Sirrf ek...

by brokenbyluv on February 15, 2010, 07:12:27 PM
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Hello dosto..waise tou main ye nazam pehle yahan likh chuki hu per aaj ise thoda edit karke yahan post kar rhi hu..ummeed karti hu aap sab ko pasand aayegi...


Ek kadam jo vo badha de..
tou tham lu main use..

ek shabd jo vo keh de..
tou maan lu main use..

ek khayal jo vo soch le..
tou naam du main use..

ek khuab jo vo dekh le,
tou anjaam du main use..

ek lafz jo vo likh de,
tou kalaam du main use..

ek rishta jo vo jod de..
tou apni har shaam du main use......
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2010, 07:14:19 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji Nice And Excellent Creation ApplauseApplause
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2010, 07:14:38 PM »
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Bahut Ache..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2010, 07:16:25 PM »
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thnx alot rishi ji n khuaish ji...
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2010, 07:43:13 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2010, 08:42:58 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI....

WO EK KADAM JO AAGE BADE
APNA JANAM UNKE HAWALE KARDE
WO THAM LE JO MERA HAATH
JEEVAN BAR NA CHODE UNKA SAATH..


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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2010, 08:48:45 PM »
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thnx amar ji n cara ji.. notworthy

cara ji very nice lines... Applause Applause


Har kadam chalti sans k sath badhta hai,
uske liye ek alag hi jazbaat hai dil mein,
keh de tou mar jau shauk se main..
tham le tou apna lu use bhari mehfil mein......
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2010, 09:14:46 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI.....

HAR SANS TERI CHALTI USKE AUR BADTI HAI
TERI NAZREN  USKO MILNE KO TARASTI HAI
AAJAAYE JO TERE HAATHON ME KABHI WOH
JAANE NA DE APNE  ZINDAGI SE KABHI USKO..
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2010, 11:50:31 PM »
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thnx cara ji...apne acha likha hai per thodi rhyming ki prob hai last line mein..check kijiyega u can write it properly..



Thak gyi hu iss haal mein rehte hue,
ek baar use chhu lu phir koi gila na rahe,
agar vo wakayi mein merra hai,
tou mil jaye mujhe warna usse koi silsila na rahe......
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2010, 01:44:57 AM »
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thnx alot shihab ji...
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«Reply #10 on: February 16, 2010, 03:25:10 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Geet ji n Cara ji,very touching and lovely creation.excellent.hats off
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«Reply #11 on: February 16, 2010, 11:03:49 AM »
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Amazing, mindblowing poem likhi hai BBL ji. Bahut achhi lagi, mazaa aa gaya.
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«Reply #12 on: February 16, 2010, 11:26:50 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI   BROKENBYLUV JI.....

HAR SANS TERI CHALTI USKE AUR BADTI HAI
TERI NAZREN  USKO MILNE KO TARASTI HAI
AAJAAYE JO TERE HAATHON ME KABHI WOH
JAANE NA DE APNE  ZINDAGI SE KABHI USKO..
thanks  geet ji mistake batane ke liye...
me last line sudarleta hun....


HAR SANS TERI CHALTI USKE AUR BADTI HAI
TERI NAZREN USKO MILNE KO TARASTI HAI
AAJAAYE JO TERE HAATHON ME KABHI WOH
JAANE NA PAYE TERE ZINDAGI SE KABHI WOH..
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«Reply #13 on: February 16, 2010, 11:35:39 AM »
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thnx cara ji...apne acha likha hai per thodi rhyming ki prob hai last line mein..check kijiyega u can write it properly..



Thak gyi hu iss haal mein rehte hue,
ek baar use chhu lu phir koi gila na rahe,
agar vo wakayi mein merra hai,
tou mil jaye mujhe warna usse koi silsila na rahe......
KYA BAAT HAI  GEET JI......


KABTAK TU RAHE PAYENGI YUN IS HAAL MEIN
USEY CHUNE KI BHI TAMANNA HAI TERE DIL MEIN
PHIR KYUN NAHI BADATI HAI USKI OUR EK KADAM
WO BHI KHADA HAI DOOBNE KO TERI CHAHAT MEIN..
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2010, 11:57:37 AM »
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Hello dosto..waise tou main ye nazam pehle yahan likh chuki hu per aaj ise thoda edit karke yahan post kar rhi hu..ummeed karti hu aap sab ko pasand aayegi...


Ek kadam jo vo badha de..
tou tham lu main use..

ek shabd jo vo keh de..
tou maan lu main use..

ek khayal jo vo soch le..
tou naam du main use..

ek khuab jo vo dekh le,
tou anjaam du main use..

ek lafz jo vo likh de,
tou kalaam du main use..

ek rishta jo vo jod de..
tou apni har shaam du main use......


Bahut khoob Geet Ji
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