saanssson kii mala per

by Ghazal on July 22, 2005, 09:05:10 AM
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saasson kii mala per simraa hai uskaa naam
pram key path per chalte chalte ho gayi mein badnaam
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2005, 09:18:19 AM »
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ishq ki betabi ko
wo besabra kya samjhyga

jiski betabi ney
uska khud kaa gher jalaya hai

ishq hai wi hasaas
jisey chuuney kaa
khaab her dil ney sajaya hai
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2005, 05:27:33 PM »
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hmmmmmmmmm...............nice  Ghazal............  tongue3...........
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«Reply #3 on: July 25, 2005, 08:35:38 AM »
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thx waheed  


app bhi bohot accha likhte ho
hum bhi sikh rahy hai
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«Reply #4 on: July 25, 2005, 06:38:07 PM »
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very nice ghazal............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2005, 06:42:35 PM »
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"ishq ki betabi ko
wo besabra kya samjhyga

jiski betabi ney
uska khud kaa gher jalaya hai "............Bahut achaa modern paaroo!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 26, 2005, 05:06:40 PM »
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thx waheed  


app bhi bohot accha likhte ho
hum bhi sikh rahy hai


ur  welcome Ghazal.....................tongue3  .......keep  it  up.........tongue3.........thanx  Ghazal.................tongue3

na  jaane  kya  hua  khud  kuch  bhool  gaya  main
mujhe alwida kahne ki uski ada  abhi  tak yaad  hai  humein......
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2005, 08:06:17 AM »
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thx isha &waheed & nidhi

app sab bhi bohot accha likhte ho

dil chahta hai jisey wo pass mara hai
pass hota hue bhi wo bohot door hai

dil ki chaht wahi hai
jesay paaney ki chahat dil ney chor dee hai

zindgi ney diya hai jo gum
unka bhojh nahi hai kisi sey kam

dil ki aawaz dil mein hi dabi hai
jo chikhney ko tadap rahi hai
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