tera daaman dhoodhta rahta hai

by rita mal on July 05, 2013, 08:41:46 PM
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Raat gaye aksar mera pahlu tera daaman dhoodhta rahta hai
Ke tu is karwat bhi jagaata hai, us karwat bhi jagaata hai

Aankhen band karke bhi kuch pareshaan se rahte hein aajkal
Ke Tera ek khwaab meri uneendii aankhon mein samaata hai

Dil ki dhadkane tez hoti hein bewajah jaane kyun sote sote,
Mere zahan mein tera khayaal askar apna ghar banaata hai

Aksar machal jaati hein baahen meri tere aagosh me aane ko
Ke teri un baazuon se mera kai janamon purana ik naata hai

Tum aksar mujhe bewajaah hi nikaal dete ho apni yaadon se
Tum hi kaho bhala koi apne aap se khud ko yun chuaraata hai …
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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2013, 09:24:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob likha hai rita jee..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2013, 09:42:24 PM »
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bahut khoob...... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2013, 09:54:40 PM »
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 भाई वाह-वाह!!बहुत खूब
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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2013, 04:33:54 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2013, 05:41:30 AM »
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bahut khoob....dheron daad...
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2013, 01:54:44 AM »
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Rita Jee Aadaab... !


Badi achchi koshish rahi jee... khususan aapki kalaam ka matla behad umdaa aur behad gehra raha...

Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 08, 2013, 08:17:10 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah Rita ji... kyaa kehne .. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... ek dum zabardassstttt....!!!
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