Qatil ya munsif

Javed Saaheeb ! A'adaab,

Aaj pehli baar aap se iss bazm mein ru-b-ru huye hai........ so, ab jaa.N pehchaa.N bhi ho jayegi....... bahut hi a'llatree.N Ghazal pe'sh ki hai aap ne. sab ash,a'ar saadagee aur achhe bayaan ke Haamil haiN


Shula hawaaun main sisakte dekha
Munsif qatil hi ko bante dekha

Subaa.Na'llah Ghazal ka a'gaaz bahut hi dil-ka'sh hai  

Husn bazaar main bikte dekha
Ishq sahra main bilakte dekha

waah bahut kh'uub...  Ishq aur Husn ka bayaa.N !!


Hunge samunder main tufan bahut
Sahil per khamoosh simat te dekha

waah .. yha Sahil aur Samundar ka kaafi Beh'tree.N i'semaal kiya hai!


Kalyun main hai yeh tamkanat kaisi
Phuloon ko hamne to bikharte dekha

Bahut Chubta huuya Sh'er likha hai .. waah waah !!

Khushk padun ke saai main bhi
Kuch dair musafir ko taher te dekha

Gustakhi Muaa'f ... yha dusri line mein gar "Kuch dair musafir ko teher te dekha" ki ba'jaye "dair ta'lak musafir ko teher te dekha" ho jaye to sh'er mein aur vajaN aa jayega  

kis kis ko libade pahnain
har shaqhs ko yahan simat te dekha

Iss tarah ke zazbaat ko bahut se shairo.n ne mukhtalif andaaz main kaha hai lekin aapne jo isse sehazta di hai wo iss ki khoobsurti badhati hai.. waah !!

Aakhir javed khahan tak rooke
Har har qadam ko bahekte dekha

Javed jee ...... agar dusri line ko kucch yun kha jaye "Har ik qadam ko behekte dekha" to sh'er aur jiada achcha lagega

dil ko chuu lene wali Ghazal likhi hai ... daad qa'buul kijiye !!  


HumTum

Ham tum sahab  aur   Roja  ji
Is zarra nawazish ka shukria

Hum tum sahab
 islah ka intahi mashkoor hun
magar  khusk paid ke neeche koi bhi kuch pal hi taher sakta hai
Maine har aik hi likha tha magar luqnat aa rahi hai isliye badalna pada

aap ki muhabbat ka behad mamnoon aur mashkoor hun

wallaha javed bhai....

Wah wah Javed ji n Hum Tum ji bahut khoob,very beautiful creation.excellent

Bahut khoob