"Tere Ehsaason Mein" -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: February 15, 2009, 10:36:39 AM »

Welcome Angel jee


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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #16 on: February 15, 2009, 04:19:39 PM »

Its a beautiful thread....Angel, Sajid Ji...aap dono ne bohot khoobsurti se mohabbat ke is jazbe ko qalamband kiya hai !! Applause

Aaina Ji a nice contribution from you as well Applause


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Roja

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #17 on: February 15, 2009, 05:51:35 PM »

Quote from: angel4u on February 14, 2009, 06:47:42 AM

Tere Ehsaason Mein HaMein Harek Pal Muskurana Achha Laga,
Phir Unhi Muskurahaton Se Palkein Bhigona Achha Laga,

Ek Tera Mujhe Apni Aagosh Mein SaMetna Mujhe Mera Har Khwab Sacha Laga,
Hakikat Se Wakif The HuM Phir Bhi NaMuMkinse Khwaab Bunna Achha Laga...

Meri Aankhonko Palak Jhapkaye Bina Tera Dekhna Mujhe Achha Laga,
Meri Zulfonko Suljhate Suljhate Tera In Mein Ulajhna Achha Laga...

Kehne Ko Hai Akele Hai HuM Tanha Is Zindagi Ke Safar Mein,
Tere Qadmon Ka Saath Mere Soone Raaston Ko Achha Laga...

Mohabbat Ke Ehsaas Se To Ho Gaye The HuM Naaraz Kabke,
Phir Bhi Na Jane Kyon Tujhe Chahna HaMein Achha Laga

Har Shab, Seher, Har Dua Mein, Har Sajde Mein Maanga Tujhe,
Na Jaane Kyon Tera Har Ek LaMhe Pe Ikhtiyaar HaMein Achha Laga,

Rooh Tadapti Rahi Meri Har WaQt Tere Paas Aane Ki Khwahish Mein,
Teri Masoom Mohabbat Ki Tapish Mein Jalna Phir Bhi Achha Laga...

Kisi Ke Naam Ki Hogi Shayad Tune Apni Tamam Ghazlein,
Aaj Tere Alfaazon Mein Shaamil Hona Hamein Achha laga...

wah wah hasina... Bahut khoob


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Roja

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #18 on: February 15, 2009, 05:53:15 PM »

Quote from: angel4u on February 14, 2009, 07:56:47 AM

Yun Mere Iqraar Ko Apni Mohabbat Se Tera Sajana Achha Laga,
Teri Mohabbat Ki Maasomiyat Mein Mujhe Nikharna Achha Laga,

Hai Teri Hi Chahaton Ka Asar Jo Nikhar Aaya Yun Wajood Mera,
Kuch Khafa Khafa Se Aayino Ko Aaj Mera Sanwarna Achha Laga,

Dheemi Maddham Chaandni Gungunane Lagi Hai Kyon Is Tarah,
Iske Bikharte Hue Nagmon Pe Aawaz Milaana Achha Laga,

Aankhon Ki Banjar Zameen Pe The To Ashqon Ke Qaarvaan Bahut,
Inki Manzilon Pe Aaj Hamein Khwaabon Ka Pighalna Achha Laga,

Zakhm Mere Bhi The Kuch Is Tarah Bilakhte Hue Sannaton Mein,
Ab Pyaar Ke Saazon Pe Tere Har Zakhm Ko Sehlana Achha Laga,

Ashq Bhoole Teri Aankhon Ka Raasta Umr Bhar Ke Liye Sanam,
Apne Khuda Se Har Pal Har Lamha Ye Dua Maangna Achha Laga,

Chahaton Ka Ye Safar Hai Mushkil Bahut Jaante Hai Hum Phir Bhi,
Tere Is Paak Wajood Mein Meri Rooh-O-Jaan Ko Samaana Achha Laga...

