~ ~ * * Sardi Ki Dhoop Main ~ ~ * *:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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Ek bahoot he payari Yo-sathi ne Sardi ki dhoop per khumar-e-ishaq main likhne ko kaha.. kuch khas nahi likh saki, magar likhe bina rah bhi nahi saki... so jo man mai ayya, app sabke samne hai:

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj aa ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

madhoshi is sard dhoop main, man main agan lagaye
aise main aa ja sanam, dil ko kahin chain na aaye

meethi meethi ninia main, dhadkan behaki jaaye
de kar sanso ki apni garmi, le mohe ajj bachaye

adh-khule in naino main, ek teri tasveer hu sajaye
aa kar kar de poori mujhko, adhurepan main, man ghabraye

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye


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«Reply #1 on: December 31, 2008, 09:49:50 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 09:37:04 PM

Ek bahoot he payari Yo-sathi ne Sardi ki dhoop per khumar-e-ishaq main likhne ko kaha.. kuch khas nahi likh saki, magar likhe bina rah bhi nahi saki... so jo man mai ayya, app sabke samne hai:

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

madhoshi is sard dhoop main, man main agan lagaye
aise main aa ja sanam, dil ko kahin chain na aaye

meethi meethi ninia main, dhadkan behaki jaaye
de kar sanso ki apni garmi, le mohe ajj bachaye

adh-khule in naino main, ek teri tasveer hu sajaye
aa kar kar de poori mujhko, adhurepan main, man ghabraye

sardi ki dhoop main, gun gun, man mera gaaye
ajj ja sanam kahin se, bahon mai lo mujhe chupaye

Bahoot Khoob Poojaji
Har Tarah ki kaveeta me aapka Koi javab nahi hai awkayi Bahoot Khoob Likha hai aapne


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«Reply #2 on: December 31, 2008, 09:53:27 PM »

Quote from: pankshivam on December 31, 2008, 09:49:50 PM

Bahoot Khoob Poojaji
Har Tarah ki kaveeta me aapka Koi javab nahi hai awkayi Bahoot Khoob Likha hai aapne

Bahoot bahoot Shukaria Pank ji!!! Kuch apki kalam se bhi aa jaata, to acha lagta!!!


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«Reply #3 on: December 31, 2008, 10:07:28 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 09:53:27 PM

Bahoot bahoot Shukaria Pank ji!!! Kuch apki kalam se bhi aa jaata, to acha lagta!!!

Oki Poojaji
But Galtiyo pe Maf kijiyega
Ham Khumar wali line ke nahi hain

Har soo teri tamnna hai har oor tera tera hi khumar hai...
Lamho ko zindagi me badal de tere aagosh me vo jadu beshumar hai...

Tham gayi hai sadiyo ki talash aaj tere chehre pe muskan dekh kar,
Mere khuda meri tasal puri karne ke liye, banda tera tahe dil se shukrgujar hai...

Hosh hai na chain hai ab, teri yaado ke pal ab mujhe satate hain,
Muskurata hun apni hi madhoshi me, jane kitne khushiyo ke pal isme har bar hain...

~Pank~


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«Reply #4 on: December 31, 2008, 10:14:45 PM »

wah kaya baat hai Pank ji, her tarah ki shyri main app kamaal ka likhte hai. bahoot khoob. Apne kaya kasie soch liya ki app is lineke nahi hai acho acho ko apki kalam maat de de , Itne simple shabdo main itna gahra payar jhalka diya ki soch main hu ab kaya likhu...

meethi meethi yah sardi ki dhoop
us par chardta, tera yah khumar
dhadkano ke shor main
pukare, tera he naam baar baar

madhoshi bhare yah tere naina
chala rahe hai dil per kataar
mad mad teri is muskaan per
kon na jaaye dil haar


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«Reply #5 on: December 31, 2008, 10:42:31 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 10:14:45 PM

Bahoot Khoob Poojaji

Lijiye fir se khooshish kar rahe hain

Khushiyo ke rang zindagi me dikhne lage hain,
Kisi ke khwab aakar in aankho me aakar rukne lage hain...

Gungunati subaho ka ehsaah chhuta hai ab dil ko gehrayi tak,
Jaane kyun aaj ye kaisa ehsas hai jo sath hai meri parchayi tak...

Sard lahare dil ke armano ko jane kyun kuch yaad dila rahi hain,
Do pal hi beete hai usse bichadkar aur fir se uski yaad aa rahi hai...

Reh Reh kar uski jhuki palken samne aati hai,
Tanhayi uske iqrar sunkar bar bar muskurati hai...

Jeeana chahte hain jane kyu fir se ek zindagi uski khatir,
Jane kyu uske liye jeene ki tamanna fir se umad aati hai....

