tere bin tanha hun....

by punam on August 01, 2008, 08:58:22 AM
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tere bin tanha hun main
yaad tumhari bahut sataati hai
dil dhadakta hai leke naam tumhara
tum bin suna suna lagta hai
waqt kate nahin kat.ta hai...

kab aayega woh waqt
jab tum mujhse milne aaoge
kitna pyara hoga woh pal
saath jab tum mere hoge..
aaj usi waqt ka intazaar hai...

dekho tumhari chaahat ne
dil men kya shor macha rakha hai
aao suljhao yeh uljhan
ab saha nahin jata hai...
waqt kaate nahin kat.ta hai...
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«Reply #1 on: August 01, 2008, 09:16:02 AM »
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Bahut khoob... Applause
Bahut pyaara likha hai Punam...
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: August 01, 2008, 09:42:52 AM »
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Sukriya Mahiya ji....
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #3 on: August 01, 2008, 09:43:42 AM »
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Quote from: punam on August 01, 2008, 08:58:22 AM
ab saha nahin jata hai...
waqt kaate nahin kat.ta hai...

bohot hi khoob kaha punam.......  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 01, 2008, 11:23:41 AM »
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gud one ponam 
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«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2008, 11:52:14 AM »
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Quote from: punam on August 01, 2008, 08:58:22 AM
dekho tumhari chaahat ne
dil men kya shor macha rakha hai
aao suljhao yeh uljhan
ab saha nahin jata hai...
waqt kaate nahin kat.ta hai...
Bahot hi khoob Likha Hai aapne...Punam Alfaaz Bhi bahot achhe aur saaf Hai.
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«Reply #6 on: August 01, 2008, 12:29:45 PM »
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Thanx Atiq(sayyid Randeri) Bhaiya...thanx a lot..
Muhammad ji bahut bahut sukriya ....
sidushale ji thanx ...
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«Reply #7 on: August 01, 2008, 02:51:00 PM »
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bahoot hi aacha or dil se likha hai punam ji


jayada nahi bas thora sa likha hai
agar kuch galat ho to maaf ker dena


Uljhane jo dil mai hai tare,
Wo tari tadap or dil ka shor,

Jo bachani hai milne ki tare,
Or jo sunapan hai tari ranho mai,

Wakif hai KHUDA us haal se tare,
Na ho udas sirf rakh ek viswas,

Aaayege bahare jiwan mai tare,
Bas karo us pal or waqt ka intzaar......



Baadal
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«Reply #8 on: August 01, 2008, 02:53:35 PM »
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Thanx a lot Baadal ji..aur bahut hi acha likhe aap..
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2008, 09:24:52 PM »
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nice Punam and Baadal ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 06, 2009, 06:38:55 AM »
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Wah Punam ji very beautiful creation,excellent,kamaal ke likhti hai aap. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: July 06, 2009, 08:15:54 AM »
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Kya punam,itna khoobsurat,kahan se lati hai itni gahri soch,itni feelings, baap re maar dala, baha diya apni feeling ki ganga me.
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