soch.............

by ranjana on May 06, 2006, 03:28:53 AM
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kabhee-kabhee main sochti hoon ki,

main jo kavitaa likhti hoon,

kya tum ise padhte bhi hoge?

jitna yaad main tumhe karti hoon,

kya utna yaad tum bhi mujhe karte hoge?

inme chhipe mere bhavo ko,

kya tum bhi samjh paate hoge,?

kya inhe pad kar koi bhav tumhare dil main bhi aata hoga,?

kya us samaye tumhara dil mujhe apni baahon main,

lene ko machal jata hoga..............?

mein aksar apni kalpana main,

tumhe inhe padta paati hoon,

kabhi muskrahat,kabhi pyaar, kabhee soch ke bhav

tumhare chehre par dekh aati hoon,

aur tumhare yahi bhav jaise mere dil ko pulkit kar jate hain,

mere ander chipe bhavon ko ,pyar ko ek nayi,

kavitaa ka rup de jate hain.......

tum tak meri baat pahuchane ka .

ek sandesh ban jate hain.......


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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2006, 03:53:48 AM »
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Good One Ranjana...
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2006, 04:19:52 AM »
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Behaad Khoobsurat, wah bahut hii saadgi hai aapke lavzon mein!! Thnx for writing with us Ranjana!


Lavz do char kabhie mai likhta hoon
aaur likhtey ho tum bhi kabhie kabhie

mera hijer sataata hai tumhein
tadpata hai tumhein, aaisa lagaa mujhe abhie abhie

ye dil ke bol, ye bhavoon ki baatein
ye ehsaas anmol, aaur ye sooni raatein
ye sabb jabb kartein hain jabb mulakatein
fhir saari fiza mein hoti hai, terii merii baatein!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2006, 04:34:24 AM »
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bahoot khoob ranju and neer!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2006, 04:48:44 AM »
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Quote from: "Aryaan"
Good One Ranjana...


shukriya Aryaan.......

ranju
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2006, 04:49:52 AM »
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Behaad Khoobsurat, wah bahut hii saadgi hai aapke lavzon mein!! Thnx for writing with us Ranjana!


Lavz do char kabhie mai likhta hoon
aaur likhtey ho tum bhi kabhie kabhie

mera hijer sataata hai tumhein
tadpata hai tumhein, aaisa lagaa mujhe abhie abhie

ye dil ke bol, ye bhavoon ki baatein
ye ehsaas anmol, aaur ye sooni raatein
ye sabb jabb kartein hain jabb mulakatein
fhir saari fiza mein hoti hai, terii merii baatein!!


very beautiful neer ...........bahut khub likha aapne.........

with best wishes

ranju
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2006, 04:51:20 AM »
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bahoot khoob ranju and neer!!


thanks Pooja........

with best wishes

ranju
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2006, 05:02:28 AM »
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kabhee-kabhee main sochti hoon ki,

main jo kavitaa likhti hoon,

kya tum ise padhte bhi hoge?

jitna yaad main tumhe karti hoon,

kya utna yaad tum bhi mujhe karte hoge?

inme chhipe mere bhavo ko,

kya tum bhi samjh paate hoge,?

kya inhe pad kar koi bhav tumhare dil main bhi aata hoga,?

kya us samaye tumhara dil mujhe apni baahon main,

lene ko machal jata hoga..............?

mein aksar apni kalpana main,

tumhe inhe padta paati hoon,

kabhi muskrahat,kabhi pyaar, kabhee soch ke bhav

tumhare chehre par dekh aati hoon,

aur tumhare yahi bhav jaise mere dil ko pulkit kar jate hain,

mere ander chipe bhavon ko ,pyar ko ek nayi,

kavitaa ka rup de jate hain.......

tum tak meri baat pahuchane ka .

ek sandesh ban jate hain.......


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ranjana


ranju

Ek ek lavaz tera utar jata hai dil mai
bas jata hai saanso mai
bahene lagta hai ban ke khoon meri ragoo mai.
aur tum puchti ho kaya mai tumhe phadta hun??
kaash tum likhti raho aur mai yunhi phdata rahu..
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2006, 05:04:03 AM »
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nice one neer very good
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2006, 05:15:04 AM »
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kabhee-kabhee main sochti hoon ki,

main jo kavitaa likhti hoon,

kya tum ise padhte bhi hoge?

jitna yaad main tumhe karti hoon,

kya utna yaad tum bhi mujhe karte hoge?

inme chhipe mere bhavo ko,

kya tum bhi samjh paate hoge,?

kya inhe pad kar koi bhav tumhare dil main bhi aata hoga,?

kya us samaye tumhara dil mujhe apni baahon main,

lene ko machal jata hoga..............?

mein aksar apni kalpana main,

tumhe inhe padta paati hoon,

kabhi muskrahat,kabhi pyaar, kabhee soch ke bhav

tumhare chehre par dekh aati hoon,

aur tumhare yahi bhav jaise mere dil ko pulkit kar jate hain,

mere ander chipe bhavon ko ,pyar ko ek nayi,

kavitaa ka rup de jate hain.......

tum tak meri baat pahuchane ka .

ek sandesh ban jate hain.......


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ranjana


ranju

Ek ek lavaz tera utar jata hai dil mai
bas jata hai saanso mai
bahene lagta hai ban ke khoon meri ragoo mai.
aur tum puchti ho kaya mai tumhe phadta hun??
kaash tum likhti raho aur mai yunhi phdata rahu..


 :oops: shukriya vikas................nice.......... :oops:

tere padne ki ahahat se lavaz mere machal se jate hain.....
ek madhosi sa alam hai ,aur dil ke pamaane chalk  se jate hain.
shabado mein dhal kar yah prem geet ek nayi raha dikha jate hain...........
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«Reply #10 on: May 06, 2006, 05:21:00 AM »
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good one ranju
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2006, 06:14:32 AM »
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shukriya pooja.......
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2006, 06:45:10 AM »
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NIce Vikas bhai and Ranju Jee!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2006, 07:07:44 AM »
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shukria neer  Usual Smile
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neer bahi shukriya

kuch aap bhi likhiye .........
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