on: March 16, 2006, 03:34:27 PM » |
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kabse intzaar mein baithi yanhaa hoon par meri nazar teri aahat pe hai
kiya aaj solha singaar par roop mein nikhar teri chaht se hai
raat gujarane ko hai par aayega tu mere pyar ko wafa ki ummeed tere pyar se hai
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«Reply #422 on: March 16, 2006, 08:16:23 PM » |
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Good job all....Bohot hi mehekta hua thread hain jisme har shayari ek khoobsurat sa chitra sa dhikta hain..
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«Reply #423 on: March 16, 2006, 08:47:19 PM » |
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kabse intzaar mein baithi yanhaa hoon par meri nazar teri aahat pe hai
kiya aaj solha singaar par roop mein nikhar teri chaht se hai
raat gujarane ko hai par aayega tu mere pyar ko wafa ki ummeed tere pyar se hai Lo tumhara intezar khatam kar dete hain....... Aaj hum bhi wafa ke shagird hain...... Hum aaj apni Sanam ke deedar ki aas mein baithe hain..... Jhalak jo dekh le aapki humari aankhon..... Phir hum iss dunia k liye Nazre jhukaye baithe hain.........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~~**Badnaam Shayar**~~
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«Reply #424 on: March 16, 2006, 08:48:33 PM » |
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bahoot khoob Chitra and BS ji!!!
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«Reply #425 on: March 17, 2006, 10:53:13 AM » |
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har taraf pyar jahan mile hume har taraf wafa jahan mile hume aye meri zindagi le chal hume wahaan har taraf zindagi ho jahan pe
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«Reply #426 on: March 17, 2006, 02:52:01 PM » |
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very good sub ne bohet piyara likha hai. aik nazm arz hai ================= o-rey prame nuger ke basi batao mujhe ik baat kio hai itni udasi khamosh hai kio ye raat suno! tum apne piyaar ki jot , jagaey rakhna mun ki baat mun maiN , chhupaey rakhna na aaya ager, jis ka tujhe intzaar hai jis ke liya dil be-qraar hai tu suno! chup he rehna,kisi se na kehna kio ke! hai tere he haath piyaar ki laaj aaey ga ik din woh nainoN ke deep liye phir dum dum dholak baaje gi prame nagariya saaje gi... toot he jaey ga phir khamoshi ka ye raaj
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«Reply #427 on: March 17, 2006, 03:13:14 PM » |
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ahmad_rd JI..........
Atee sundar nazm hai..........
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«Reply #428 on: March 17, 2006, 06:16:27 PM » |
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kabse intzaar mein baithi yanhaa hoon par meri nazar teri aahat pe hai
kiya aaj solha singaar par roop mein nikhar teri chaht se hai
raat gujarane ko hai par aayega tu mere pyar ko wafa ki ummeed tere pyar se hai wow too good chitra...very nice hasratoo ka diya dil ne jalaya tha ek din... bahoo mein meri wo samaya tha ek din.. basaya tha unhe apni in aakhon mein... pyar se dekh mujhe muskuraya tha wo ek din... kash din phir laut ke wo aaye... pehlu mere phir se mere mehboob aa jaye...
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«Reply #429 on: March 17, 2006, 06:21:53 PM » |
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are wah jai ji aap tu bahut aacha likhte hai
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«Reply #430 on: March 17, 2006, 08:45:47 PM » |
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boaht khoob likha hai sabne.. thanx so much.. 
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«Reply #431 on: March 17, 2006, 08:56:47 PM » |
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kehta hai woh mujhe.. mujhse karke mohabbat kya paaogi.. kismat main nahi likha jo.. use khone ka gila kya karenge.. maana ke teri zindagi mein khushiyon ka koi makaam nahi.. gumzada kuch safar hamara bhi hai.. do aansu tere sang bhi baha lenge..
sorry offtrack but... just wrote it :?
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«Reply #432 on: March 17, 2006, 10:50:40 PM » |
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kehta hai woh mujhe.. mujhse karke mohabbat kya paaogi.. kismat main nahi likha jo.. use khone ka gila kya karenge.. maana ke teri zindagi mein khushiyon ka koi makaam nahi.. gumzada kuch safar hamara bhi hai.. do aansu tere sang bhi baha lenge..
sorry offtrack but... just wrote it :? wow superbsssssssss Mahek.......... bahot accha likha aap ne... Youn hee apne apne safar mein gum, kahee dur mai, kahee door tum chale jaa rahe the judaa judaa, mujhe aap kisaliye mil gaye...........
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«Reply #433 on: March 18, 2006, 11:27:53 AM » |
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Awesome....Mehek...&..Waheed Jee  tujhe dekhna chaahta hoon her pal shayad tujhse bohot pyar karta hoon kal tak to tujhe jaanta bhi na tha aaj tera intezaar karta hoon....
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«Reply #434 on: March 18, 2006, 11:31:19 AM » |
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VEry good all
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