samandar thak gaya to kya - Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on August 10, 2010, 06:42:00 AM
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annsuo par baithkar mere koi yad chali aati he,
chupke se mujhe chhukar kuchh eisa keh jati he,
ki gujar jane do 'Abhi' jo gujarte he intezar me pal,
beet gayi ek jindagi to kya dil me tera naam ab bhi baaki he~~

palko pe yunhi sanjokar rakhe the kuchh sapne,
sapno ki gehraai se jude the kuchh pal apne,
reh jane do 'Abhi' reh gayi jo kasar tere pyar me,
beet gaye kuchh mukam to kya pyar ki jawaani ab bhi baaki he~~

paani tip tip karke girta he keh jata he kuchh kaan me,
wo baat kisi heere me kaha jo hoti he teri muskaan me,
chhoot jane do 'Abhi' chhoot gayi kuchh batein to kya,
fisal rahe he jindagi ki kaid se to kya aankhon me ek teri tasveer ab bhi baaki he~~

tere sath teri julfo ke saye me beeta he har pal,
tere ehsaas ke badal me saji meri har mehfil,
bichhad jane do 'Abhi' bichhadti he jo kadi koi,
samandar thak gaya to kya mere pyar ka dariya ab bhi baaki he~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2010, 07:17:53 AM »
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bht khubbb abhi ji...mazaa aagaya........
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2010, 01:52:52 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Janaab Abhi Saheb.

Khush Rahiye.
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2010, 02:07:46 PM »
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Good poem Abhi.... Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley

Kehdo maut se ki kuchh pal ruk jaaye
Abhee unke deedar ki ummeed baaki hai

Thak gaye hai agar pankh mere tou koi baat nahi
Dil mai udkar untak pahuchne k hosle baaki hain

annsuo par baithkar mere koi yad chali aati he,
chupke se mujhe chhukar kuchh eisa keh jati he,
ki gujar jane do 'Abhi' jo gujarte he intezar me pal,
beet gayi ek jindagi to kya dil me tera naam ab bhi baaki he~~

palko pe yunhi sanjokar rakhe the kuchh sapne,
sapno ki gehraai se jude the kuchh pal apne,
reh jane do 'Abhi' reh gayi jo kasar tere pyar me,
beet gaye kuchh mukam to kya pyar ki jawaani ab bhi baaki he~~

paani tip tip karke girta he keh jata he kuchh kaan me,
wo baat kisi heere me kaha jo hoti he teri muskaan me,
chhoot jane do 'Abhi' chhoot gayi kuchh batein to kya,
fisal rahe he jindagi ki kaid se to kya aankhon me ek teri tasveer ab bhi baaki he~~

tere sath teri julfo ke saye me beeta he har pal,
tere ehsaas ke badal me saji meri har mehfil,
bichhad jane do 'Abhi' bichhadti he jo kadi koi,
samandar thak gaya to kya mere pyar ka dariya ab bhi baaki he~~
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«Reply #4 on: August 10, 2010, 02:22:46 PM »
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too good abhi ji... icon_thumleft

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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2010, 12:37:25 AM »
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haaye... maar hi daaloge..... bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2010, 05:49:10 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya ap sabhi ka~ hauslaafjai ke liye~
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