Amazing.... lajawab..... superb


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chitralsony

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #19 on: February 15, 2009, 05:58:03 PM »

nice work


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Roja

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #20 on: February 15, 2009, 06:01:52 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 14, 2009, 07:27:37 AM

Tera yeh iqrare wafa yeh tera baayan achcha laga
Kaha tune yeh mere liye hoga, yeh tasav_vur bhi achcha laga

Dhalte suraj ne bhi humko jhulsa diya
Bheegna chandni me teri humko achcha laga

Koi karega humse itni wafa yeh socha na tha
Ab tera banke humko jeena achcha laga

Bohat aziz the zakhm humko jo diye waqt ne
Jane q tera zakhmo pe marham rakhna achcha laga

Jin bheegi aakho me hasee ki jhalak bhi na thi
Un aakho ko tujko hasta dekh jane q achcha laga

Yaado ki basti ujda makaan tanhayee aur andhera tha mera pata
Bewatan hoker teri galiyo me rehna achcha laga

Yu to ukta gaye the shero shayri se hum
Apni ghazlo me likhna nam tera hame achcha laga

Ise sapna kahu haqeeqat kahu fasana kahu
Tujhe sirf apna samajhna GHAYEL ko achcha laga

-Sajid Ghayel-

Wah Ghayel sb... gayal kardiya..aapne...
Aapka likha padkar accha laga...


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Roja

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #21 on: February 16, 2009, 01:58:28 AM »

Quote from: aaina on February 14, 2009, 09:32:06 AM

bhut khoob angle...................

ek guzarish-e-deedaar pe itna guroor, acha nhi lagta
aur uspe dikhain mohabbat ka suroor, acha nhi lagta

mana ke mahtaab sifat ho aur mahjabeen bhi lakin
khuch itna bhi itrana huzoor, acha nahi lagta

khud jinko wafao.n ka sabaq yaad nhi hai
wo bataei.n hamara qusoor, acha nahi lagta

behtar hai kardo tark-e-ta'alluq isi mod pe "aslam"
phir marasim ban jayaei.n naasoor, acha nahi lagta

aha.. kya baat hai aaina ji... bahut khoob... daad kabul kijiyega


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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #22 on: February 16, 2009, 03:05:57 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob
Angel aur sajid bhai,aap dono ne Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Likha Hai..
bahut acha Aaina.


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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #23 on: February 16, 2009, 09:07:00 AM »

Very Very Nice Nice Anjel & sajid ji. nice one by u aaina


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aaina

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2009, 01:18:14 PM »

thnxx so much roja, khuwaish nd sophi ji..........

bas ye huwa ke usne takalluf se baat ki
aur hamne rote rote dupattay bhigo liye

teri birhena payi ke dukh baante huway
humne khud apne paun mai kante chubho liye

palkon pe kachchi neend ka ras phailta ho jab
aise mai aankh dhoop ke rukh kaise kholiye

khushboo kahin na jaye pe israar hai bhut
aur ye bhi aarzoo ke zara zulf kholiye

tasveer jab nayi ho naya cnvas bhi ho
phir tashtari mai rang purane na gholiye(parveen shakir)


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Talat

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2009, 01:20:30 PM »

Quote from: aaina on February 16, 2009, 01:18:14 PM

Ye ghazal, aur Parveen Shakir Sahiba meri favourite rahi hain...Khaas kar pehla sher to dil ki dhadkan rok deta hai !!

Thanks for sharing Aaina Ji


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aaina

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #26 on: February 16, 2009, 01:38:10 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 16, 2009, 01:20:30 PM

Ye ghazal, aur Parveen Shakir Sahiba meri favourite rahi hain...Khaas kar pehla sher to dil ki dhadkan rok deta hai !!

Thanks for sharing Aaina Ji

ur welcome..........i like too parveen shkir saheba Allah paak unke jannat mai aala maraata ata farmaye(ammeen)
kia baat thi unki..............ek alga soch ka andaaz wow unke ek do shair yaad aa rhe hain.................................

khuli aankho mai sapna jhaankta hai
wo soya hai ke kuch kuch jaagta hai
mujhay har kayfiyaat mai kyn na samjhe
wo mere sab hawalay jaanta hai


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Roja

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #27 on: February 16, 2009, 01:38:41 PM »

Quote from: aaina on February 16, 2009, 01:18:14 PM

Bahut accha gazal aapne share ki hai aaina... Thanks for this nice stuff.


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angel4u

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #28 on: February 18, 2009, 04:31:35 PM »

Thanks all for appreciating... happy3


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angel4u

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Re: "Tere Ehsaason Mein"

«Reply #29 on: February 18, 2009, 04:34:18 PM »

Kuchh Tere Hi Ehsaason Mein Khoye The Yun Har Pal Har Lamha,
Tasavvur Mein Raha Tu, Tere Aqs Ko Bhi Kuch Yun Hi Chaha,
Chhoda Tha Jise Palkon Ki Kataron Mein Sadiyon Se Humne,
Tu Saamne Aaya Mere Jaise Mere Ek Masoom Khwaab Ki Tarah...


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