SHAKOON:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

NETRAPAL

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Skoon saa ayaa hai dil me
Kisee ke darde-dil ko dekhkar
Wo bhee to muskaraye the
Darde-dil hamaaraa dekh kar

Aaj dikhaate hai ansoo jamaane ko wo
Kal jo honto se muskarate the
ham to rote the darde dil se
wo kahkahe lagte the

kal tak jalta the mai bhee
Aaj sakoon sa ayaa hai dil me
Unke jakhmo ko dekh kar

Ghayal hai wo, jakham gahara wo khaye hai
Jakhm apnaa dikhane ko hame wo aye hai
Ham bhee lagate hai marham
Beete hooe kal ko bhool kar

muskarate thaa mai bhee kabhee
unke darde-dil ko dekh kar...
udaas ho gaya hoo mai ab
unke jakhmo dekh kar......

Netra…..


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k.shael

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2008, 11:16:24 AM »

NICE CREATION NETRAPAL JI,
GOOD WORK Applause

BY. K.SHAEL

AAJ UNKE JHAKHAM JO DEKHE HAMNE
TO AANKH BHAR AAYI,
BHOOLI BISRI SI HAME APNI PURANI
KAHANI YAAD AAYI,
BEETHE THE HAM BHI U HI CHOT KHAYE
AUR UNKE CHEHRE PAR THI MUSKAN TAB AAYI
PAR AAJ JANE KYUN UNKE JHAKHAM DEKHKAR
MERI AANKH BHAR AAYI....


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punam

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2008, 12:23:00 PM »

wah Netra ji bahot khoob..bahot hi acha likha aap ne...
k.shael ji bahot acha likhe ho aap bhi....

Humare aansoo dekh unka dard aur na badhe
hum dard dil me daba ke unki khaatir muskurate rahe
hum soche humen muskurate dekh unko sukoon mile
unko laga unke ghav dekh hum muskura rahe..

hum apne zakhmon par kabhi na roye
unke ghav dekh chhup chhup ke rote rahe..
unki salamati ke liye dua karte rahe
unko laga hum dekh unka haal kuch na bole...

humare dil ka haal woh kya jaane
unka haal dekh hum kaise sukoon se rahen
andar hi andar hum ghoot.te rahe
unhen laga hum unki parvah karne se rahe...


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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2008, 01:16:40 PM »

bahoot khoob netrapal ji,k.sheel ji aur poonam ji,
shuru ki kuch lines padane ke baad mujhe rafi sahab ka gaya hua ek gaana yaad aa gaya, jiske bol kuch yun hai..
mere dushman too meri dosti ko tarse,,
mujhe gum dene waale too khushi ko tarse...

tu phool bane patjhad ka..
tujhpe bahar na aye kabhi,
..aage mujhe yaad nahi aa raha..


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2008, 03:31:52 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on May 26, 2008, 10:37:44 AM

Skoon saa ayaa hai dil me
Kisee ke darde-dil ko dekhkar
Wo bhee to muskaraye the
Hamare darde-dil ko dekh kar

Aaj dikhaate hai ansoo jamaane ko wo
Kal jo honto se muskarate the
Hamare jakhmo ko dekh kar
Aaj sakoon sa ayaa hai dil me
Unke ansooo ko dekhkar

Ghayal hai wo, jakham gahara wo khaye hai
Jakhm apnaa dikhane ko hame wo aye hai
Ham bhee lagate hai marham
Beete hooe kal ko bhool kar
muskarate thaa mai bhee kabhee
unke darde-dil ko dekh kar...
udaas ho gaya hoo mai ab
unke jakhmo dekh kar......

Netra…..

good creation netra pal ji
and nice reply you k.shael and punam ji

kaasha aisa hota ki unka gam hamein mil gaya hota
ham khush hain ye unko waham na hota
gar hoti sachi mohobbat unki to wo samajh paate
ki dekh apne dilbar k aankhon mei aansu ashk chupana itna aasan nahi hota


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syednaami

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2008, 01:29:04 AM »

NETRAPAL Saahib, k.shael aur Punam Saahiba,
Buhat badhiya, buhat achha likha sab shayaron ne, mahfil ko rangeen bana diya, wah wah....


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NETRAPAL

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2008, 06:43:01 PM »

very very thaks k shaeel, bearar ji, syednaami, honey ji, for reply
and poonam ji nice reply


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NETRAPAL

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2008, 06:46:32 PM »

Quote from: punam on May 26, 2008, 12:23:00 PM

n jane aa gaye kab wo
jajbaatee hogaye kab wo
ham to bewafa kah gaye the jinhe
chupke se n jane kya kah gaye wo

netraa.


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Sonia01

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2008, 06:48:37 PM »

Netra jee bahut accha likha hai aapne

Punam tum b bahut accha likhi ho


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NETRAPAL

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2008, 06:50:06 PM »

Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on May 26, 2008, 03:31:52 PM

baoot khoob bhawna ji

netra..


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honeyrose

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Re: SHAKOON

«Reply #10 on: May 27, 2008, 06:53:09 PM »

Netrapal ji aur dosto ney bohat acha likha hai.. Usual Smile


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