Ter Baahaen Meri Baahon Se Sawarne Aaeen.......AD

by anjaan dharkan on January 18, 2010, 05:20:45 AM
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Ye Nazm Yunhi Behte Behte Ayi... Pata nai Ahchchi Hai K Nai, Lekin Dil Ki Baat Lafzon Me Bayaan Ki Hai... Pasand Aaye Tho Daath Dijiyega, Na Pasand Aaye, tho Mushwura De Dijiyega~~~


Raat k afsaano me pihglee thi, andheron ka tuhje chanda samhaj liya tha...
Tanha thi uss raat b har raat ki tarhan "Sidraah", takye ko tera kandha samhaj liya tha.

Tum door ho k bhi paas lage, mere aanchal k saaye me, "Azeem", k humne tuhje chuhpaa liya tha...
Na dehk payi dunya k kahan ho gaye tum, meri wafa ka saath tumne b iss qadar nibhaa liya tha.

Khayaalon me kareeb paane lagi main tuhjko, haqeeqa me tho chaandini saath thi...
Aankeh band ya kuhlli, tum saamne the, haan ye baat aur thi.

Na poohcho yaaron, kaise kaati gahdriyaan raat ki gin gin "Sidraah" ne,
K aenge milne, kaha tha humko humaare piya ne.

Tab b na jaane, kitne gahnto baad aye wo dilruba se milne,
Jo jhuk rahi thi neendiya se palkaen, aachanak chamak uhtti un ki deed se kihlne.

Tu aya aur aasman se chanda hata, sawera kihdrki se aane laga...
K jab chaand tha meri nazron k aage, tho aasmaan se usska ehsaas jaane laga.

Mera din huwa shuru suraaj ki shuhwayaen* b tadrap k tumse mulaqaat karne aaaeen,
Aaye hain "Azeem" apni dulhan ko jagaane, ye nazaara apni b palkon me bharne aaeen.

Haan, khafa the hum intizaar kar kar k tera tuhjse, jaaneman, magar,
Bhool gaye gille shikwe, jab teri baahaen meri baahon k sahaare se sawarne aaen~~~~


*kirne.... the sun's rays
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2010, 07:42:24 AM »
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Mindblowing creation Sidraa ji,bahut hi achi tarah se likhi aapne.mujhe bahut pasand aayi.great work dear.keep it up. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2010, 08:08:11 AM »
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thx madhu ji
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2010, 05:40:33 PM »
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Nice Sister
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2010, 07:04:21 PM »
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thx rishi bhai
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2010, 02:31:58 PM »
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Mashallah Kya Baat Hai,.

Jab baithe Baithe Likha Hai AAPNE Aur Usme Itna Khumaar To Doobkar Likhte To Kya Manzar Hota,.

Behad Kamaal Ki Nazm Hai,.

KHumar e Ishq Ki,.

Love You Too Ji,.

Happy Anniversary
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2010, 07:32:26 PM »
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Mashallah Kya Baat Hai,.

Jab baithe Baithe Likha Hai AAPNE Aur Usme Itna Khumaar To Doobkar Likhte To Kya Manzar Hota,.

Behad Kamaal Ki Nazm Hai,.

KHumar e Ishq Ki,.

Love You Too Ji,.

Happy Anniversary

khumaar me hum aur aap mil k lihkkaenge, tho lafz aur b umda lagaenge ji...
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2010, 10:34:50 AM »
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Oye Hoye.. Kya Baat hai Sidraah Sis.. Ehasaason ko Bakhoobi Lafzon Me Utaara Hai.. Ek ek Lafz Khubsoorati se Piroya Hai.. Bahut Pasand aaye Mujhe tumhari Yeh Nazm.. Applause Applause

Ek Mashwara Hai... Gaur Farmaaiyega :- Yunhi hi Mohabbat Karti Raho aur Itna Khubsoorat Likhti raho.. hehehe


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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2010, 06:10:22 PM »
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Oye Hoye.. Kya Baat hai Sidraah Sis.. Ehasaason ko Bakhoobi Lafzon Me Utaara Hai.. Ek ek Lafz Khubsoorati se Piroya Hai.. Bahut Pasand aaye Mujhe tumhari Yeh Nazm.. Applause Applause

Ek Mashwara Hai... Gaur Farmaaiyega :- Yunhi hi Mohabbat Karti Raho aur Itna Khubsoorat Likhti raho.. hehehe


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shukriya bhaijaan!

dua karte rahaen
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