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woh jo ruksaar pe yun parda giraye huye hai Maluum hai unhe ke hum samne aaye huye hai
Girega parda jawaagar ke ruksaar se ik pal mein Yahi baat hum apne dil ko aaj samjaye huye hai
Shayad us pardanaseen ko yeh kabar tak na ho ke woh suli pe hamare dil-o-jaan latkaye huye hai
'E husn ab be-parda ho ja yeh ishq ki hai gusarish Peene ko teri nigaah se paimano ko tukraye huye hai
Aur kab tak tadpayigi hume 'e husn-e-naazneeen Hum pehle se hi bahut tere husn ke staye huye hai
Noor tere ruksaar ka dhika bhi de apne ashiq ko Armaan-e-dil-e-madhoshi ke hum sjaye huye hai
Padh ke hamari gazal dostoon ne hum se yeh kha Aaj phir HumTum ji aap masti mien aaye huye hai !! [/color] 
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2006, 01:21:31 AM » |
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Aaj phir HumTum ji aap masti mien aaye huye hai !! [/color] :wink:
Bahut khoob :D
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2006, 01:22:04 AM » |
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Yeh lajja yeh sharam-o-haya deewana karti hai yeh aada deewani hun main mohabbet ki ki aaj tum bhi hum inpe fida
yeh naino ka jadu mohabbet kare bekabu uns sa uthta hai dil main yeh hai ishq ka jadu
tahpati hai gudgudati hai maan bhi bahelati hai noor sa chare wali tumko deewana banati hai
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2006, 12:17:49 PM » |
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bahut khoob tosha ji , humtum ji..
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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2006, 12:25:40 PM » |
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Parda-e-rukhsaar kiya hai to kya gunah kiya hai, Husn-e-jalwe se tum jal na jao hamne yeh reham kiya hai, Beparda ho gaye to aur ilzaam aayega k husn waalo ne tumhe bekaraar kiya hai...
gesu's koshish!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2006, 01:23:14 PM » |
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Aaj phir HumTum ji aap masti mien aaye huye hai !! [/color] :wink:
Bahut khoob :D
Rajbir Thanks a Billion Veer ji;) Cheers !!! bbbbbhhhhhuuuuuuurrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaa !!!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2006, 01:25:51 PM » |
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Tosha, Gesu
Aap ne kya jawaab diya hai :D
Aur HumTum-->Cheers :wink:
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2006, 01:26:49 PM » |
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too gud Humtum, Tosha n Gesu..
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2006, 01:28:59 PM » |
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Aap bhi kuch gode gode....I mean good good likhti :D
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2006, 01:31:26 PM » |
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Tosha Ji[/u]
Bahut Khoob !!!
Dil mein soye jazbaaton ko jagaya aap ne Haseen khawaboon ka ashiyan sjaya aap ne Na tha need pe pehra kissi ka na yaddon mein dera Pehle to mein yun na tha ahsiq banaya aap ne !!
Gesu Ji[/u]
Gud One !!!
Parda Ruksaar se hatate to kucch aur baat hoti Aap ada se muskurate to kucch aur baat hoti Yun to ik sagar se bhi ho jayega nasha hume Aap ankhoon se pilate to kucch aur baat hoti !!
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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2006, 01:36:31 PM » |
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Parda Ruksaar se hatate to kucch aur baat hoti Aap ada se muskurate to kucch aur baat hoti Yun to ik sagar se bhi ho jayega nasha hume Aap ankhoon se pilate to kucch aur baat hoti !! HumTum Wah ! wah ! wah ! Mazaa aa gaya ! Lagta hai janaab likhne ke mood mein hain :D Rajbir
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2006, 01:38:06 PM » |
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main in dono gr8 poets ke aage kya likhon.....me not that gud in writing na...
agar yeh parda na kiya hota to nazarein mil hi jaati fir dil bhi dhadakta aur lab sil jaate aise aalam mein hum kya karte.. aap hote saamne.. tab hum kis raaste se bach kar guzarte
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2006, 01:45:57 PM » |
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Rajbir Ji [/u]
Honth hai lal surak se kano mein baali Bal khati bel si chal hai uski matwali Na thi aaj kucch likhne ki tam-mna meri Uth gyi qalam, dekhi jo shaksiyat gazal wali;)
Nikki Ji[/u]
Hume Mahan shayaar keh kar kyun Shayroon ki besti kar rhe ho :?: Bahut achcha likha hai aap ne !!
Lakh parda kar lo sanam, hum nazara dekh hi lenge Tadne wale to Janab qayamat ki nazar rakhte hai !!;)
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2006, 01:53:52 PM » |
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aji humne to tareef ki thi aap galat samajh gaye.....too gud again...
lakh chupaya humne husn pardon mein jaane kaise hum unko nazar aa hi gaye
woh jaate jaate...yeh dil hamara dhadka hi gaye na thi tamanna abhi dil lagane ki khud apne hi haathon apne dil pe chot khaane ki magar na chala zor apne hi dil par.. jab woh saamne se zara muskura kar gaye
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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2006, 01:57:28 PM » |
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Nikki, HumTum
Excellent ! Lagta hai sab log easter holidays se waapas aa gaye hain ! :D
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