----- /// Tasveer Teri Banaate Hain Mitaate Hain /// -----

by klaskar on August 14, 2010, 01:49:53 AM
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ye rishta hai kaisa tujhse, hai kaisi bekaraari,
na kuch keh paate hain, na chup reh paate hain,
haalat hai apni aisi, kya tujhko hum bataayen,
shaam sawere tere khyaal me doobe hum rehte hain,
kore kisi kaagaz pe kai rang hum lagaate hain,
kaagaz pe tasveer teri banaate hain mitaate hain,


ye kismat hai apni, ya khuda ki hai khudaai,
kuch pal tu milti hai, fir barson ki judaai,
milte hain tujhse , hum baatein karte hain,
khushiyaan hain jeewan me, jabse tu hai aayi,
haathon se apne hum kalam apni chalaate hain,
hatheli pe naam tera likhte hain mitaate hain,


tasveer teri hamaare dil me basi hai,
usko hi dekh ke to hum ab jeete hain,
kismat me tu hai hamaare, hum khud se ye kehte hain,
par kho ke teri aankhon me, hum bas chup ho jaate hain,
kaagaz pe tasveer teri banaate hain mitaate hain,
hatheli pe naam tera likhte hain mitaate hain...


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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 08:23:41 AM »
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BHTTTTTTTTTT HI PYARI POEM HAI YE AAPKI....
DIL SE LIKHI HUI...FEELINGS SE BHARPUUR..
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 10:03:30 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji.... dil se shukriya ada karta hoon main aapka.... aap bhi kuch likhte to achcha lagta...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 10:06:00 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji.... dil se shukriya ada karta hoon main aapka.... aap bhi kuch likhte to achcha lagta...!!!

likhna to chahti thi
par likh nahin pai...
kuch waqt ki kami kuch shabdon ki...
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 10:11:39 AM »
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hmmmm.... thik hai ji... jab waqt aur shabd mil jaayen jawaab de dijiyega...!!!

likhna to chahti thi
par likh nahin pai...
kuch waqt ki kami kuch shabdon ki...

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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 10:15:05 AM »
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ok chalo try karte hain abhi hi kuch likhne ki ..ok
 achcha na ho tab bhi achcha hi kehna padega aur taaliyan bhi bajani padegi ..bolo manzur...
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2010, 10:19:15 AM »
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bilkul manzoor hai ji.... aap likhenge humko wo pasand aa hi jaayegi... no doubt at all...!!!

ok chalo try karte hain abhi hi kuch likhne ki ..ok
 achcha na ho tab bhi achcha hi kehna padega aur taaliyan bhi bajani padegi ..bolo manzur...

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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2010, 10:28:57 AM »
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ok to lo ji
padho hamari daastaan.....

Rangon se sajakar ek kore kagaz ko
Baithe jab yunhi hum use nihaarte
Na jane kaise unme hume tum dikhai diye
Hamari taraf dekh haule se muskurate

Hadbadakar humne nazar hata li tab
Fir se ek bar nazar dali uss tasveer par jab
Fir wahi saanwli saloni surat nazar aai
Han tum hi the wo mujhe dekh muskurate

Ghabrakar hume wo tasveer almari me ja chhupai
Koi dekh na le jaan na le hamare dil ka raaz
Bas yahi sochkar hum use rahe kai din chhupate
Lekin aaj fir anayaas hi aagye aap saamne
Usi shararti andaz me mujhe dekh muskurate

Hayeee..ab kya karun main soch me pad gai
Kuch sharmai kuch apni chunri me hi ulajh gai
Wo dhundhte hue aagaye hamare kamre tak
Aur uss chhupi hui tasveeer pe nazar unki pad gai
Hum bas dekhte hi reh gaye sharmo haya se sakuchate

Hath me le jab wo puche k ye kiski tasveer hai
Hum sirf keh gay ek khwaab hai jisme rang kai hain
Unhone bhi apni dairy se meri dulhan si saji tasveer nikali
Aur usi shararti andaaz me dekhte rahe mujhe muskurate...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2010, 11:18:32 AM »
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bahut hi pyaari daastan hai aapki saahibaaan... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne....!!!

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taaliyaan hi taaliyaan... agar kam lage to kahiye kuch aur bhej denge...!!!


haan ye yaadon ke rang se bani tasveerein hain,
kuch meri baatein hain, kuch tumhaari yaadein hai,
kho ke kabhi unme is tarah doob jaata hoon main,
kya kahun wo de jaati kitni saugaatein hain,
wo tuhmaaraa muskurake saamne se guzarna,
aur aisi hi kuch haseen meethi yaadein hain,


kaagaz pe to bante bante ab tak na ban saki,
tumhaari wo tasveer maine apne dil me banaayi hai,
chaah ke bhi koi mita na sakega ye tasveer tumhaari,
kisi syaahi se nahi ye maine apni chahat se banayi hai,
tumhaara khayaal hi mere dil me gudgudi kar jaati hai,
aur aise hi kuch khoobsurat haseen baatein hain,


wo aankhon me tumhaare kaajal ka jo rang hai,
wo tumhaare hothon pe gulaab ka jo rang hai,
tumhaare maathe ki safed bindi bahut pyaari hai,
aur tumhaare chehre ka jo pyaara rang hai,
haan inhi rangon se banayi tumhaari tasveer maine,
aur usi tasveer se judi ab meri saanse hain,

aur aise hi kuch khoobsurat haseen baatein hain,
aur aisi hi kuch haseen meethi yaadein hain....



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«Reply #9 on: August 15, 2010, 11:34:41 AM »
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aapki ittnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiiii saariiiiiiiiiiiii taaliyon k liye aapka tahee dil se shukriya klaskar ji.....

aur aapki iss poem k liye hats off ji.......
kya khub likha hai aapne....kuch udti hui yadon ko jhat se samet ke kalm me utaar liya aapne.......waahhhhhh.......
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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2010, 12:02:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... bas yahi yaadein hi to hain jo humein ateet se jode rakhti hai.. agar ye yaadein na ho to shayad hum kuch likh hi naa paayein... shukriya Kasak ji....!!!

baatein bhool jaati hain,
yaadein yaad aati hain,
ye yaadein kisi dil-o-jaani ke,
chale jaane ke baad aati hain...
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«Reply #11 on: August 15, 2010, 12:08:07 PM »
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yaadon k afsaane hain
yaadon k sau bahane hain
har ek rang hai yaadon ka
kai apne guzre zamane hain
inhi yaadon k saaye me
hum jiiye jate hain
paana unhe mushkil hi sahi
yaadon se dil behlaye jate hain
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«Reply #12 on: August 15, 2010, 12:10:07 PM »
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in yaadon ko hum rok kahaan paate hain,
inke aa jaane se hum tok kahaan paate hain,

ye jab chaahe bekhauff chale aate hain,
kabhi kabhi ye yaadein humein tadpa jaate hain...
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«Reply #13 on: August 15, 2010, 12:12:40 PM »
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ye yadein jab tadpati hain
dil me ek sukun sa hota hai

koi to hai itna kareeb hamare
jo sath hamare rota hai
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«Reply #14 on: August 15, 2010, 12:21:47 PM »
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haan ye yaadein khoobsurat hoti hain,
saath hi hansti hain, saath roti hain,

jab koi apna tanha chhod jaata hai,
ye yaadein hi tab saath hoti hain...
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