Saaya

by Maira on December 11, 2007, 12:03:44 AM

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Maira

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Tujhe Apna Saaya banakar chal bhi lun main,,,
Par darr kuch Yun lagta hai ki,,
Saaye bhi chodd jaatey hain Andheron main.....


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Roja

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Re: Saaya

«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2007, 02:38:41 AM »

hmm .. nice start but adhuri si lagi..


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Talat

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Re: Saaya

«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2007, 10:50:13 AM »

Nice....Keep it up !


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Shikha12

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Re: Saaya

«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2007, 09:20:50 AM »

Good Work Maira.. Usual Smile


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diya_barsat

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Re: Saaya

«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2007, 09:30:34 AM »

Nice one loved it


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Maira

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Re: Saaya

«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2007, 10:56:14 PM »

Bohot shukriya sabhi ka.,,,ye adhuri hai aur shayaad mere liye rahegi hamesha kyunki ye khud meri sabse pehli shayari hai and jissey main hamesha yaad rakhungi


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Re: Saaya

«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2007, 11:09:13 PM »

bahut khoob likha hai.. aur jahan tak adhurepan ka sawal hai

Voh kahte hain ke hamari baat adhuri hain
jan-e-man hamare lafzo ki lakeeren poori hain
tumne dekha hi nahi tabhi to ye doori hain
ab kaise kahen bagair tumhare ye sanse bhi adhuri hain