manzil-e-ishq
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Meelo chale tere bina….
Sadiyo rahe tere bina…
Ab aa bhi ja.. tu na sata…
tanha hai hum tere bina….
ye zindagi main vaar du….
Dil-o-jaan thujh pe haar du…
Meri zindagi kya zindagi….
Hai ek saza tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
wo jo dundh thi wo chat gayi……
badri wo gam ki baras gayi…..
ye nayi subah… naya aasma…
veera.n hain sab tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
Kya naam du is aag ko ….
Dil ko jalati hai sada…
meri aarzoo meri justuju…
bekal rahe tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
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«Reply #1 on: February 19, 2011, 12:49:26 PM » |
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woww good one priya ji...
hai sath kab talak jane
hath thame he tera hath jane
is dil me nahi koi bat jo chhupi tujhse
dil me he samandar se kaise jajbaat jane~
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2011, 01:19:36 PM » |
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bahut pyara hai...
jo ishq tumhara hai..
sadiyon ka saath humara hai
hai adhoori har Manzil ..
Oooo yaara tere bina...
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achha laga aapka khumar e ishq
daad hai ji
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thanx
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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2011, 01:23:05 PM » |
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Meelo chale tere bina….
Sadiyo rahe tere bina…
Ab aa bhi ja.. tu na sata…
tanha hai hum tere bina….
ye zindagi main vaar du….
Dil-o-jaan thujh pe haar du…
Meri zindagi kya zindagi….
Hai ek saza tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
wo jo dundh thi wo chat gayi……
badri wo gam ki baras gayi…..
ye nayi subah… naya aasma…
veera.n hain sab tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
Kya naam du is aag ko ….
Dil ko jalati hai sada…
meri aarzoo meri justuju…
bekal rahe tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
V ery Nice Poetry ... Priya Ji !
Very Touching ....... dil se daad !!!!!!!!  |
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2011, 06:07:02 PM » |
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Meelo chale tere bina….
Sadiyo rahe tere bina…
Ab aa bhi ja.. tu na sata…
tanha hai hum tere bina….
ye zindagi main vaar du….
Dil-o-jaan thujh pe haar du…
Meri zindagi kya zindagi….
Hai ek saza tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
wo jo dundh thi wo chat gayi……
badri wo gam ki baras gayi…..
ye nayi subah… naya aasma…
veera.n hain sab tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
Kya naam du is aag ko ….
Dil ko jalati hai sada…
meri aarzoo meri justuju…
bekal rahe tere bina…
Meelo chale tere bina….
bahut umda kalaam manjil ji |
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Tujh sang is zindgi ko jina merra ik khuab hai...R
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2011, 10:25:47 PM » |
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Bahut khoob priya ji...
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«Reply #7 on: February 20, 2011, 04:41:36 AM » |
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Priya di..  Khush rahiye..! |
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«Reply #8 on: February 20, 2011, 08:18:33 PM » |
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Wah bahut Khub Priya Ji
bahut Hi Sunder Likh Hai Aapne
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #9 on: February 21, 2011, 06:34:15 PM » |
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thanx abhi ji.... & very nice lines by u...... woww good one priya ji...
hai sath kab talak jane
hath thame he tera hath jane
is dil me nahi koi bat jo chhupi tujhse
dil me he samandar se kaise jajbaat jane~
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«Reply #10 on: February 21, 2011, 06:35:00 PM » |
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bht bht shukria nirala ji..... bahut pyara hai...
jo ishq tumhara hai..
sadiyon ka saath humara hai
hai adhoori har Manzil ..
Oooo yaara tere bina...
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achha laga aapka khumar e ishq
daad hai ji
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thanx
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2011, 06:35:39 PM » |
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thanx alot anshumali ji... V ery Nice Poetry ... Priya Ji !
Very Touching ....... dil se daad !!!!!!!! |
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«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2011, 06:37:44 PM » |
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bht bht shukria aapka shihab ji... Wah Bahut Khub Manzil e Ishq Ji...
Shad O Abada Rahiye...
~Shihab~
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«Reply #14 on: February 21, 2011, 06:38:23 PM » |
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thanx alot adil ji.... bahut umda kalaam manjil ji
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