Saari Raat..!!............Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on October 26, 2012, 06:35:55 AM
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Dhundhte Rahe Tujhe Apni Karwaton Mein Saari Raat,
Jagta Raha Mera Dil, Teri Hasraton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Chand Bhi Takta Hai Mujh Ko Roz Udaas Nazaron Se,
Dono Ko Kahan Neend, Ab Chahaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Ek Haseen Khwaab Ban Kar Sama Jao Tum Mujh Mein,
Muskura Lenge Saath Hum, Fursaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Labon Se Labon Ki Saari Shikayatein Chura Lo Tum,
Jaage Hai Bohat Hum Tanha, Ulfaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Baahon Mein Sar Rakh Kar Mujhe Aaj Kho Jaane Do,
Tera Dil Hi Mera Dar Hai, Mohabbaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Shireen Hakani
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«Reply #1 on: October 26, 2012, 06:42:19 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 26, 2012, 06:42:57 AM »
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shirin ji,
 jabardast gazal kahi hai aapne, har sher bahut hi umda dil ko chhoo lene vala hai, bahut bahut badhaai.
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«Reply #3 on: October 26, 2012, 07:43:50 AM »
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Keya bait hai Shireen Hakani bhai bahut hat kar shayri kari hai.
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2012, 07:49:59 AM »
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Keya bait hai Shireen Hakani bhai bahut hat kar shayri kari hai.
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Sheel didi Shukariya!!! Waise main bahen hoon Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2012, 08:14:22 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2012, 08:53:25 AM »
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heheheheheheh.... tongue3

Sheel didi Shukariya!!! Waise main bahen hoon Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2012, 08:57:26 AM »
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hmmmmmmm.... soch rahaa hoon taarif kahaan se shuru karun... shabdon ki sundartaa ki taarif karun, ehsaason ki tarif karun, aapke likhne ke andaaz ki taarif karun yaa sirf aur sirf aapki taarif karun.... sach me jaadu hai aapne lekhni mein.. shabdon se taarif karna mumkin nahi mere liye... kuch bhi likhun is geet ki taarif me kam hi hogaa.... sach me... bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne.... iski taarif ko shabdon me baandhnaa mere liye mumkin nahi.... bahut bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shireen bhaai...heheheheh... Shireen ji.... tongue3

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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2012, 09:42:14 AM »
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No doubt very beautiful poetry. Mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2012, 09:48:03 AM »
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wah wah bahut khub shireen ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: October 26, 2012, 10:26:01 AM »
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Wah kya bat hai kya bat hai
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«Reply #11 on: October 26, 2012, 10:37:16 AM »
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Shireen Jee Aadaab!


Bahut khoob jee bahut khoob... Badia achchi kalaam kahi hai...
Ahsaas O khayaal se lekar bayaani tak behad khoob..

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: October 26, 2012, 03:07:50 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut bahut hi umda peshkash
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«Reply #13 on: October 26, 2012, 03:29:03 PM »
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Dhundhte Rahe Tujhe Apni Karwaton Mein Saari Raat,
Jagta Raha Mera Dil, Teri Hasraton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Chand Bhi Takta Hai Mujh Ko Roz Udaas Nazaron Se,
Dono Ko Kahan Neend, Ab Chahaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Ek Haseen Khwaab Ban Kar Sama Jao Tum Mujh Mein,
Muskura Lenge Saath Hum, Fursaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Labon Se Labon Ki Saari Shikayatein Chura Lo Tum,
Jaage Hai Bohat Hum Tanha, Ulfaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Baahon Mein Sar Rakh Kar Mujhe Aaj Kho Jaane Do,
Tera Dil Hi Mera Dar Hai, Mohabbaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Shireen Hakani



superb composition gr8 ma'am
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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2012, 05:59:36 PM »
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Dhundhte Rahe Tujhe Apni Karwaton Mein Saari Raat,
Jagta Raha Mera Dil, Teri Hasraton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Chand Bhi Takta Hai Mujh Ko Roz Udaas Nazaron Se,
Dono Ko Kahan Neend, Ab Chahaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Ek Haseen Khwaab Ban Kar Sama Jao Tum Mujh Mein,
Muskura Lenge Saath Hum, Fursaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Labon Se Labon Ki Saari Shikayatein Chura Lo Tum,
Jaage Hai Bohat Hum Tanha, Ulfaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Baahon Mein Sar Rakh Kar Mujhe Aaj Kho Jaane Do,
Tera Dil Hi Mera Dar Hai, Mohabbaton Mein Saari Raat..!!

Shireen Hakani

nice
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