|| Rahne do....Priya...||

by manzil-e-ishq on March 21, 2011, 06:09:06 AM
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Bas aakihiri ye salam rahne do
Hoto pe apne mera naam rahne do....

Yado me teri main bhi hoon kahi....
Dil ko itna hi aaram rahne do...

khatao ka apni jikr na karna....
wafaon ka mujh pe iljaam rahne do....

Mana adhuri hai ye kahani....
lekin iska anjaam rahne do.....

Bas aakihiri ye salam rahne do
Hoto pe apne mera naam rahne do....
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2011, 06:18:07 AM »
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Bahut Accha Likha Hai Priya Ji.. Bahut khoooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2011, 06:44:44 AM »
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 Applause Applause
Wah Bahut Khoob Priya Ji..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2011, 06:46:24 AM »
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good
lekin aisa laga jaise Antara se hi start kiya or antare par hi khatm kia!!
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2011, 09:53:23 AM »
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Good poem Priya-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Arre yu kis se ruth rahi ho tum.....
aur kyu ye aakhri salaam bhej rahi ho...
Aysi bhi kya jaldi hai....
Kahaani jo adhuri hai usse poori hone do....



Bas aakihiri ye salam rahne do
Hoto pe apne mera naam rahne do....

Yado me teri main bhi hoon kahi....
Dil ko itna hi aaram rahne do...

khatao ka apni jikr na karna....
wafaon ka mujh pe iljaam rahne do....

Mana adhuri hai ye kahani....
lekin iska anjaam rahne do.....

Bas aakihiri ye salam rahne do
Hoto pe apne mera naam rahne do....

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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2011, 03:35:22 PM »
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Bahut khoob priya ji behad masum sa kalaam raha ye apka...
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2011, 03:43:23 PM »
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Bahut Khub Priya JI
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2011, 01:42:39 PM »
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bht bht shukria mann ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2011, 01:43:13 PM »
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shukria tauhid ji....

Applause Applause
Wah Bahut Khoob Priya Ji..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: March 22, 2011, 01:44:16 PM »
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sahi kaha nirala ji....
adhuri to lag rahi thi bas puri karne ka man nahi kiya....
thanx for liking my effort...

good
lekin aisa laga jaise Antara se hi start kiya or antare par hi khatm kia!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2011, 01:45:07 PM »
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thanx koyal....
as usuall very sweet reply...

Good poem Priya-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Arre yu kis se ruth rahi ho tum.....
aur kyu ye aakhri salaam bhej rahi ho...
Aysi bhi kya jaldi hai....
Kahaani jo adhuri hai usse poori hone do....



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«Reply #11 on: March 22, 2011, 01:45:28 PM »
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thanx alot geet ji...

Bahut khoob priya ji behad masum sa kalaam raha ye apka...
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«Reply #12 on: March 22, 2011, 01:46:00 PM »
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shukria rishi ji...

Bahut Khub Priya JI
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«Reply #13 on: March 22, 2011, 01:46:21 PM »
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thanx alot shihab...

Bahut Badhiya Mazil e Ishq Ji...

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...


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«Reply #14 on: March 22, 2011, 01:57:22 PM »
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Arre mere prashno ka jawaab tou de...? likhna do mast lines...

Sakhee puchha hai jo tumse usska jawaab do
Prashno ko mere yu he anuttrit na rehne do

thanx koyal....
as usuall very sweet reply...

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