|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
Meelo chale tere bina….
Sadiyo rahe tere bina…
Ab aa bhi ja.. tu na sata…
tanha hai hum tere bina….
ye zindagi main vaar du….
Dil-o-jaan thujh pe haar du…
Meri zindagi kya zindagi….
Hai ek saza tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
wo jo dundh thi wo chat gayi……
badri wo gam ki baras gayi…..
ye nayi subah… naya aasma…
veera.n hain sab tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
Kya naam du is aag ko ….
Dil ko jalati hai sada…
meri aarzoo meri justuju…
bekal rahe tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
|
AbhiTamrakar
Guest
|
 |
«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2011, 07:19:26 AM » |
|
woww good one priya ji...
hai sath kab talak jane
hath thame he tera hath jane
is dil me nahi koi bat jo chhupi tujhse
dil me he samandar se kaise jajbaat jane~
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
nirala
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2011, 07:49:36 AM » |
|
bahut pyara hai...
jo ishq tumhara hai..
sadiyon ka saath humara hai
hai adhoori har Manzil ..
Oooo yaara tere bina...
""
achha laga aapka khumar e ishq
daad hai ji
""
thanx
""
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Anshumali
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2011, 07:53:05 AM » |
|
Meelo chale tere bina….
Sadiyo rahe tere bina…
Ab aa bhi ja.. tu na sata…
tanha hai hum tere bina….
ye zindagi main vaar du….
Dil-o-jaan thujh pe haar du…
Meri zindagi kya zindagi….
Hai ek saza tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
wo jo dundh thi wo chat gayi……
badri wo gam ki baras gayi…..
ye nayi subah… naya aasma…
veera.n hain sab tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
Kya naam du is aag ko ….
Dil ko jalati hai sada…
meri aarzoo meri justuju…
bekal rahe tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
V ery Nice Poetry ... Priya Ji !
Very Touching ....... dil se daad !!!!!!!!  |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manjum
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2011, 11:17:18 AM » |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
adil bechain
Umda Shayar
Rau: 161
 Offline
Gender: 
Waqt Bitaya:31 days, 18 hours and 12 minutes.
Posts: 6552 Member Since: Mar 2009
|
|
|
«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2011, 12:37:02 PM » |
|
Meelo chale tere bina….
Sadiyo rahe tere bina…
Ab aa bhi ja.. tu na sata…
tanha hai hum tere bina….
ye zindagi main vaar du….
Dil-o-jaan thujh pe haar du…
Meri zindagi kya zindagi….
Hai ek saza tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
wo jo dundh thi wo chat gayi……
badri wo gam ki baras gayi…..
ye nayi subah… naya aasma…
veera.n hain sab tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
Kya naam du is aag ko ….
Dil ko jalati hai sada…
meri aarzoo meri justuju…
bekal rahe tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
bahut umda kalaam manjil ji |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
brokenbyluv
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2011, 04:55:47 PM » |
|
Bahut khoob priya ji...
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
dead heart
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2011, 11:11:36 PM » |
|
Bahaut bahaut khoob Priya di..  Khush rahiye..! |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2011, 02:48:33 PM » |
|
Wah bahut Khub Priya Ji
bahut Hi Sunder Likh Hai Aapne
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2011, 01:04:15 PM » |
|
thanx abhi ji.... & very nice lines by u...... woww good one priya ji...
hai sath kab talak jane
hath thame he tera hath jane
is dil me nahi koi bat jo chhupi tujhse
dil me he samandar se kaise jajbaat jane~
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2011, 01:05:00 PM » |
|
bht bht shukria nirala ji..... bahut pyara hai...
jo ishq tumhara hai..
sadiyon ka saath humara hai
hai adhoori har Manzil ..
Oooo yaara tere bina...
""
achha laga aapka khumar e ishq
daad hai ji
""
thanx
""
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2011, 01:05:39 PM » |
|
thanx alot anshumali ji... V ery Nice Poetry ... Priya Ji !
Very Touching ....... dil se daad !!!!!!!! |
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2011, 01:06:47 PM » |
|
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2011, 01:07:44 PM » |
|
bht bht shukria aapka shihab ji... Wah Bahut Khub Manzil e Ishq Ji...
Shad O Abada Rahiye...
~Shihab~
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
manzil-e-ishq
Guest
|
|
|
«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2011, 01:08:23 PM » |
|
thanx alot adil ji.... bahut umda kalaam manjil ji
|
|
|
|
|
Logged
|
|
|
|
|
on eTI community..
