Rooh ko rooh, na jaaney kahaan bulaatee hai?

by abdbundeli on September 27, 2008, 04:59:38 PM
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Sadaa-e-yaar key chaltey bahaar aatee hai!
Zarrey-zarrey mein eik andaleeb gaatee hai!
Dil-o-dimaag mein kuchh goonjataa hai rah-rah kar!
Rooh ko rooh, na jaaney kahaan bulaatee hai?

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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2008, 09:49:57 PM »
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Nice One Abd JI,.
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2008, 10:29:50 PM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji... Thumbs UP


Mein zinda hun par meri yaaden tere saath hai
Mein chup hun phir bhi dil mein tere pyaar hai
Mujhe tere pyaar ke talab se duniya veeran lagi
Mein zinda hun par meri rooh pe sirf tumara naam hai
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«Reply #3 on: September 28, 2008, 02:36:35 AM »
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Sadaa-e-yaar key chaltey bahaar aatee hai!
Zarrey-zarrey mein eik andaleeb gaatee hai!
Dil-o-dimaag mein kuchh goonjataa hai rah-rah kar!
Rooh ko rooh, na jaaney kahaan bulaatee hai?

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Kya khoob kaha aapne Abd Ji...behad khoobsurat  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 28, 2008, 02:37:15 AM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji... Thumbs UP


Mein zinda hun par meri yaaden tere saath hai
Mein chup hun phir bhi dil mein tere pyaar hai
Mujhe tere pyaar ke talab se duniya veeran lagi
Mein zinda hun par meri rooh pe sirf tumara naam hai


Nice lines Honey  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #5 on: September 28, 2008, 08:25:31 AM »
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JINHONE EK UMR LAGA DI APNI PEHCHAN BANANE ME
BAD MARNE KE UNHE DO DIN ME DUNIYA BHOOL JATI HAIN

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«Reply #6 on: September 28, 2008, 01:41:29 PM »
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sajid_ghayel ji,
Aap kaa kahnaa sahee hai; par Urdu key eik bahut hee oonchey shaayar huye hain Pt. Brij Narayan Sharma 'Chakbast' (Sorry, I'm not sure about spelling.), jinhon ney likhaa thaa:
"Ba'ad marney key zamaaney ney bahut yaad kiyaa!"
Is key pahiley ki laain yaad naheen aa rahee hai! Aapki dono laainey achchheen hain.
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«Reply #7 on: September 28, 2008, 01:48:00 PM »
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ABD JEE AAP HI KI BAAT PE DO LINE YAAD AA GAYEE BOHAT PEHLE KAHI SUNI THI PAR SARE ALFAZ THEEK SE YAAD NAHI KISI TARAH JOD TOD KE IRSHAD KIYA HAIN

SARA SHEHAR SHARIK HUA USKE JANAZE ME
WOH SHAKS JO TANHAIYO KE KHAUF SE MAR GAYA

sajid_ghayel ji,
Aap kaa kahnaa sahee hai; par Urdu key eik bahut hee oonchey shaayar huye hain Pt. Brij Narayan Sharma 'Chakbast' (Sorry, I'm not sure about spelling.), jinhon ney likhaa thaa:
"Ba'ad marney key zamaaney ney bahut yaad kiyaa!"
Is key pahiley ki laain yaad naheen aa rahee hai! Aapki dono laainey achchheen hain.
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«Reply #8 on: September 28, 2008, 05:54:43 PM »
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sajid_ghayel ji,
Bahut hi umdaa sheir hai! Kahney waaley ney kyaa hi khoob kahaa hai!! Bahut hi gahree baat hai!
Zindagee apnee rahee us key hawaaley, ae 'abd',
Jis ko samjhaa thaa bahut gair, woh apnaa niklaa!

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Celmira ji,
Sukriyah qubool kareyn!
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«Reply #9 on: September 28, 2008, 06:10:59 PM »
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Bohat khoob Abd ji... Thumbs UP
Mein zinda hun par meri yaaden tere saath hai
Mein chup hun phir bhi dil mein tere pyaar hai
Mujhe tere pyaar ke talab se duniya veeran lagi
Mein zinda hun par meri rooh pe sirf tumara naam hai


honeyrose ji,
Aap ney bahut hi khoob kahaa hai! Badhaayee!!


Jo dil mein panaptaa hai, laboun par naheen aataa:
Us ko hi samajhdaar bataatey hain, ishq hai!!

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«Reply #10 on: September 29, 2008, 08:24:12 AM »
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JO MEHFILO KI RAUNAK THA BHEED ME MUSKARATA THA
JAB USE THEEK SE JANA TO BOHAT TANHA NIKLA
                                         
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sajid_ghayel ji,
Bahut hi umdaa sheir hai! Kahney waaley ney kyaa hi khoob kahaa hai!! Bahut hi gahree baat hai!
Zindagee apnee rahee us key hawaaley, ae 'abd',
Jis ko samjhaa thaa bahut gair, woh apnaa niklaa!

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Celmira ji,
Sukriyah qubool kareyn!
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«Reply #11 on: September 29, 2008, 09:25:43 AM »
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honeyrose ji,
Aap ney bahut hi khoob kahaa hai! Badhaayee!!


Jo dil mein panaptaa hai, laboun par naheen aataa:
Us ko hi samajhdaar bataatey hain, ishq hai!!

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Shukriya Abd ji..

nice lines Abd ji...




JO MEHFILO KI RAUNAK THA BHEED ME MUSKARATA THA
JAB USE THEEK SE JANA TO BOHAT TANHA NIKLA
                                         
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Nice lines sajid ji...
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«Reply #12 on: September 29, 2008, 09:40:24 AM »
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JO MEHFILO KI RAUNAK THA BHEED ME MUSKARATA THA
JAB USE THEEK SE JANA TO BOHAT TANHA NIKLA
                                         
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 Bahut khoob sajid_ghayel ji,

Tum naheen ho, to bharee bheerh mein tanhaa hoon mein;
Pahlu-e-yaar mein Makkah bhi hai, Madeenah bhi!


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«Reply #13 on: September 29, 2008, 12:53:17 PM »
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abd jee sambhal ke yeh umar nahi hain itna bada risk lene ki abhi to tauba ke liye bhi time kam hain
Bahut khoob sajid_ghayel ji,

Tum naheen ho, to bharee bheerh mein tanhaa hoon mein;
Pahlu-e-yaar mein Makkah bhi hai, Madeenah bhi!


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«Reply #14 on: September 29, 2008, 01:30:02 PM »
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Sajid ji,
Woh meyraa YAAR hai, jis ko Khudaa bhi kahtey hain:
Jis key pahloo mein ka'ayinaat-o-baqaa hain mouzoon;
Aur, naacheez bhi, us kaa hi eik hissaa hai!
Us kee suhbat sey, bhalaa, toubaa kyoun karoongaa mein?

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