sard hawa ka jhonka

by saahill on March 05, 2012, 08:37:05 PM
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aaya jo sard hawa ka jhonka yun laga ke tum aaye .

Kabhi apke aane se baharein aa jaya karti thi
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2012, 09:49:28 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 06, 2012, 12:34:19 AM »
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badiya sahiiiil ji:)
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«Reply #3 on: March 06, 2012, 12:42:27 AM »
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tere aane se machli hawae baharo ka kya kusur.
tuze dek ke hum machle humara kya kusur.
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2012, 12:06:11 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2012, 01:50:15 PM »
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thx mkv ji and dolly ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2012, 03:21:37 PM »
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aaya jo sard hawa ka jhonka yun laga ke tum aaye .

Kabhi apke aane se baharein aa jaya karti thi

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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2012, 03:25:28 PM »
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aaya jo sard hawa ka jhonka yun laga ke tum aaye .

Kabhi apke aane se baharein aa jaya karti thi
baht khoob Sahill ji

ek bat puchni thi--
ek line me :tum: aur dusre line me :aap: shabd ka use krna sahi hota hai kya???
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2012, 07:35:53 PM »
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thx atish ji and saini ji
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