rab kre manzoor[debi].............Bhupinder DHILLON

by BhupinderDHILLON on September 19, 2012, 02:45:16 PM
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Rab kare manzoor iko gal asi chahiye,
tu ankhan samme hove jado dunia to jaiye.
es shart te pugge sanu pota potta hona,
tu gine poteyan te assi ginti ch aayiye.
tere kol beh k sanu mehsus hunda ki,
satho hunda ni beyan kine sher likhi jayiye,
nigha tere vall jave ta gun disde ne lakhan,
ayab disde crora jdo shise samme jaiye.
Kine BHUPI de gunah vakhshon wale rehnde,
dede agiya k mafiyan mangan kado aayiye.
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Bhupinder DHILLON
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2012, 04:20:49 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bari changi shayri kardey ho tusy. vadhai hovay
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2012, 04:41:51 PM »
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bahut khoob bahut hi badhiya
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