read it and continue

by mudassirali on January 17, 2007, 03:34:06 PM

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mudassirali

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Assalamalikum, doston merey sath kal ek waqya hua balkey yoon kahiye ki waqye ki shuruaat to kaafi pehley ho gayi thi par sabaq kal mila.Aur us key foram baad merey zehen mein ek sheyr paeda hua,phir socha woh aap sey bhi share karoon aap log isey parhiyey aur isi moozoo par apney khayalat ka izhaar shairi key zariye karein takey ek poori nazm tayyar ho. to sheyr arz hai....

dushman ko manaa sakta hoon main aik hi pal mein

Apno ko mananey mein ek umr guzarti hai.


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read it and continue

«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2007, 06:48:48 PM »

Ok, here I add in concern of ur given sher.

"Auro.n ko dikha sakto hun apni himmat ..
Tujhpe jataane mein umr guzarti hai !!!! "

Hope it matched your lines...


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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2007, 11:07:10 AM »

Continuing on the same....................

Kehte hain bohot tez hai waqt ki raftaar, lekin
Tujh bin, har lamhe main ek umr guzarti hai !!!!


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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2007, 04:59:59 PM »

dil ko todna to pal bhar ka kaam hai
dilon ko jodne main ek umr gujarti hai!!!!!!!!!

hope it will suit ur lines


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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2007, 09:05:52 AM »

hmm....
bahut khoob likha hain sabne..

Ho jaati hai roz apne waqt par subah..
Par katra katra pighal kar har raat guzarti hai..

Sorry.."umra guzarti hai"..se kuch banna nahi..!!

hope aapki lines se match karega..!!