QWAhish _-_-_-_(arif)

by arifuddin on June 22, 2010, 11:03:09 AM
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Na kamiyo ki thokaro se Khota sikka hogaya hu'n
Izhaar-e-mohar laga Mohabbat k Bazaar me Chala de mujhko

kab se Parwaana Ban K bin bina rahaa Hu'n Ird Gird
Chal Ab to shamma Ban kar Jalaa De Mujhko

Juda'ie K sadme se Aansu na Nikle Dard Badhta hi rahaa ...
Ishq ka Khilaona Cheen Kar Dost Koi to Rulade Mujhko

Thak Kar Leta Hu'n Janaze me Apne Neend K Sabab
Sathiy-e-Safar Koi Maa'n banKar Jhula Jhulade Mujhko
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2010, 01:36:59 PM »
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Dear arifuddin! Aapki koshish achchhi hai. Isi tarah likhte rahiye.

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Na kamiyo ki thokaro se Khota sikka hogaya hu'n
Izhaar-e-mohar laga Mohabbat k Bazaar me Chala de mujhko

kab se Parwaana Ban K bin bina rahaa Hu'n Ird Gird
Chal Ab to Parwaana Ban kar Jalaa De Mujhko

Juda'ie K sadme se Aansu na Nikle Dard Badhta hi rahaa ...
Ishq ka Khilaona Cheen Kar Dost Koi to Rulade Mujhko

Thak Kar Leta Hu'n Janaze me Apne Neend K Sabab
Sathiy-e-Safar Koi Maa'n banKar Jhula Jhulade Mujhko

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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2010, 07:19:54 AM »
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bahut khoob Arif ji...!!!
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