soch.............

by ranjana on May 06, 2006, 03:28:53 AM
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mrkotians
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«Reply #15 on: May 11, 2006, 08:15:56 AM »
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very good one ranjana...

teri aagaman aisi lagti hain
ke aasmaan mein baadal hoti hain

teri baatein aisi lagti hain
ke barsaat shuru hoti hain

teri nirgaman aisi lagti hain
ke barsaat rukh jaati hain

us ke baad...
us yaadein kuch aisi rehti hain
ke jaise baarish ke baad bhi ped se boonde girti hain...
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«Reply #16 on: May 11, 2006, 08:22:24 AM »
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very good one ranjana...

teri aagaman aisi lagti hain
ke aasmaan mein baadal hoti hain

teri baatein aisi lagti hain
ke barsaat shuru hoti hain

teri nirgaman aisi lagti hain
ke barsaat rukh jaati hain

us ke baad...
us yaadein kuch aisi rehti hain
ke jaise baarish ke baad bhi ped se boonde girti hain...


bahut khub MK JI .......bahut  aacha likhte hai aap................
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ranjana
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«Reply #17 on: May 11, 2006, 08:28:23 AM »
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dekhiye barish per maine bhi kabhi kuch likha tha , aapko kaisa lagata hai .....dekhe .........

sawan ki pahle foohaaren aur tum
chalati yah thandi hawaey aur tum....
dono jaise tan man ko bheego jaate hain....
ek meethi si chubhan aur ek thandak si dil ko de jate hain....

par  jasie barish apne jaane ke baad nami chor jati hai.
ussi taraha  tum apni baahon mein samat kar .........
apne hone ka ehasas de kar..........
meri aankho mein nami de jate ho...........
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mrkotians
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«Reply #18 on: May 11, 2006, 08:37:41 AM »
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:D  :D bahut hi khoobsoorat....

janm janmon ki anubandh hain
hriday hridayon ke premanubandh hain

jaise ananth prakruthi ki nazaakat
jaise lavanyavathiyon ki shararat
jaise ganga aur jamuna ke sangam...

janm...
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ranjana
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«Reply #19 on: May 12, 2006, 12:53:02 AM »
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aaj mast pawan bhi cher gayi aanchal mera
man bhi toh ho utha hai chanchal mera
tum aaye toh pawan kah rahi hai kuch  hans ke
par dil puchta hai ki tum gaye kahan they is man mein bas ke............
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mrkotians
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«Reply #20 on: May 12, 2006, 01:20:40 AM »
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hmmm.. good ... good.. ranjana...

thand pawan ke jaise main jhoolte aayi
tujhse preet se milne ke liye
o jaanam... o jaanam...
aaja tu bhi mujh se milne...

tumhe kahin bhi dekh na paye... aur
yeh jaan tumhe bulaate jaye...
akelapan main mehsus kiya
kyon tu aise door chale gaya...

kyon aise darrte ho aur
kise dhoond rahi ho, dekho
in aankhon mein jhank kar
teri hi pratibimb hain,
khud ko dekh lo mujh mein...

thand pawan ke jaise
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ranjana
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«Reply #21 on: May 12, 2006, 03:50:09 AM »
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pyar ki maye pee kar bahke yah dil mera
teri chahat ke rango se sajne laga haiab tan mera
mehaki hui si hai pawan sajan ab toh aa jao
aas lagaye bethi hun sajan ab toh jahalk dikha jao
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bhavin rathod
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«Reply #22 on: July 30, 2009, 10:00:11 AM »
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kabhee-kabhee main sochti hoon ki,

main jo kavitaa likhti hoon,

kya tum ise padhte bhi hoge?

jitna yaad main tumhe karti hoon,

kya utna yaad tum bhi mujhe karte hoge?

inme chhipe mere bhavo ko,

kya tum bhi samjh paate hoge,?

kya inhe pad kar koi bhav tumhare dil main bhi aata hoga,?

kya us samaye tumhara dil mujhe apni baahon main,

lene ko machal jata hoga..............?

mein aksar apni kalpana main,

tumhe inhe padta paati hoon,

kabhi muskrahat,kabhi pyaar, kabhee soch ke bhav

tumhare chehre par dekh aati hoon,

aur tumhare yahi bhav jaise mere dil ko pulkit kar jate hain,

mere ander chipe bhavon ko ,pyar ko ek nayi,

kavitaa ka rup de jate hain.......

tum tak meri baat pahuchane ka .

ek sandesh ban jate hain.......


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ranjana
waah mujhe tumhari kavita bahot pasand aayi . in me sach me me tumhe bahot yaad karta hu .
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«Reply #23 on: July 30, 2009, 10:02:19 AM »
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waah mujhe tumhari kavita bahot pasand aayi . in me sach me me tumhe bahot yaad karta hu .
me tum se baat karna chahta hu . kya tumhara koi e-id he to mujhe pls send kar dena ok .
mera id he - bhavin.rrthd@yahoo.in
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«Reply #24 on: August 01, 2009, 08:35:01 AM »
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RANJNA JI AAPKI YE KAVITA DIL KE HAR AHSAS KO JAGA DENE WALI H .TARIF KARNA CHAHTA HU PAR SABD NAHI MIL RAHE.
VERY GOOD POST.
OMPRAKASH
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