~pank~


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«Reply #6 on: December 31, 2008, 10:55:08 PM »

wah kaya baat hai... Apki aise koshishe real life main kisi ko bhi ghayal kar jaaye Pank ji... bahoot khoob..

dhoop ke inderdhanush sa ab yah jeevan lagne laga
sung sung tere sanam, her pal mera chalne laga

chan chan karti dhoop main, yaad teri sataye
tanhaai main bhi mare, pyar ka rang bharne laga

madhoshi ke alam main, her baat tumse kahne dil laga
jab yah utare sardi ki dhoop, tujhse phir laaz karne laga

kuch madhoshi tere naino ki, kuch sard dhoop ka sung dasne laga
dil ki baat lubo per aai, sajna tu mere man main basne laga


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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2008, 11:32:50 PM »

Bohat Achche, Pooja Ji,.
Nice Sharing Hai,.

And Good Work Pooja Didi,.
And pank Bhai,.


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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2008, 11:37:19 PM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 31, 2008, 11:32:50 PM

Bohat Achche, Pooja Ji,.
Nice Sharing Hai,.

And Good Work Pooja Didi,.
And pank Bhai,.

Yaha sharing kisne ki hai yah sab meri ajj ki likhi kavitaye hai lil bro... kyun dara rahe ho app


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«Reply #9 on: December 31, 2008, 11:55:02 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 31, 2008, 11:37:19 PM

Yaha sharing kisne ki hai yah sab meri ajj ki likhi kavitaye hai lil bro... kyun dara rahe ho app

Didi Sharing Maine Pehli Waali POst Ke Liye Kahi Hai,.
Jisme Aapne Likha Hai Ke Wo Kisi Aur Member Ne Likha Hai Karke,.

Waise Mere Kehne Ka Matlab Aap Salat samajh Gaye,.


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«Reply #10 on: December 31, 2008, 11:56:23 PM »

Jise Hum Seh Nahi Sakte, Wo Dard Hume Milta Kyun Hai,.
Jiski Hasrat Nahi, Wo Phool Chaman Mein Khilta Kyun Hai,.

Bachkar Chalte Hain, Hum Zindagi Ke Har Mukhaam Par "Jaana",.
Phir Mohabbat Ke Mukhaam Par Dil Phisalta Kyun Hai,.

Sab Tamaasha Hai Duniya Mein, Sachaai Ki Koi Haqeeqat Nahi,.
sab Dil Behlaa Lete Hain Dil Lagaakar, Kisi Ko Kisi Se Chaahat Nahi,.

______________________________________-Jaanasheen
Dil Se,.


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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2009, 12:01:07 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 31, 2008, 11:55:02 PM

Didi Sharing Maine Pehli Waali POst Ke Liye Kahi Hai,.
Jisme Aapne Likha Hai Ke Wo Kisi Aur Member Ne Likha Hai Karke,.

Waise Mere Kehne Ka Matlab Aap Salat samajh Gaye,.

Pyare se bhai mere, sawere sawere kitani baar kaha, hath munh dho kar, chai -dudh pi kar, net per baitha karo... jara dhayan se parro kisi payare se member ne, mujhe sardi ki dhoop per, khumar-e-ishaq main likhne ko kaha hai... so uski farmaish per, maine yah thread open kar ke, khud kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai!!!


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«Reply #12 on: January 01, 2009, 12:03:49 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 31, 2008, 11:56:23 PM

Khumar-e-Ishaq main
sardi ki dhoop main
yah kaya ho gaya
khumar kyun so gaya

dard ke sath main
baat he baat main
kyun yah likh gaye
bhai mere app Khumar main


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«Reply #13 on: January 01, 2009, 12:12:02 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 01, 2009, 12:01:07 AM

Sorry Sorry Sorry Didi,.
Maaf Kardo,.
Maine Dinner Bhi Nahi Kiya,.
Bhooka Hoon,.
Padha Kuch Tha, Samajh Mein Kuch Aaya,.
Magar Sahayaari Bohat Achchi Lagi,.


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«Reply #14 on: January 01, 2009, 12:16:11 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 01, 2009, 12:03:49 AM

Khumar-e-Ishaq main
sardi ki dhoop main
yah kaya ho gaya
khumar kyun so gaya

dard ke sath main
baat he baat main
kyun yah likh gaye
bhai mere app Khumar main

Khumaar Mujhe Achcha Nahi Lagta "Didi,.
Pyaar Ka Naam Bhi Sachcha Nahi Lagta "Didi,.

Bohat Kam Umar Mein Khaai Hai Chot Dil Pe,.
Isliye Dard Lekar Aa Jaata Hoon Har Mehfil Pe,.

Ab Dil Mein Mere Khumaar Hi Na Raha,.
Dard Bhargaya Abto, Pyaar Hi Na Raha,.

____________________________-Jaanasheen-


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