PYARI SURAT...... (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on July 11, 2009, 09:53:11 AM
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USS PYARI SI SURAT KA
FIR EK BAAR DIDAAR DEH
TADAP RAHEY HAI HUM YAHA
ABB AUR NA INTEZAAR DEH

BHOOLEY SEY HI KABHI
HAMEY FIR WOH BAHAAR DEH
KHUSHBOO TERI PAWAN LAYE
HAMEY AISA APNA PYAR DEH



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com


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punam
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2009, 10:06:42 AM »
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bahut khoob jasbir ji....
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2009, 10:21:45 AM »
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Thanks Punam Ji


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cara
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«Reply #3 on: July 11, 2009, 10:36:29 AM »
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kya baat hai  jasbirsingh ji......

pyaari-pyaari surat teri,jab se dekhi hai mere yaar,
raat din tadafta rahun,karne ko tera didaar.
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2009, 02:30:19 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Jasbir ji..
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2009, 02:52:45 PM »
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Very good, nice effort Mr. Singh
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2009, 03:32:43 PM »
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Aaaye Haye.. Jasbir Bhai.. Itne dino se Baad leke bhi aaye to "PYaari Surat" .. Hahaha Behad Khubsoorat Aur Dilkash Alfaaz Likhe hain dost.. Lajawab aur Behtreef Rachna hai...  Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2009, 04:20:29 PM »
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Wah Jasbir Ji
kafi time baad nazar aaye
Hum to aapki rachnaen padhne aur apni padhwane ke liye betaab the
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2009, 04:31:32 PM »
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Waah Bohot Khoob Jasbir Ji..Bohot din baad nazar aaye aap.


Nice additions Cara Ji & Kaash Ji

Us Haseen Chehre Ka Phir Se Deedaar De
Muskurane Ka Bahana Ae Dil-e-Bahaar De

Tadap Kisi Kal Ye Dil Ki Kam Hoti Nahin
Aa Ae Jaan-e-Jahan, Is Dil Ko Tu Qarar De
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2009, 04:40:02 PM »
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kya baat hai  jasbirsingh ji......

pyaari-pyaari surat teri,jab se dekhi hai mere yaar,
raat din tadafta rahun,karne ko tera didaar.

THANKS CARA JI
and bahut hi khoob kaha aap ney

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2009, 04:41:01 PM »
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waah bahot khoob Jas ji

nice lines Cara ji


pyari si soorat hai pyaara sa husn hai
aashiqui ka noor aashik se kahan kum hai


Thanks Kaash Ji and wah kya baat kahi hai aap ney

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2009, 04:41:37 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Jasbir ji..

Thanks Sophi Ji

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2009, 04:42:07 PM »
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Very good, nice effort Mr. Singh

Thanks Hussain Ji

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2009, 04:43:31 PM »
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Aaaye Haye.. Jasbir Bhai.. Itne dino se Baad leke bhi aaye to "PYaari Surat" .. Hahaha Behad Khubsoorat Aur Dilkash Alfaaz Likhe hain dost.. Lajawab aur Behtreef Rachna hai...  Bahut Bahut Khoooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thanks Mann Ji, thanks a lot for your appreication.

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2009, 04:44:22 PM »
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Wah Jasbir Ji
kafi time baad nazar aaye
Hum to aapki rachnaen padhne aur apni padhwane ke liye betaab the
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI

Thanks Rastogi Ji, I too missed all your beautiful poems. Hope I am able to read them all soon.

Jasbir Singh
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