Sadiyo Ke Baad Muskuraya..!!....................Shireen Hakani

by Shireen Hakani on August 30, 2012, 06:35:54 AM
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Palke Khulte Hi Dekha Aankho Ne Yeh Nazara,
Socha Na Tha Aayega Khat Tumhara Itna Pyara,
Ehsaas Hua Apni Udaasi Ka Us Lamha Dil Ko,
Jab Sadiyo Ke Baad Muskuraya Chehra Humara..!!

Is Mehakte Kagaz Se Na Judai Hogi Ek Pal Gawara,
Tum Paas Na Sahi Tumhare Lafz Bane Mera Sahara,
Besh-Kimati Alfazo Ka Tohfa Saz Kar Aaya Khat Mein,
Likha Hai Janam Ta-Umar Main Hoon Pyar Tumhara..!!


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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 06:41:57 AM »
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waah waah bahut hee laajwaab qataa shireen ji mazaa aa gayaa aapne ise dil kee gahraaiyon se kahaa hai
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 07:04:31 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 08:28:56 AM »
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Palke Khulte Hi Dekha Aankho Ne Yeh Nazara,
Socha Na Tha Aayega Khat Tumhara Itna Pyara,
Ehsaas Hua Apni Udaasi Ka Us Lamha Dil Ko,
Jab Sadiyo Ke Baad Muskuraya Chehra Humara..!!

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                     naaaaaaaaaaaaaaice
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2012, 09:19:01 AM »
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Palke Khulte Hi Dekha Aankho Ne Yeh Nazara,
Socha Na Tha Aayega Khat Tumhara Itna Pyara,
Ehsaas Hua Apni Udaasi Ka Us Lamha Dil Ko,
Jab Sadiyo Ke Baad Muskuraya Chehra Humara..!!

Shireen Hakani

Bahut khoob bahut umda likhtee hai aap shireen ji thoda qalaam ko aur lamba karne ki kosis kijiye.. Accha lage ga... Applause ApplauseApplause ApplauseApplause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2012, 09:59:12 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause   bahut khoob Shireen ji... ek dum masssttt likha hai aapne....!!!

tumhaari muskaan ko aaj humne mehsoos kar ke dekhaa
band aankhon se tumhaare chehre ko aaj padh ke dekhaa
kitni gehraayi hai in khoobsurat aankhon me tumhaare
khwaabon me rehke tumhaare aankhon me doob kar ke dekhaa...
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2012, 02:57:00 PM »
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Niceee
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 05:09:51 PM »
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Pankaj Jee Aur Hriday Jee us sher ke aage kuch aur bhi abhi likha hai...batayen kaisa bana hai...

Tumhare Likhe Lifafe Se Na Judai Hogi Ek Pal Gawara,
Tum Paas Na Sahi Tumhare Lafz Bane Mera Sahara,
Besh-Kimati Alfazo Ka Tohfa Saz Kar Aaya Khat Mein,
Likha Hai Janam Ta-Umar Main Hoon Pyar Tumhara..!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2012, 12:58:18 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2012, 02:30:52 AM »
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Nice.
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2012, 07:21:57 AM »
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beautiful Shireen ji....!!!

Pankaj Jee Aur Hriday Jee us sher ke aage kuch aur bhi abhi likha hai...batayen kaisa bana hai...

Tumhare Likhe Lifafe Se Na Judai Hogi Ek Pal Gawara,
Tum Paas Na Sahi Tumhare Lafz Bane Mera Sahara,
Besh-Kimati Alfazo Ka Tohfa Saz Kar Aaya Khat Mein,
Likha Hai Janam Ta-Umar Main Hoon Pyar Tumhara..!!

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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2012, 10:55:04 AM »
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Is sher ko aage aur likhne ki koshish ki hai...Umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2012, 10:59:01 AM »
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Is sher ko aage aur likhne ki koshish ki hai...Umeed hai aap sab ko pasand aayega!!!
Pankaj Jee Aur Hriday Jee us sher ke aage kuch aur bhi abhi likha hai...batayen kaisa bana hai...

Tumhare Likhe Lifafe Se Na Judai Hogi Ek Pal Gawara,
Tum Paas Na Sahi Tumhare Lafz Bane Mera Sahara,
Besh-Kimati Alfazo Ka Tohfa Saz Kar Aaya Khat Mein,
Likha Hai Janam Ta-Umar Main Hoon Pyar Tumhara..!!

BAhut khoob shireen ji bahut achcha laga keep writing and exploring ....Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2012, 02:40:23 PM »
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bahut bahut bahut hi khoob shireen ji.. Usual Smile

Applause Applause Applause
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