tarsta chod aaya hun ... anmol arora

by anmolarora on January 25, 2016, 02:04:26 PM
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Hum Pyar ki khubsu ko mahkta chod  aaya hun
Is Dil ki nanhi si chidya ko chahkta chod  aaya hun
Mujhe apni chati se tu laga layna e bharat maa
Mein apni maa ko tarsta chod  aaya hun
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2016, 09:29:39 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob Anmol Jee. First line mein pehlaa lafaz Hum, Main honaa chaahiye. Correct way to write it is Hum chorhh aaye hai yaa Main chorhh aayaa hoon.

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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2016, 09:55:53 AM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on January 25, 2016, 02:04:26 PM
Hum Pyar ki khubsu ko mahkta chod  aaya hun
Is Dil ki nanhi si chidya ko chahkta chod  aaya hun
Mujhe apni chati se tu laga layna e bharat maa
Mein apni maa ko tarsta chod  aaya hun


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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2016, 11:49:42 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2016, 02:24:19 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob Anmol Jee. First line mein pehlaa lafaz Hum, Main honaa chaahiye. Correct way to write it is Hum chorhh aaye hai yaa Main chorhh aayaa hoon.

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Quote from: Shikha sanghvi on January 26, 2016, 11:49:42 AM
Very nice bhai
tah dil se sukriya sis
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