sard hawa ka jhonka

by saahill on March 05, 2012, 10:07:05 AM
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aaya jo sard hawa ka jhonka yun laga ke tum aaye .

Kabhi apke aane se baharein aa jaya karti thi
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2012, 11:19:28 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2012, 02:04:19 PM »
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badiya sahiiiil ji:)
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2012, 02:12:27 PM »
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Applause Applause
tere aane se machli hawae baharo ka kya kusur.
tuze dek ke hum machle humara kya kusur.
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2012, 03:20:15 AM »
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thx mkv ji and dolly ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2012, 04:51:37 AM »
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aaya jo sard hawa ka jhonka yun laga ke tum aaye .

Kabhi apke aane se baharein aa jaya karti thi

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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2012, 04:55:28 AM »
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aaya jo sard hawa ka jhonka yun laga ke tum aaye .

Kabhi apke aane se baharein aa jaya karti thi
baht khoob Sahill ji

ek bat puchni thi--
ek line me :tum: aur dusre line me :aap: shabd ka use krna sahi hota hai kya???
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2012, 09:05:53 AM »
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thx atish ji and saini ji
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