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Maira

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Saaya

« on: December 10, 2007, 07:03:44 PM »

Tujhe Apna Saaya banakar chal bhi lun main,,,
Par darr kuch Yun lagta hai ki,,
Saaye bhi chodd jaatey hain Andheron main.....


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Re: Saaya

« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2007, 09:38:41 PM »

hmm .. nice start but adhuri si lagi..


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Re: Saaya

« Reply #2 on: December 11, 2007, 05:50:13 AM »

Nice....Keep it up !


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Re: Saaya

« Reply #3 on: December 12, 2007, 04:20:50 AM »

Good Work Maira.. Usual Smile


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Re: Saaya

« Reply #4 on: December 12, 2007, 04:30:34 AM »

Nice one loved it


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Re: Saaya

« Reply #5 on: December 14, 2007, 05:56:14 PM »

Bohot shukriya sabhi ka.,,,ye adhuri hai aur shayaad mere liye rahegi hamesha kyunki ye khud meri sabse pehli shayari hai and jissey main hamesha yaad rakhungi


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Re: Saaya

« Reply #6 on: December 14, 2007, 06:09:13 PM »

bahut khoob likha hai.. aur jahan tak adhurepan ka sawal hai

Voh kahte hain ke hamari baat adhuri hain
jan-e-man hamare lafzo ki lakeeren poori hain
tumne dekha hi nahi tabhi to ye doori hain
ab kaise kahen bagair tumhare ye sanse bhi adhuri hain


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tujhe dekha to yeh khayal aaya
tujhe banaya khuda ne, ya khud hi chala aaya

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Re: Saaya

« Reply #7 on: December 14, 2007, 06:12:06 PM »

Maira, Mask

Bahut khoob ! Nice going Usual Smile


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Re: Saaya

« Reply #8 on: December 14, 2007, 06:14:09 PM »

thank you mitra Rajbir.


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tujhe dekha to yeh khayal aaya
tujhe banaya khuda ne, ya khud hi chala aaya

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Re: Saaya

« Reply #9 on: December 14, 2007, 06:19:56 PM »

Thnx rajbir and very nice,,mask..bohot achha likha hai appne,,aur sahi maney main matlab samjhaya mere adhure se lafzon ka Usual Smile


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