Sanwariyaa! Sanjh huyee , ab aaou!

by abdbundeli on October 22, 2008, 10:41:24 AM
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Sanwariyaa! Sanjh huyee, ab aaou!

     Deewaalee aaney waalee hai:
           Aa, ujiyaalaa laaou!!

Saarhee pahinee hai koushaiyee;
Rang-wirangee jarhee sitaarey!
Aaou, deykho to, swaagat mein,
Ham ney pahiney gahney saarey!

          Galbahiyaan daaloongee, haar banoongee,
          Hrudyeshwar! Aa jaaou!!
               Sanwariyaa! Sanjh huyee , ab aaou!

Mein kyaa dey paauungee? Priyatam!
Tan-man kyaa? Jeewan hai arpit!
Sadaa tumhaaree rahee aadi sey;
Jo bhi thaa, kar chukee samarpit!!
                  
          Paa jaauungee garimaa prabhutaa saaree:
          Aaou, ang lagaaou!!
               Sanwariyaa! Sanjh huyee , ab aaou!
 
                      - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2008, 12:48:39 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Abd Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2008, 01:16:21 PM »
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Celmira ji!
Bahut-bahut shukriyah!
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2008, 01:20:00 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley 

Bohat khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2008, 02:04:36 PM »
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Thanks a lot honeyrose ji!
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2008, 02:09:20 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on October 22, 2008, 10:41:24 AM
Sanwariyaa! Sanjh huyee, ab aaou!

     Deewaalee aaney waalee hai:
           Aa, ujiyaalaa laaou!!

Saarhee pahinee hai koushaiyee;
Rang-wirangee jarhee sitaarey!
Aaou, deykho to, swaagat mein,
Ham ney pahiney gahney saarey!

          Galbahiyaan daaloongee, haar banoongee,
          Hrudyeshwar! Aa jaaou!!
               Sanwariyaa! Sanjh huyee , ab aaou!

Mein kyaa dey paauungee? Priyatam!
Tan-man kyaa? Jeewan hai arpit!
Sadaa tumhaaree rahee aadi sey;
Jo bhi thaa, kar chukee samarpit!!
                  
          Paa jaauungee garimaa prabhutaa saaree:
          Aaou, ang lagaaou!!
               Sanwariyaa! Sanjh huyee , ab aaou!
 
                      - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli



Abd ji..

Maasha-Allah... Bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne!!! Applause

Aapki har kavita pehle likhue hue andaaz se alag hoti hai.. Kuch na kuch nayapan humesha banaaye rakhte hai aap.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: October 22, 2008, 02:47:24 PM »
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Mahiya ji!
Shukriyah! Nazar-e-inaayat hai aapki! Isey Indian Classical Music (vocal) key andaaz mein likhaa gayaa hai! 'huyee' ki jagah 'bhayee' kaa isteymaal hotaa hai, mein ney originally 'bhayee' hi likhaa thaa; YoIndian dost usey 'bhaayee' na samajh leyn, iseeliye 'huyee' enter kiyaa hai!
                      - abd bundeli
                               
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2008, 04:24:54 PM »
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Bhaut Khoob Abd JI
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2008, 11:25:46 PM »
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Thanks Rajesh Harish ji!
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2008, 11:34:00 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahoot khoob Abd ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 23, 2008, 12:13:43 AM »
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Thanks a lot, Pooja ji!
            - abd bundeli
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